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Juri

Hey look a Shinigami Character, WOW ^_^ (Also I'm sorry for the spelling mistakes my Open office is on crack, and wont speel check anything, and my spelling always suck. Also all Japenese words are poorly translated, sorry)

Name: Juri

Age: 435(Looks to be about 19)

Race: Shinigami

Sex: Female

Hair: Her hair goes down about an inch above her shoulder in a messy style. The hair is a light brown, with a few natural brown highlights.

Eyes: Green

Weight: 110

Height: 5'5

Division: Vice-Captain, sixth division.

Race Description: Shinigami- Shinigami are souls who have gone through intensive training, to become part of the thirteen protection squads, whose job it is to protect Soul Society and defeat Hollows in the real world. Each Shinigami after graduating the academy are assigned to the squad that best matches their abilities. Also they are given their own Zanpakutou of their own, each Zanpakutou has the ability to cleanse hollows souls, and send them to the soul society, it also can heal human souls also sending them to the soul society. The thing that makes the Zanpakutou unique is that fact that each one has its own spirit, that the wielder can communicate with, and it allows the Zanpakutou to change shape at the wielders will, pending on the wielders own skill.

Weapon: Uindokami (Wind God)-The common form of her weapon is that of a common Zanpakutou, the only noticeable difference between this form, and that of any Zanpakutou would be she has gold engraved into her sheath.

Shikai- When Juri calls out “Shoot for the heavens, Uindokami” The entire sword shines with a golden light, the guard extends in both directions, and the blade itself becomes thinner. It then detaches itself, and the grip completely disappears, then a string of spirit energy attaches to both ends of the guard creating a long bow like appearance four and a half feet in length. Juri uses the blade as an arrow, and can shoot it so fast that it can not be seen by an untrained eye, two seconds after it hits something the blade reappears in Juri's hand, along with that the bow can curve in mid flight at Juri's wind.

Uindo shi-rudo: This is a blocking technique that Uindokami can use in its Shikai form, it expands the spirit particles of the bowstring creating a semicircle shield. Note: She can not fire arrows in this form, and she must say the technique’s name for it to work.

Bankai: (Name: Hishou Sono Hateshinai Kami (Flight of the everylasting gods.)) When Uindokami turns to its true form, it fuses to Juri's own skeleton creating two metal bird-like wings attached to her arms. The wing on her right arm is huge, almost six-foot long by itself, and pitch black. The other is silver, and is small, only about arm length and silver, used for slashing. Her entire uniform changes into a close to skin tight ninja like tunic and pants, with a red trimming. Also, she gains a metal claw on her left arm that can detaches from the arm itself, and shoot forward to grab something, or attack, and keeps attached by a string of spirit energy. Also she wears a red raven mask over the top of her face, and head, and her hair ties itself back in a ponytail. She uses the long black wing for stealth, and defensive, as it is able to expand and cover her entirely, making her invisible at night, and nearly impenetrable. The silver is used for attack. In this form she is able to fly at high speed, and use an advanced form of Shunpo, that allows her to use it in mid flight. Although this Bankai is criticised for being weak at Bankai Standards, its unmatched manoeuvrability, and quick attack don't leave much to be gained.


Ame no Ohabari: Shoots feathers from her right arm that gains a purple aura in mid flight, they explode in a purple blaze as they make contact.

Musou Tenshou Yoku no Jin: Circles the enemy 720 degrees, so fast that it leaves the image of many of her surrounding the target. Then, she channels spirit energy to make the images appear to be real, and at once they all turn and attack with a bright purple energy sword. Although, only one of them are real all the swords are real, and the only way to dodge the attack is to somehow fight through the illusion, and stop the real one as they all turn to attack.

Other Equipment:

Gigai: A Gigai is an artificial body that allows Shinigami to remain in the human world for an extended period, either due to temporary loss of powers or extended missions. While the body is synthetic, it functions and operates exactly like a natural one, including but not limited to blood flow and the like. Unlike the normal Shinigami body, a Gigai is detectable by humans who are not spiritually aware.

Artificial Souls: as the name suggests, are souls designed by Shinigami scientists to separate a Shinigami's spirit from a Gigai, should they be inhabiting one, or to evict stubborn spirits from their corpses if necessary. When ingested, it forces the soul out of the body and takes control of it, operating in a pre-programmed manner until removed by the Shinigami.

Memory Replacement: In some cases, a human witnesses a Shinigami purify a hollow or affect his surroundings in a significant way. To keep the incident a secret, Shinigami perform memory replacement with an item called kikanshinki. In function, it operates almost exactly like the neuralizer in the Men in Black films.

Mobile Phone: A vital tool for any Shinigami stationed in the real world, this variation on a mobile phone functions both as a regular phone and as a communication line with Soul Society. It receives information about the time and exact location of a hollow's emergence via Global Positioning System (GPS). A Shinigami's kills are also recorded in the phone and can be used as currency (according to the bounty placed on each hollow).

Ring of Revelation: A specially made ring that allows the Shinigami to appear to humans even if they aren't spiritually aware. It emits a burst of light as soon as it’s placed on the user’s finger.

Armour: None

Strengths: She is a master of Kido arts, which along with her Bow like weapon allows her to fight from afar with minimal injuries. She is an expert at Shunpo, allowing her to manoeuvre around the battlefield instantly. She is bright, and is able to deduce her opponent’s weakness fairly speedily.

Weakness: She is very weak at hand to hand combat, as soon as she turns UindoKami into his Shikai form she has no close ranged attacks at all, leaving her vulnerable to swords, and the like. While in her Gigai, she is basically useless at fighting, and can only use very weak Kido attacks. She also has a bit of an ego, which leads to her sometimes underestimate her opponent or over estimate herself.
Skills/Magic:

Skills:

Shunpo: This a movement technique that allows the user to move faster then the eye can see, most high ranking officers know this to some degree, although it is possible for a ranking officer not to know it.

Flash Draw: Although she prefers long ranged attacks, she is still a competent swordsman, this manoeuvres she draws her blade, slashes, and sheathes it again in one fluid motion at lightning speed. When combined with Shunpo this move is capable of deliver a killing blow if someone isn’t watching closely.

Flash Draw Combo: An upgraded version of Flash draw, instead of simply slashing, and sheathing, she Draw her weapon for a slash, and slashes again as she goes to sheath her blade. She is able to combine this manoeuvre with Shunpo as well.

Flash Draw-Wind Strike of the Gods: The most powerful version of Flash Draw. She performs the steps of Flash Draw Combo, at a highly accelerated speed to the point that not even a super highly trained eye could see the blade. She does these steps about five times in succession, which means ten slashes, all in the time it takes to perform a Shunpo. Of course the best way to live is simply move out of the way before she hits you, because as soon as she starts this, she doesn't stop till the move is over.

(Note: Obviously she is only able to use any variation of flash draw when Uindokami is in his unreleased state)

Kido:

Binding Spells:

1 Sai-Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.

9 Geki- Completely covers a target in red light paralysing them (Incantation; Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat! )

61 Six-rod prison of light-Summons six thin, but wide, beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. (Incantation: Carriage of thunder. Bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six.)

Destructive Spells:

4 White lightning-Shoots concentrated bolt of lighting from the user’s fingertip.

33: Blue fire, Crash Down: Shoots balls of spirit energy that bursts into a firery explosion at contact. (Incantation: Ye Lord! Mask of flesh and bone, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, Upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws! )

54: Haien: Shoots a blast of purple spirit energy at enemy that incinerates on contact.

63: Twin lotus, blue fire, crash down- Essentially a powered up double version of Kido 33 (Incantation: Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! On the wall of blue flame, inscribe a twin lotus. In the abyss of conflagration, wait at the far heavens. )

90: Black Coffin: Forms a box of black energy around a target, which is then pierced by dozens of energy "spears", lacerating the one inside from head to toe. Its appearance and function is reminiscent of a common magician's trick


Appearance: While in her usual form (Shinigami) she wear the standard Shinigami uniform, called shihakushō which consists of a white Kosode, a black Kimono, and Hakama, and a Obi Sash. Because she is a Vice Captain she often wears a white arm band with her divisions symbol on it often in this form she is seen wearing a black Trilby hat, that never seems to fall off her head. Physically she is slim, and slender, and fairly well endowed. She has a light tanned complexion, and well-toned exterior.

Her Gigai has the looks a Tomboyish Teenager. She wears baggy jean Capris, and casual sneakers. Above that she usually wears a black baggy hoodie, but on days that its hot she'll wear a black tanktop, with hot pink trimmings, and she is always seen wearing a baseball cap of some kind.

Personality: She is usually quiet, and reserve, not talking much to those who she doesn't know, or doesn't trust. If she does find herself in a conversation, she usually thinks long and hard before she answers any questions, or puts in her opinion. Despite this she can have a very short temper at time, flaring up randomly when she is provoked, then calming down just as quickly.

In battle she is anything but reserve, she attacks fast, and without warning, often in a chaotic manner. She will appear all around the battlefield at seemingly random, striking hard, and fast, before moving away again. She never stops to take a breath, and it has been said it is nearly impossible to predict her attack pattern, as she really doesn't have any.

She has very few real friends, and even with them she speaks in a very formal type of speech, and never oversteps her boundaries. She has a bit of an ego, as she was proclaimed to be a child prodigy, and she was promoted to Vice-Captain faster then anyone in history. It is said she is as strong as a captain class, and she is not afraid to let others know it.

Biography: Four...she was only four when it happened. She lived with her mother, her father died in a war not that long ago, unfortunately that war proved ineffective, as the result of the war four years ago caused great anger in the losing country. So what they did, was attack the winning country, after gaining an alliance from another neighbouring country. In a surprise attack, the completely decimated a town that lay on the borders of the two countries.

Juri, and her mother where both there when it happened, it was a bright quite day, if anything it was uneventful. Suddenly, there was a whizzing sound outside. Confused, Juri's mom went to the window, her eyes growing wide as she saw the giant rock from a catapult flying towards her, panicking she dived to cover her daughter but it was already to late, the rock crushed both of them in one shot.

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Where was she, she didn't know anymore. All her sense where out of whack, where was her mother...oh yeah one of those white faced monsters ate her...why? She didn't know, she was far too young to understand. Nothing seemed real anymore, nothing was real. Suddenly out of the blackness of the night one of those white faced monsters attacked, its mouth gaping looking like it was going to eat her, but why?

Then like a flash of lightning someone was standing in front of her, holding the monster back.

“Back foul beast, this one is not yours,” The man said slashing at the beast, who cried out in pain, stepping back.

“Do you know who I am Shinigami?” Shinigami...what’s that? “I am a Vasto Lorde, and you will die along with her,” The bull like monster with the white face said.

“Then you don't know who I am, the name is Jenray Lee Fourth seat of the sixth Squad, now perish.” The Man with the flowing black robe grabbing the end of his blade, “Scream Unbarium.” Suddenly, the entire blade disappeared, and the bull horned monster stared bleeding all over, and then it just disappeared.

“Foolish Hollow,” Hollow? Is that what their called, “Don't worry,” The man said turning to the soul of the little girl, who just watched dumbfounded, “This wont hurt,” He said as his blade reappeared, and he moved close. Was she going to be like that monster? NO, she started crying, and tried to run, she didn't want to die! She didn't know what was going on, but she wanted out.

Seeing the girl’s distress as she tried to leave Jenray smiled, and picked the girl up after sheathing his blade. “How about this, you will come home with me, is that ok, I'm not going to hurt you.” Tears still running down her face the girl smiled, and nodded, as a gate appeared behind him, don't worry, he said walking into the gate.

Of course Jenray had a hard time explaining to the Captain-Commander why he had to take care of a little girl, he eventually was allowed to keep her, because according to him “She would have winded up in the Rukon district where she would have been destroyed, and killed. And he couldn't let that happen,”

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Two hundred years had passed sense that fateful day, and Juri had the body of a Ten-year-old girl. She had Lived with Jenray the entire time inside the Seireitei, so it why not by chance that she wanted to become a Shinigami, because of her high spirit energy.

“But Onii-Sama, I wanna be one!” Juri pleaded with Jenray.

“I'm sorry, but I can't allow that, it’s far to dangerous, and you might get hurt,”

“But I wanna help people, like you do. I wanna save souls, and beat hollows,”

“Juri...” Jenray said empathetically, “If you really want to, I guess there is nothing I can do to stop you...Just be careful”

“Thank you Onii-Chan,” She said slamming into his midsection with a big hug, “You won’t regret this!”

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Juri was accepted into the academy with no trouble whatsoever. In fact nothing at the academy even provided a challenge, and by the fifth year, of the six-year academy training, her soulless sword had already developed into a full-fledged Zanpakutou. All the teachers deemed her a child prodigy, a student who was almost as strong as the master. By the sixth year she had already Achieved Shikai, something that should be impossible for a student. Then came the exam that everyone knew she would pass.

“Now class,” The head instructor started, “Captain Kato was supposed to perform the final Exams, but he is away on a mission at the moment. Therefor, he sent one of his subordinates Kazuya, seat three,” The whole class went into a buzz, it was said that he couldn't even perform Shikai, and he was to teach them, it seemed strange. Why should I have to learn from him, I can even perform Shikai, and he can't, that’s pathetic Juri thought to herself.

As the exam wore on Juri was anything but polite to her new instructor, often replying with a rude comment, and often not listing, she didn't have to listen to him she figured, after all she was stronger.

“Pay Attention Juri!” Kazuya yelled at Juri as he was trying to explain something,

“Why, I already know what to do,”

“Please, I am trying to help you,”

“I don't need your help, this exam is easy, and everyone knows I'm going to pass,”

“That’s no way to think, you should be more respectful”

“Whatever” Juri said rolling her eyes. As she predicted she easily passed the exam, even without Kazuya's recommendation. Of course every one of the divisions wanted the child prodigy, but she chose Squad six, under direct command of Jenray who was promoted to Captain.

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Two hundred years later and Juri had already mastered her Bankai with intensive training with Captain Jenray. Along with that she was moved to the position Vice-Captain, after the last Vice Captain was promoted to captain of another Division. She made little friends during her time, as her could, and cocky tone of voice lead people away from her, but she wasn't interested in friends, she just wanted to make her “Onii-Chan” proud, and to avenge her true mothers death.

She commonly went on mission to the real world, as she had asked for such, and she even reluctantly used Kazuya's ring from item to time, even though the two continued their Mutual dislike for each other. Currently she is going on a long string of missions to the real world to study the people with supernatural power, what comes next, has yet to be decided, although it is rumoured that she is next in line for a Captain position as soon as one opens up.
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Looks fine to me--you did a good job explaining her powers for anyone who might not be familiar with Bleach. *approved*
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Thankies Super Aiko-Chan. I tried my best ^_^
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