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Damien "Raziel"
Name: Damien “Raziel” Sheridon
Nicknames: Angel of Mysteries Age: 29 Race: Homo Aetar (A more advanced form of human. After Sapien, there was Psypian, humans with any sort of psychic abilities or what was called just a Sixth Sense. It was different for each one, depending on how strong a Psyp was. After, is Aetar, with a 7th sense, a special spatial-time sense.), Angel(A being with wings created from a mix of their and a bird's blood.) Sex: Male Blood Type: AB- Place of Birth: Ares City, Mars Residency: Silver City Occupation: Agent of Opus Dei Alignment: Syndicate Picture: Finest (Imagine a slightly more chisled jaw and rounder eyes) Picture Credits: "http://heise.deviantart.com/gallery/" Hair: Fine, silky, shoulder length and raven black. It is usually tied back with a golden cord. Eyes: Very round and normal sized, they are an electric blue. Skin: Olive Colored, from the strong Greco-Roman Genes both his parents had. Other Features: A rock hard muscley body, and a perfect boxy white row of teeth. Scars/Birthmarks/Etc.: Scars of swordsman ship and gunmanship adorn his hands in various places, his wings might also be a clearly defining feature. They are black as a moonless night, shot through with streaks of silver, and fold up very close to his back. If he has a larger sized jacket on, they are hardly noticeable, although at some angles, bumps are visible. Garb: Very expensive designer suites. All have a pair of starched slacks, with the finest of leather shoes of course to match them, a silk shirt with matching tie, and a high collared jacket firmly pressed. Family & Friends: - Julia Lawrence (Mother) *Deceased* - Cameron Sheridon (Father) *Deceased* - Cassiel (Friend/Partner) -Arael (sometimes partner) - Tabris (Sometimes partner) Personality: Brutally honest almost to the point of cruelty, Raziel feels no need to sugarcoat his words. He stays silent for the most part to the point where Cassiel and he have developed a seeming telepathic link. In fact, he strikes most people as mute at first. He has killed many times in his life, and Doctors label him as a sociopath. Perhaps he is, but when it comes to Cassiel he is kind and almost loving to an extent. Yet he never feels remorse for anything he has done, for there is no need to. Her defection, and subsequent death was very tramatic. Strengths: - Perfect balance - Supernatural spatial and time sense -Very analytical and decisive -Understands people easily, due to his college education in Psychology Flaws: - He relies on feedback from all of his senses. Should one of those senses be knocked out, he runs the risk of his 7th sense being off. - His wings may tend to be rather vulnerable, and are a major attribute of his physical body. Should they be damaged, shock could be induced. -Very sensitive to smells, loud noises, extreme temperatures, pain -Extremely susceptible to claustrophobia, he fears elevators to an extreme degree especially -He has no real defense against magic -His mind is slightly weakened due to the psychosis, and recent depression. His college journey to try and understand his mind really did not aid him in trying to fix his self. -Due to the psychosis, he occasionally hallucinates, becomes obsessive over something, or just loses touch with reality completely. Just looking at the stars sometimes causes him to fly into the sky for all of the night, or the mention of italian food will cause him to spend days learning recipes he only forgets later, ignoring everything else. -If a psychotic hallucination messes with one of his senses, his 7th sense can be vastly distorted, this happens usually only when he has not taken his medication. Skills: - Extreme amount of training in the Martial Arts, of course after being instructed by the Syndicate to do so at the beginning of his training. -A powerful and fluid swordsman -Dead shot accuracy Weapons: -Sword - Gun -Telekinesis (Mild: Heaviest thing he has been able to lift was Cassiel, so about 106ish pounds a little more or less, and that was only lifting. It could be guessed he can effectively move with ease a thing of around 60 lbs.) Armor: Some of his suits have a Kevlar Weave. Equipment: -Shades with different optical modes and a COM link (night vision, heat vision ect.) Vehicle: - Street(Less Advanced World) Car - Motorcycle History: Born into a life on luxury and everything he could have ever imagined, and never wanted, was Damien. His parents, where top executives in the Trump Corporation, and lived in the Trump Tower. They had gained their wealth by being personal advisors of the Trump big dogs, using their inherited Psyp abilities to consult them on financial matters, alert them when they where being betrayed, so on and so forth. They flaunted their abilities, gaining the awe and hatred from many. Young dark haired Damien, with his eyes full of electricity and always a handsome and charming young fellow, enjoyed his early childhood and the pampering it constituted. Aside from the Trump kids, he was Lord of the Tower. Then he turned the miraculous age of five, and was enrolled into school. Immediately, the children shunned Damien, knowing that his parents where Psyps and that he might be. One gang of unruly children, tried one day to beat him up, forcing him to run up a power cable. And revealing his Aetar powers. He gained the nickname, of “Spidey” after the Comic Book hero of Spiderman, who had made a major comeback with the merger of Marvel and DC Comic book companies as the Sidekick of Batman. Kids purposely put him in situations where he would have to demonstrate his Psyp abilities. And yet, in class one day when someone asked for the time, he gave it to them to the exact second. There fore discovering another of his abilities, and something else for the cruel children to have him forcefully portray as some freak show. At the age of thirteen, he had enough of it. Through this constant mental abuse, he developed Psychosis, and Sociopathic traits. He saw his parents as the root of all his problem, so he decided to kill them. In the middle of the night, grabbing a few large kitchen knifes he crept into their room. His mother, however awoke her teal eyes shimmering with fear, and her light brown hair matted to her forehead with sweat. She had had a premonition, and screamed out for him not to. However, he just simply threw the knife at her, since she did not possess any telekinetic abilities strong enough to stop his accuracy. But he knew his father would not fight back, for he was in a drug induced sleep because of the Psychic dreams, premonitions and such that he had. So he slit his father’s throat and went back to bed. In the morning, he awoke as usual, and then called the police. They arrived and checked the security system, something that Damien forgot in all totality, and discovered that he had been the one to kill them. After a mental evaluation, he was sent away, far off the planet, to where the highstress of the business world he grew up on would not reach him. He was also heavily medicated. He was adopted by a mechanic and a seamstress, who where briefed of what the boy had done, and where constantly afraid of him. But never less, he enjoyed the new school he was in, for he was not ridiculed because of his parents. Possessed of a warrior's spirit, Damien took up martial arts and swordsmanship where his superior balance and spatial sense could be put to use. He knew his parents had been Psyps but had no idea that he himself was an Aetar, he just thought himself a Psyp like them. After blood tests in high school revealed him to be an Aetar, he shot to the top of the popularity lists for his good looks, good grades, and impressive athletic skill. He ignored the overtures of the gaggles of girls vying for his attention, preferring instead to keep to himself. He was not rude, only cold. It did not take long for Opus Dei to spot this rising star in athletics and they conspired to meet him. To the agent's delight, Damien spotted him outright when he tried to stake out Damien's high school. The two talked at length and an offer was extended to Damien to join Opus Dei. Damien took up the job immediately and found that he would get his wings during summer vacation of his junior year. As promised, black wings shot through with silver were grafted onto his back and folded in such a way as to not be a hindrance to him. It took some time to get used to moving with them and Opus Dei instructed him on how to use his new wings and the rules concerning them. They even gave him a name based on his quietness and mysteriousness- Raziel, Angel of Mysteries and Hidden Knowledge. Damien loved his new wings and finally felt like the superior being he knew he was. Whether it was arrogance of youth or anger at the naiveté that surrounded him, Damien remained cold, cementing a personality trait that would remain with him for the rest of his life. When he graduated from high school, he opted to go into college and in a few short years, he gained a Doctorate in Psychology. By the time he was 22, he began official work for Opus Dei. For awhile, his first partner was a brash, foul-mouthed man named Arael. They worked together very well and soon, a new angel was added to their little team named Tabris. Raziel abided by Tabris though the idea of a vampire Angel did not sit well with him. Despite that, Tabris was dead useful and that was all that counted. When he was 27, he received a new partner. The girl had fair skin, brown hair, and teal eyes- and her name was Cassiel, Angel of Solitude and Tears. Raziel had given her the name personally for reasons almost wholly unto himself- though obvious to the ones who know his history. A year later, Cassiel betrayed the syndicate. An expert hacker, the once extremely dedicated young woman had sold trillions of dollars of information to rivals, leaving the System to somewhere undisclosed. This event was rather tramatic, causing the Angel of Mystery to take a leave of absence from his duties Theme Songs: - "Baby Boy" - Thea - "Hell Above The Water" - Curve - "Stamina Rose" - Ghost in the Shell - "Lagrima" - Andres Segovia - "Rise" - Ghost in the Shell
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"Archer's so cool, and Shiro's a penis with ears"
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Okay, good character but I'd like to see a little more expansion on the strengths and weaknesses. He has to have more than those. x3
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Yah, sorry about the links. I just fixed this up from an old site I was on and forgot to check them. I also edited all the stuff that you suggested.
As for the 7th sense thing, it is not really a sensation or anything, it is just instinct. Like how a baseball player knows how far away the ball is, or where their bat is exactly. If you read the links attached, because spatial-time sense is sort of complicated, and just imagine those senses nearly perfectly accurate, that is what it is.
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"Archer's so cool, and Shiro's a penis with ears"
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APPROVEDIDIFIED
SLR <3 Love the bike, though ![]()
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Thankies! ON MAH WAY TO MEET A CAR NOW! XD
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