Hochgender Adler

[Beh]

Name: Hochgender Adler

Age: 22

Race: Human

Sex: Male

Hair: He has short brown hair combed straight down.

Eyes: A very dark blue.

Weight: 158lbs

Height: 5'10"

Weapon: A thin blade kept on his left boot, a short sword at his waist, and a crossbow on his back.

Armor: Chain mail for all body protection and a leather chest plate .

Strengths: Very fast and observant. Has 3 different ways to kill you. He could throw the blade on his boot at you, cut you up with his short sword, or shoot you with his crossbow. He has studied psychology and so can predict small minded peoples actions, to a certain extent of course. Has many people to help him with his assassin jobs.

Weakness: His arms, head, and legs have no protection from attacks at all. Hoch has no protection from certain magic. The magic he can dodge is things like fireballs. He can't dodge inst-spells though. Doesn't do well in areas he's never seen before.

Skills/Magic:

Super Sprint: Used only as a last resort it gives him super speed but brings him towards the point of collapse. When used it makes him as fast as a cheetah but with more endurance.

Judgment: A useful skill of Hochgender's is being able to tell if people mean him harm or not. It doesn't always work though. Can only be used every other hour.

Partial Telepathy: He can communicate with his mind but only to other people that have the ability, they know each other, both accept to talk. Is constantly in use incase of news from his informants.

Appearance: He has 2 different cloaks, a white and a black. He wears the white in daylight and the black at night. The white has trimmings the color of his eyes and the black has blood red trimmings. Has short brown hair combed down, very dark blue eyes, a few bristles on his chin, and has abnormally large canine teeth. Some people describe them as 'vampirish' when they see him. He has a thin scar going from his right eyebrow to his cheekbone. Hoch has relatively light skin.

Personality: Intelligent but hot headed. He is not frustrated often but when he does he makes some big mistakes. Has very good social skills and is extremely observant. He is serious when fighting but lighthearted when not. This will leave him open for ambush often. He is very social and so always tries to find a traveling companion. He will only kill when necessary. Is good at gathering information and learns the layouts of towns and villages quickly.

Biography: Hochgender Adler was born in the Italy. No one was sure exactly where except for his parents who are now dead. He was raised by his uncle in Ireland. His uncle knew almost everything about Hochgender's parents' killer but made it seem like he knows little about he/she/it for the sake of Hoch's childhood. The truth was revealed to Hoc when he was 18 years old. The truth was that a figure called "The Dark One" was his parent's killer. He is a very powerful serial killer with dark powers. He seems to be constantly moving around the world. When Hoch found this out he sets out on a quest to find and kill the The Dark One. Hoch found The Dark One in the Arctic. He killed The Dark One and left with only a scar stretching from his right eyebrow to his right cheekbone. He is now an assassin for hire. Hoch has many informants from all over the world that he keeps in touch with them using his Telepathy ability. He has a familiar that appears in Ireland when he visits. He only knows it from walks in the woods from his childhood. He has ,as far as he knows, no siblings. The closest things to friends he has are his informants.

Battles:
Dawn's Battle [Any One Person](Finished)
The Swiftly Turning Tides[TacheonBlack](In Progress)
Bounty: "Oblivion" (Beh, Daru, Scholar, Z) (In Progress)

[Power Shot] Hochgender Adler's Training

RPs:
Out of the Battle Arena (Everyone) (In Progress)

[insaney]

Okay, first things first. Hoch's going after the killer for revenge, correct? If so...that's just really frowned upon here (because it's really cliche). So you could just wrap up The Dark One's life and make Hoch wander around afterward, instead of constantly searching for the killer--just a suggestion, you can do whatever you want, just not the 'revenge story'

If you plan to go through with Hoch (you should, he seems to be an interesting person), I need you to expand everything; more strengths, more weaknesses. Give us a little more appearance and some more personality. His biography as well.

For your Magic/Skills section, you need to skip a line between each one. Makes it a little easier to read.
I want to know his speed when using the Super Sprint. A general idea, like...what's he able to outrun? Understand? I like the Judgment skill, it reminds me of one of my own character's abilities.

Fix those up and edit 'em in. When you're done, just post here or drop me a PM :3

[Beh]

I edited the stuff and I'd like to know: Could Hoch gain powers over time? Like he kills a guy for a wizard and then the wizrd gives him a protection spell?

[insaney]

Yes, he may

*Approved*

I'd like to suggest checking out the Battle School. It's a lot of fun, and nothing to be ashamed about or anything; I'm in there.

[Beh]

How do I sign up for a class at the Battle School?