Insani

[Insani]

Name: Insani Wackz

Age: 10

Race: Humbie (zombie/human)

Sex: Male

Hair: Brown, Spiked.

Eyes: Red

Weight: 80 lbs

Height: 6 feet

Weapon: Hands, his hands can transform into claws, as well as knives and other battle weapons.

Strengths: He has an invincibility of a zombie and a human combined

Weakness: Girls (yeah), and moon rock (it infects blackness over him, which makes him temporary unstoppable, but then he gets injured real bad)

Skills/Magic: SoulEX (steals the soul of an enemy, it's a natural ability), Regeneration (when he dies, he can regenerate himself at will.), and Brute mode (in brute mode he stops thinking for awhile, makign himself into a brute, and he becomes wreckless and unstoppable)

Appearance: He looks like luigi (but with green skin,red eyes, and brown shoes, clot, and hat)

Personality: Evil,Insane, and sometimes good though

Biography: Born into the race of humbies, the cross of human and zombie, Insani, however, was born into a family cursed to rule evil and insanity as king. There is another family called craze, wich is also cursed. But excet, the queens are chosen from the craze. He fights for world domination, and sometimes to rule the world. He was born with 2 sides, as all humbies are, an evil side, and a good side.

Pet: His pet is a trained Wolf.
Pet moves: Bite, body slam, Scratch
Pet Strenthgs: Creatures of the night
Pet Weaknesses: Creatures of the moon

Beleifs: Insani worships the evil god, and hopes to gain power from the god, then go on a quest to get the ultimate items, and then kill the evil god and become the evil god.
This is my character

[Euphoria]

Insaney's gonna kill you for stealing his name xD.

- Expand everything. If you need some help, take a look at my second or third characters (the link is in the snazzy quote in my sig).

[Insani]

I got my name from insani. I use insani almost always.
i was not aware of insaney's name

[Euphoria]

Originally Posted by Insani

I got my name from insani. I use insani almost always.
i was not aware of insaney's name

I didn't say you copied him, I just said he'd be frazzled ^^;;

So, insani, let's see those changes :]

[Insani]

Name: Insani Wackz

Age: 10

Race: Humbie (zombie/human)

Sex: Male

Hair: Brown, Spiked.

Eyes: Red

Weight: 80 lbs

Height: 6 feet

Weapon: Hands, his hands can transform into claws, as well as knives and other battle weapons. His hands can transform into anything he wants to.
When they transform, they become metal.

Strengths: He has fighting skills and invincibility of a zombie, he has mastered many magic skills. And has also mastered transformign his hands into weapons, enabling himself to be able to transform his own body.

Weakness: Insani cannot survive without stealign at least 1 soul daily, as a result, he always goes to the forest in the morning.

Skills/Magic: SoulEX (steals the soul of an enemy, it's a natural ability), Regeneration (when he dies, he can regenerate himself at will.), and Brute mode (in brute mode he stops thinking for awhile, makign himself into a brute, and he becomes wreckless and unstoppable)

Appearance: A thin kid with red eyes, an evil look, green/brown overalls, and a brown shirt. He also wears brown shoes and A brown cap that hangs over his head. On it are the initials IB (for InsaniBoy). His cloth fit on him tight.
He has green skin of a zombie.

Personality: As king of evil and insanity. he has a natural evil personality. He sometimes acts insane though, jumping off mountains, and such. Though when he has fun he can be really nice and kind, but when you get on his bad side... let's just say you'd want to wear anti-soul stealing armor.

Biography: Born into the race of humbies, the cross of human and zombie, Insani, however, was born into a family cursed to rule evil and insanity as king. There is another family called craze, wich is also cursed. But excet, the queens are chosen from the craze. He fights for world domination, and sometimes to rule the world. He was born with 2 sides, as all humbies are, an evil side, and a good side.

Pet: His pet is a trained DeathWolf. It has Blue fur, red eyes, and sabertooth teeth.
Pet moves: Bite, body slam, Scratch, Fire Breath
Pet Strenthgs: It is a natural predator. It walks to the prey slowly, and then, when close enough, jumps. This power of skill has been valuable to him.
Pet Weaknesses: He his weak against giants, he could easily defeat them, but the giants hear him no matter what.
DeathWolf: DeathWolf is a type of wolf, they are much stronger, have sabertooth teeth, and can have brown,red,yellow,green,blue or rainbow fur.
They are creatures that have great strenthg, but also great weaknesses.

Beleifs: Insani worships the evil god, and hopes to gain power from the god, then kill the god and take his power.
This is my character
This good enough?

[Euphoria]

- In his the section dictating his weapons, talk a lot more about how he transforms. How long does the transformation take? Can he make keys etc.? What are his main transformations? Those are just a few questions; ask yourself more.

- In his 'Strengths' section, you talked about lots of magic skills. Elaborate. I also want you to expand upon his 'fighting skills'; is he quick? Merciless? Slow but powerful?

- Give him a lot more weaknesses.

- Expand his SoulEX ability. Tell us how it works, when he uses it etc. And for his regeneration ability you said he can resurrect himself at will; that's kind of hard when he's dead -__- I also notice that you haven't changed his skills at all. If you want this approved, you'll have to do what I tell you.

- Delve further into Insani's insanity in the 'Personality' section.

- His biography should give us an insight into why Insani is so messed it up. It also gives our fellow RP'ers a chance to see how Insani should be controlled. As such, I want you to majorly expand the bio.

I have issues with his pet too, but that is enough for today.

[Insani]

Name: Insani Wackz

Age: 10

Race: Humbie (zombie/human)

Sex: Male

Hair: Brown, Spiked.

Eyes: Red

Weight: 80 lbs

Height: 6 feet

Weapon: Hands, his hands can transform into claws, as well as knives and other battle weapons. His hands can transform into anything he wants to.
When they transform, they become metal ot any other thing he wants them to.

Strengths: He has fighting skills and invincibility of a zombie, he has mastered many magic skills. And has also mastered transformign his hands into weapons, enabling himself to be able to transform his own body.
It takes 1-10 minutes for him to trandform. He is able to transform into anything he wants. He can even change his own form. And even his race. The only limit to his powers is that he has to train as a creature in order for it to reach it full potential. A.k.a. When he transforms into a giant, he will be weak and will have to fight as the giant for a while in order to enable it's true strenthg.

Weakness: Insani cannot survive without stealign at least 1 soul daily, as a result, he always goes to the forest in the morning. He also has an unstable form, being new on earth, he has come from a far away planet... seeking earth. When hit hard enough, he could teleport randomly ANYWHERE. Even into a sun, making himself wanto master defense skills. When hit by a weapon wielded by a zombie he is temporarily paralized.

Skills/Magic: SoulEX (steals the soul of an enemy, it's a natural ability, he basicly screams a magical word, (pok'aaaaan!) and flies into the air, his eyes gloing black. Insani then fights the soul of the enemy in a rpg like battle. If he wins, he gets the soul. IF the enemy wins, the enemy survives.), Regeneration (when he dies, he can regenerate himself at will. When he dies, part of his body stays alive, because he was cursed years ago. That part uses the skill.), and Brute mode (in brute mode he stops thinking for awhile, makign himself into a brute, and he becomes wreckless and unstoppable)

Appearance: A thin kid with red eyes, an evil look, green/brown overalls, and a brown shirt. He also wears brown shoes and A brown cap that hangs over his head. On it are the initials IB (for InsaniBoy). His cloth fit on him tight.
He has green skin of a zombie.

Personality: As king of evil and insanity. he has a natural evil personality. He sometimes acts insane though, jumping off mountains, and such. Though when he has fun he can be really nice and kind, but when you get on his bad side... let's just say you'd want to wear anti-soul stealing armor.
He also has emotional allergies with hamster. He sneezes, then goes into a tentrum, and tries to wreck the place he is in. His family found out of this the hard way. -_- He also is good as a leader, and also loses his temper when someone disagrees with him.

Biography: Born into the race of humbies, the cross of human and zombie, Insani, however, was born into a family cursed to rule evil and insanity as king. There is another family called craze, wich is also cursed. But excet, the queens are chosen from the craze.
At 10 he journeyed to earth from an unknown planet to hunt down the immortal witch that casted the spell on the wackz and craze families.
He created a castle in a volcano where he has his army of evil and insane.
He tries to defeat the witch more and more, but he loses every time...and every time he loses his evil side strenthens. But he can regain the strenthg of his good side by reading books on how to control the inner self, stealing souls, doing quests to help people, and battling creatures.

Pet: His pet is a trained DeathWolf. It has Blue fur, red eyes, and sabertooth teeth.
Pet moves: Bite, body slam, Scratch, Fire Breath
Pet Strenthgs: It is a natural predator. It walks to the prey slowly, and then, when close enough, jumps. This power of skill has been valuable to him.
Pet Weaknesses: He his weak against giants, he could easily defeat them, but the giants hear him no matter what.
DeathWolf: DeathWolf is a type of wolf, they are much stronger, have sabertooth teeth, and can have brown,red,yellow,green,blue or rainbow fur.
They are creatures that have great strenthg, but also great weaknesses.

Beleifs: Insani worships the evil god, and hopes to gain power from the god, then kill the god and take his power.

Good enough?

[Euphoria]

For now, expand the bio a lot. To help you, I think you should read the bio of this character. It will give you an idea of how long it needs to be, but also how you can be succinct enough to fit enough events to write a book into a few thousand words ^^;

[Insani]

Name: Insani Wackz

Age: 10

Race: Humbie (zombie/human)

Sex: Male

Hair: Brown, Spiked.

Eyes: Red

Weight: 80 lbs

Height: 6 feet

Weapon: Hands, his hands can transform into claws, as well as knives and other battle weapons. His hands can transform into anything he wants to.
When they transform, they become metal ot any other thing he wants them to.

Strengths: He has fighting skills and invincibility of a zombie, he has mastered many magic skills. And has also mastered transformign his hands into weapons, enabling himself to be able to transform his own body.
It takes 1-10 minutes for him to trandform. He is able to transform into anything he wants. He can even change his own form. And even his race. The only limit to his powers is that he has to train as a creature in order for it to reach it full potential. A.k.a. When he transforms into a giant, he will be weak and will have to fight as the giant for a while in order to enable it's true strenthg. When he gathers enough energy (like 100 souls, or a couple souls of ultimate warriors) he can turn into legend insani, a form where he is a god.

Weakness: Insani cannot survive without stealign at least 1 soul daily, as a result, he always goes to the forest in the morning. He also has an unstable form, being new on earth, he has come from a far away planet... seeking earth. When hit hard enough, he could teleport randomly ANYWHERE. Even into a sun, making himself wanto master defense skills. When hit by a weapon wielded by a zombie he is temporarily paralized. When in legend insani form, insani can be killed. So while in legend insani form, insani is most powerful, and most weak.

Skills/Magic: SoulEX (steals the soul of an enemy, it's a natural ability, he basicly screams a magical word, (pok'aaaaan!) and flies into the air, his eyes gloing black. Insani then fights the soul of the enemy in a rpg like battle. If he wins, he gets the soul. IF the enemy wins, the enemy survives.), Regeneration (when he dies, he can regenerate himself at will. When he dies, part of his body stays alive, because he was cursed years ago. That part uses the skill.), and Brute mode (in brute mode he stops thinking for awhile, makign himself into a brute, and he becomes wreckless and unstoppable) Cosmic Power (he screams, "cosmic POWER!" and the world turns black'n'white. Time stops for 2-10 minutes, so insani can strike at his enemy)

Appearance: A thin kid with red eyes, an evil look, green/brown overalls, and a brown shirt. He also wears brown shoes and A brown cap that hangs over his head. On it are the initials IB (for InsaniBoy). His cloth fit on him tight.
He has green skin of a zombie.

Personality: As king of evil and insanity. he has a natural evil personality. He sometimes acts insane though, jumping off mountains, and such. Though when he has fun he can be really nice and kind, but when you get on his bad side... let's just say you'd want to wear anti-soul stealing armor.
He also has emotional allergies with hamster. He sneezes, then goes into a tentrum, and tries to wreck the place he is in. His family found out of this the hard way. -_- He also is good as a leader, and also loses his temper when someone disagrees with him.

Biography: Insani was born a humbie. The humbies were a breed of human/zombie that were cursed by an immortal witch 1000 years ago. There are only 2 families of humbies, the Wackz Family, and the Craze Family.
The curse cast on humbies was that the humbies had to be kings (and queens) of insanity and evil. Insani is the Adventorous Prince of Insanity who went to earth after mastering the teleportation technique. He searches day and night for the witch who cursed his family. He was the ultimate being. He had no weaknesses. At all. Until he ventured into the witches lair, and got cursed, that is when he gained his weaknesses.

Pet: His pet is a trained DeathWolf. It has Blue fur, red eyes, and sabertooth teeth.
Pet moves: Bite, body slam, Scratch, Fire Breath
Pet Strenthgs: It is a natural predator. It walks to the prey slowly, and then, when close enough, jumps. This power of skill has been valuable to him.
Pet Weaknesses: He his weak against giants, he could easily defeat them, but the giants hear him no matter what.
DeathWolf: DeathWolf is a type of wolf, they are much stronger, have sabertooth teeth, and can have brown,red,yellow,green,blue or rainbow fur.
They are creatures that have great strenthg, but also great weaknesses.

Beleifs: Insani worships the evil god, and hopes to gain power from the god, then kill the god and take his power.


I'll update the bio later with a story like on your profile, but i'm REALLY busy. (hopefully i can soon.)