Jaon Teekhs

OoC: My last attempt to make a sufficient character:

BIC:

Name: Joan Teelkz (Teal-kz)

Age: 18

Race: Human

Gender: Male

Hairlack

Eyes: Silver

Weight:125.6 IBS

Height: 5'0"

Weapon: A long broadsword. Silver hilt and balde made of hard forged steel.
The blade has Joan's name encrested in it in a forgotten language. It is named
Demoon El Flaccer. (The Demon Flanker)
His shield, Thn Niegh Nui Shi,(The hier to protect)is a special shield and is great protection.

Strengths: He can move at fast speeds(45 MP/H). He can't be killed easily. Only by a stab in the heart can kill him.

Weakness:He can be injured in numerous ways. His skin magnifies the injury 10 fold.

Skills/Magic: He uses complicated magic like Obliterate.
Fire: 71
Ice: 36
Splice: ???
Obliterate: 92
Jump: ????
Splice is when he jumps and flips. While in the air he slices through anything in front of him. He only uses this in desperate times. Obliterate uses enormous amounts of energy to use therefore he is master of magic. Obliterate bursts of Dark energy and adds to Joan's power. He can then attack with random speed and skill.

Appearance: He wears light plate iron body armor. He has a supply pack with food, maps, books, weapon items, bandages, and water. He wears a white T-shirt with a symbol of Royality. His shorts are khaki and has several pockets for storage.
He wears comfortable shoes made of the finest leather.
He has a dark, glowing sheath for his sword. It is made of Silver cotton. A rare source of fabric from the Silverus Cinne plant.

Personality: He gets mad when he is tricked or messed with. When he is in great danger he uses desparate magic. When in battle he can be ferocious and aggresive to survive. When traveling he packs light but with supplies he really needs. He is a nice but aggresive serious person overall.

Biography: He was born on December 23rd 1989 in the Shen Valley. He grew up in the Ghot Village for 7 years. He then got a job as a warrior for his kingdom, Koonungrin Goeiv. (Geo Valley). When he went on his first raid of the nearby provinces he found a wierd stone shaped like a 2x4 piece of wood.
It was approximately 2x6x.5 in.A total volum of 6 in. He kept it in his pack.
When in battle against the province, Surn, the stone burst his pack open and within it lie a circle shield that had the True Hier Insignia. The insignia meant you were chosen to save the province. This was also a sign of danger in the next week. He was sent to the king, Treemjim Kin, by his commander. He then was given a sword with his name encrested in it. The sword was a special made sword that contained the power of a thousand bursts of magic.
He then was trained by the strongest magic users ever known in the country. After 3 days of training he witnessed the biggest fleet of Jhamien, Death Brongers, made in history. 30,000 men worked to kill only 6 Jhamien.
Only 73 were left to survive the bloody battle. Joan killed 2 Jhamien and was crowned, Aflen, King of all warriors. He then setup a brutal army of 4.5 million men(swords), 500,000 with archers and 3 Shadows, the strongest of them all.
On the first day of summer June 20, 2000, A battle never forgotten took place. A fleet of 700 highly skilled Jhamien fought over 6 million men....They won. The king of Surn spared him by vow. Joan vowed that he'll never fight the province ever again. But there was a loophole........


OoC: Ok there it is, if it is disapproved I will never make a character again.