Zak

[No12]

Here's my new BA charcter Zak, he's much beter than Tai as i have improved now look at the total pawnage of Zak:XD
Name: Zak (last name unknown)

Age: 26

Race: Human

Sex: Male

Hair: Jet black

Eyes: Light blue

Weight: 180 lbs.

Height: 6"2'

Weapon: Two Glock 22’s, two curved Long knife’s
Armor: None

Strengths: Zak is a good shot, he is strong and fast after years of battle and running away from dinosaurs, he has befriended a dinosaur which is a Velcociraptor (Raptor) which will come to his aid if he uses “The call of the Raptor”.

Weakness: He find’s predicting normal attack’s quite hard as used to dinosaurs attacks, he has trouble blocking as he likes to finish fights with one bullet, element magic hurts him a lot and he has a fear of spider’s.

Skills/Magic: The call of the Raptor- Zak after many years fighting Raptor’s he has learned the call or a raptor so he befriended one. When he uses it the raptor comes to his aid, although it doesn’t always work it also takes time (which is not always good in the middle of a battle) and it also takes a lot of skill so when not enough skill is put in it doesn’t work.

Appearance: Zak is tall and well built. He has a lot of scars from battle. He wears a black top with dark blue jeans. His boots are jet black and worn. His top worn has several rips from claws and different shades of black from patches sown on to cover claw marks.

Personality: Zak is silent in battle and in most times in everyday life. He bottles his feelings up which sometimes cause’s his downfall. He is not very religious as he believes heavily in Science. He loves to interact with dinosaurs (Herbivores) but he will defend himself from carnivores and not fret to kill them. Some will describe Zak as miserable and high tempered.

Biography: Zak was born in the forest village of Heldra. He grew up with his father as his mother died in a mammoth attack. He was never told why dinosaurs still existed but he just thought no one knew. His childhood wasn’t a good one; his father was always out protecting the village from dinosaurs. He taught himself how to use firearms soon after finding his father secret stash. He was bullied and beaten at school but his father never noticed. Zak soon grew to hate his father after spotting him bringing a much younger woman home and increasing his drinking. So it was a great for Zak when his father met his death.
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“Zak what are you doing here!”
My father said, drunkenly, he was holding a machine gun and looking at me angrily.
“Get out of here it’s not safe”
“Like you care about my safety”
“I’m your father Zak of cause I care”
“Go die!!”
Before his father could respond a giant Tyrannosaurs rex burst through the trees, Zak could remember that several men had died because of the T-rex. His father fired the machine gun at the rex but the rounds just bounced off. The rex swopped down and his father upper body disappeared inside the rex’s jaws. The next moment his father was screaming and then it was silent his lower body fell onto the floor with blood spreading across the ground. Zak run back to the village he was happy his father was dead “Yes!” he shouted. A rocket whizzed past him and smacked the rex in the chest, there was no time for screaming the rex was dead straight away. The Guard spoke to him
“Zak where’s your father”
“Dead, he’s dead”
“What are you not sad?”
“No”
Zak ran back to the house, he was going to leave at dawn get out of Heldra and explore the world but first he needed to sleep.
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Zak stole two Glock 22’s from his late father’s stash, and left the village. He spent the next few years stealing for his survival. When he was 23 he shot a stranger who on his possession and two curved long knives, he later found out they were meant for a famous warrior. The warrior found Zak and battle insured. Zak won, killed the warrior and kept the knives. He earned a reputation as a dinosaur hunter and a fierce warrior. Now he travels hunting dinosaurs and trying to become better warrior than everyone else.

[Kitsuné]

Approved, I suppose. I'd like you to run this through a spelling/grammar check sometime, though.

[No12]

Thanks so much I will now put it through the spell ceck