Serpent

I know I probably haven't used Rethir enough, but I want to get this down before I forget it.

Name: Serpent; it is doubtful that anyone but him remembers his true name, and if they did, they would not dare to utter it, for fear of his wrath.

Age: Unknown

Race: Human

Sex: Male

Hair: Blonde

Eyes: Green

Weight: 193 lbs

Height: 6' 2"

Weapon: He carries a blade that looks like three intertwining snakes. The first one's body forms the blade, with its head at the very end of the handle. The second two are wrapped around the other in a handgrip fashion, with their heads forming the hand guards. The handle is made out of a green metal, and the blade is steel. The sheath he carries at his side is the same metal as the handle, and looks like the body of the first snake

Armor: A green, full body, snake skin jumpsuit. The hood looks like a snake's head, with his face looking out of the mouth. He wears brown boots and gauntlets. It can stop an arrow, and is fire-proof and water-proof

Strengths: Very fluid fighting style, making him hard to hit. Great at planning ambushes.

Weakness: If an ambush fails, he is often left exposed, and he is not particularly fast or strong. When he is Half-Snake, he is clumsy with his sword, and tends not to use it. When he gets angy, he often does things he regrets later.

Skills/Magic:
Transform: Serpent has three forms. His human one, a full snake one, and his human form with a snake's head. To transform into his half-snake, the hood comes alive and bites down on his head, which disappears. To transform to full snake, the same thing happens and then his arms fuse to his sides, and he grows to 35' long. In Full-snake and half-snake, he can also spit venom.

Constrictor Slash: The blade of his sword transforms into a snake's tail, which can wrap around an opponent and squeeze until they pass out. Cannot be used to kill.

Serpent's Summon: The blade of the sword glows gold, and he plunges it into the ground. This calls all snakes within a half mile radius to attack a specific opponent. This is obviously more effective in some places than others.

Appearance: Aside from his clothing, nothing is particularly unusual about Serpent. He has green eyes and blonde hair, an average height and build, and a normal face. In Half-Snake and Full-Snake forms, he is a giant Green Mamba.

Personality: Serpent never lets his emotions show on his face, in his voice, or in his fighting style, but only in his actions. He gets angry quite easily, and people who make him angry don't often survive unscathed. He seems ruthless and cold hearted, and he is.

Biography: Serpent's past is shrouded in mystery, to both himself and others. Behind a certain point in his memory, he remembers only snatches of his past. The farthest back he can remember clearly is waking up in a torture chamber, with a man standing over him, saying that he was “his little snake.” When he heard this, Serpent instinctively activated Full-Snake and killed the man. He assumes he did not have his snake powers before this.

Upon escaping from the chamber, he set out to make a name for himself. He forged his beautiful sword, and started hiring himself out as a body guard, but no one seemed to trust him, so now he travels the lands aimlessly, until he found the Dome. Once inside, he stayed there, with no intention of leaving.

His full past is this: Serpent's uncle, who had a fascination with snakes, always had a life-long dream of fusing a human with a snake. However, he needed a child, as it was easier to fuse animals to children than with adults. When his brother had a child, the uncle greatly desired to be able to experiment on the child. The uncle's brother (Serpent's father) flatly refused.

After two years, the father had forgotten about his brother's obssesion, and when he received an invatation to stay with the uncle, he took the whole family. Upon their arrival, the uncle killed Serpent's parents, and started experimenting on Serpent, erasing his memory and linking his powers to the snake skin armor he had made. Then one day, he found that Serpent had grown too powerful to control, and was killed by Serpent. This is one of the first things Serpent can remember.

Pretty good, but there are some things I need to point out. Firstly, seeing as he has such a unique armour, I'd like some more information about it. Also, the strengths/weaknesses section could use some work.

Now, as for the bio, I can understand the fact that he has no recollection of his past, but that doesn't mean you can just skip it in the bio. I'd like to see just how he became who he is, where he got the armour, who was the guy who called him his "little snake", etc.

Look into those please.

OK, I edited the bio, armor, and weakness sections.

Okay, I think that will do.

*approved*

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