Aronin Orino

[Fluesopp]

Name: Aronin Orino.
Age: 20
Race: Human
Sex: Male
Hair: Stright, black, almost emo hair, but not so greasy. It’s completely natural, and every boy in his family got this type of hair.
Eyes: Dark Green/Blue
Weight: 65 kg
Height: 1,83 meters
Weapon: None
Armor: None

Strengths: Aronin got telekinetic powers. He can heal, cause explosions and other damaging effects, manipulate objects, and levitate, to a degree. He is still very weak, and can only use his power for a short period of time. How long he can use the powers is exponential proportional with the amplitude of the power he is using.

Weakness: Emotion. To be able to use his Kinetic powers, he needs to focus. Any emotions can be fatal, resulting in the powers to backfire, multiply, or just disappear, amongst other. The events are dependent of the emotion. If he suddenly feels guilt or sorry for himself, his powers tend to backfire, and if he is feeling affection, the powers is suddenly useless. Therefore, he meditates every day to keep his emotions in check. Another consequence of this weakness is rage, in which he cannot control his power, which is multiplied given how furious he is, and can cause damage to foes and allies alike. He did manage to control it one time, but then he felt a bit of affection to.

Skills: Telekinesis. His powers are not absolute, but at the moment, he is pretty weak. He can summon ice and fire as he like, control the earth and the wind, and manipulate objects like an arm. The amount of damage each spell does, can vary from a simple scratch, to the loss of a arm. But again, the more powerful the power is, the faster he is exhausted. Only once did he use his powers that much that a person list his arm, and afterwards, he was fainted for the rest of the week. He also got defensive power, where he can, if he is aware of it, stop a sword or arrow directed at him. When levitating, he can go as high he want, but higher altitude means shorter time airborne, and if he goes to high, he might just end up getting exhausted before he can descend, resulting in a fall from the current height.
He is more a supporting character than a attacking, and feels more comfortable when there is someone else he can backup.

Appearance: Aronin is usually wearing a simple shirt, mostly white, but he also uses gray and black. He doesn’t have any armor, and uses his powers as a defense. He is always wearing blue pants, in linen. His head got no scar or stains, except for one small scar which goes from the left ear to the left cheek bone. His face is nothing special; in fact, nothing about him is special, which causes people to overlook him mostly. He is rather skinny, but not extremely thin, and is always barefoot. When he is using Telekinesis, which he is almost always (to keep his feet warm) it’s almost as if air is blowing away from him, as you can see dust being whirled up and grass bending to the side as he walks.

Personality: His powers are dependent of him being calm and emotionless, which can cause him to appear a bit harsh and arrogant. But regardless of what he might appear as, he is very mild hearted and is still only a youth trying to find his way in life. It is hard to gain his trust, but once gained, it’s hard to lose it again. Still, he is very shy and emotionless, and will not be the best friend even if gained as a friend. He is still unsure of his powers which can cause him to be rather nervous before using them, causing them to be weaker than usual.

Biography: Aronin Orino was born the 13 August 1988, in a unknown valley in Norway. His father was the shaman of a small tribe, which never interfered with the normal world. Early in life, his family had to move to a normal village because of a shortage of food. Unaware of his powers at the moment, the family sent him to a normal school to learn the “normal” ways. He was introduced to the class as a native, someone from the far north. The class, being only small kids just accepted this without any questions, and he was soon a integrated part of the class. During the seventh grade, he got in love with a girl in his class. They developed a relationship, and remained together for some years. But at the gymnasium, things changed. People changed, gangs were made and before you knew anything, the once so nice classmates became monsters. They came drunk to school and pretty much was at school because they got money for it.

It was about at that time Aronin noticed he had powers. It started a evening when his pencil fell out of his hand and rolled towards the edge of the desk. As by Instinct, Aronin reached out and the pencil stopped. Shocked he retrieved his hand, and the pencil followed. From that day, Aronin silently practiced manipulating his pencil; getting it to roll towards him, sending it rolling away, rolling it towards him again, and so on.

Then, one night, he snapped. He become furious, and went into a rage modus, and almost killed a guy. The reason; Aronin and his girlfriend went walking home after a party late one night, and some guys from school came out from a bar, drunk as hell. They were two years older than Aronin, and starting to threat the pair, forcing them to give them all their pocketbooks, watches and cell phones. After they had taken their part, they agreed they should have some fun with the girl, and one tried to undress her while the other held Aronin up against the wall. Aronin, hearing the screams of his girlfriend and feeling his unability to help, became more and more desperate and angry, until something just snapped. The guy that was holding him was throws five meters back, crashing into a wall. Then, Aronin turned to the other guy, who was currently struggling with the girl’s pullover and as in a dream saw the guy’s arm just split open, as if it was penetrated by a sword from the hand down to the elbow. As the guy screamed, Aronin turned to the girl, as felt the same feeling as before, and had to shout to himself to stop! Then everything became black, and he fell back.

Shortly after that episode, he broke with his girlfriend, as he knew he was a danger to himself and his surroundings. His parents, who, even when his father was a shaman, had never seen such power, were just afraid of him, almost closing him out. That’s when he knew he had to find his life another place. And that he could not allow himself to have emotions. Much time has passed since then, and he is much more efficient in using his powers. But they are still very weak, and he is currently in search of someone to learn him to control his powers.

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Ok, this is my first time here. I have never done this before, so I hope some experienced user can help me out.
So, some feedback would be nice. Did I manage well?
~Fluesopp

[Puck]

Hi nice to meet you.

I enjoyed reading your character but there are a few problems before I can approve him. I am going to ask you to get rid of his mind reading, and controlling people(Unless you severely limit the controlling people to a few seconds, or only on NPC's). Also make sure you actually use his weaknesses fairly, the way his weaknesses are is that they are controlled by how you protray him, so make sure they actually do have an effect in battle.

Do these things and I would be more then happy to approve him.

[Fluesopp]

Ok, this is how I plan to play him:
He is a unsure, "boy", which got powers he don't quite understand. He got potential to become a great telekinesis user, but currently, his powers, and his abilities to use them are too weak. And the mind reading thing can be dropped. But controlling others, I don't think that's a too powerful thing. He doesn't use any armour, and must therefore use telekinesis to parry a attack. So, in addition to mentaly blocking a swipe, he can therefore enter the mind of the attacker and delay the attack for some seconds, enought for him to get out of the swing. And to put a thought into someone for a while can be a fun, and not a too powerful skill.

Regarding his weakness, I designed him to be a potential Jean Gray, in the way that even if he is powerful, he is also a very weak person. He cannot controll himself, and might end up hurting the ones closest. And the emotional consept is from Teen-Titans. In one episode, Starfire and the white girl switch bodies, and they have to learn to use their new power. And Starfire constantly blow things up because she cannot controll her emotions. So, in a battle, if he starts to lose faith, he is suddenly helpless. He requires a exceptionelly ability to consentrate and keep your emotions away.
So, he is a very weak character, which is going to develop over time.

[Puck]

Originally Posted by Fluesopp

Ok, this is how I plan to play him:
He is a unsure, "boy", which got powers he don't quite understand. He got potential to become a great telekinesis user, but currently, his powers, and his abilities to use them are too weak. And the mind reading thing can be dropped. But controlling others, I don't think that's a too powerful thing. He doesn't use any armour, and must therefore use telekinesis to parry a attack. So, in addition to mentaly blocking a swipe, he can therefore enter the mind of the attacker and delay the attack for some seconds, enought for him to get out of the swing. And to put a thought into someone for a while can be a fun, and not a too powerful skill.

Mind reading and controlling others are very powerful. One could potentially cause a character to stab themselfs and that character could not do a damn thing about it. It is okay of he can say control the weapon, or block it, but controlling a person is too much. Also I cannot allow you to get into the mind of another character, or input a thought, because then your character could potentially read the characters entire mind, which is against the rules. Them are the rules and i will not approve him until I beleive he is acceptable.

Regarding his weakness, I designed him to be a potential Jean Gray, in the way that even if he is powerful, he is also a very weak person. He cannot controll himself, and might end up hurting the ones closest. And the emotional consept is from Teen-Titans. In one episode, Starfire and the white girl switch bodies, and they have to learn to use their new power. And Starfire constantly blow things up because she cannot controll her emotions. So, in a battle, if he starts to lose faith, he is suddenly helpless. He requires a exceptionelly ability to consentrate and keep your emotions away.
So, he is a very weak character, which is going to develop over time.

Okay that is fine as long as you use his weakness in battle.

[Fluesopp]

Originally Posted by Puck

Mind reading and controlling others are very powerful. One could potentially cause a character to stab themselfs and that character could not do a damn thing about it. It is okay of he can say control the weapon, or block it, but controlling a person is too much. Also I cannot allow you to get into the mind of another character, or input a thought, because then your character could potentially read the characters entire mind, which is against the rules. Them are the rules and i will not approve him until I beleive he is acceptable.

Ok, done.

Okay that is fine as long as you use his weakness in battle.

That I will. But say, if this character did not have this weakness, in that he is developing so it becomes less of a weakness, is that allowed?

[Puck]

Originally Posted by Fluesopp

Ok, done.

Thanks. Remember over time you will be able to upgrade your character.

That I will. But say, if this character did not have this weakness, in that he is developing so it becomes less of a weakness, is that allowed?

Over time it can become less of a weakness, but a character must always have at the very least one weakness.

It is with great pleasure I give him a stamp of approval

*APPROVED*

My First approved character, Puck is happy.

Oh yes Puck would reccomend you go and take a look at the Dome, and possible join a homeroom. It's a good place to touch up on your RPing skills, and get training from the experts. NOW GO RUN ENJOY THE BA AND IT'S GLORY!

^_^

[Fluesopp]

Thank you.
*leaves to Battle Arena*
Which way? Down the forum and to the right? Ok.