Hikaru

Age: 20
Race: Hylian
Sex: Male
Hair: Black
Eyes: Brown
Weight: 160 lbs
Height: Five ft 9

Appearance: His hair goes down to the bottom of his five inch long neck.His head is 10 inches tall. His skin is a crispy tan color, This comes from his being outside so much. He wears some slightly cracked glasses, along with a blue tunic. His leggings are leather and hard to tear. He wears a green belt around his waist to keep the leggings on.

Weapons: A Longsword with a Diamond studded hilt in the shape of a Dragon. He alaso has a bow called Sunfury Bow of the Phoenix. This enchanted bow can change anything it touches into fire. Kind of like the Magic Rod in LOZ.

Armor: Black armor and a brown Hylian Sheild (Kind of like the one in Wind Waker) and some brown gloves for handleing his bow.

Strengths: Strong VS Darkness, Fire, and Poison, Skilled healer, Fast witted and skilled with a Bow.

Weakness: Dark Magic and Shadow magic are like Light Arrows on a Darknut. He is slow witted so extreme speed atacks will be unavoidable by Hikaru. His sheild is slightly transparent so essence attacks for example water fire or plasma, would be fatal. When he heals somone elses wound, the wound appears on someone else, including himself.

Magic: Can use Light arrows, Sheild Magic and Heal wounds.

Personality: Extraverted, Intuitive, Perceiving. He likes to be closer to the exitement rather than stay off to the side. He will help those in need, and is easily offended. His social anxiety is to have a handful of Deep friends rather than have billions of aquantances. He longs for adventure and a Girlfriend. He is slightly depressed and will not respond very quickly. He feels that he is a cursed being. He hates himself almost. Anyone he keeps close to himself seems to always die.


Farore's Wind: Basicly anyone who joined the Farore Clan can learn this move. Sort of like the Deku Leaf, it is causing extreme wind to blow back foes.

Shout of Time: Hikaru lets out an extermeley loud cry, this will make any foes forget the battle even beginning. However, this makes Hikaru forget as well.

Upperslash: He stabs the air above him. This is a devastating attack to flying Foes.

Arbiters Tornado: This attack gets more powerful according to the amount of damage Hikaru has taken.




Story: Hikaru was born and raised in Hyrule Castle town. His mother died of a brutal disease, given to her by a Young Gohma, which led him to hate insects, and become a sucsesful healer. His father was killed during the Dark days before the Hero of Time defeated Ganondorf, for standing up to the Evil king. Luckily, His father managed to teach him the art of Swordplay before his demise. At 11 years old, he took the clan trials and joined the Farore Clan. He attends meetings of the clan weekly. At 13 he Was taking a walk in the Faroian forest when he was attacked by a Bulblin Archer. He cut the beast in two, using his Fathers blade, and obtained its bow, Sunfury Bow of the Phoenix. When he turned 15, he left Hyrule, seeking a Blade of his own.He went to the kingdom of Magvel. Along the way he met an elf named Flinse. He and Flinse Traveled the Kingdom searching for a weapon. They travelled to a temple in the outskirts. When he found a Sword inside. The minute he touched the sword and pulled it from its pedestal, the temple collapssed. Hikaru was able to escape, but a falling boulder crushed Flinse. He returned to Hyrule three years later. He is currently wandering Hyrule searching for a legendary sword called Vanquisher's Sword. He requiers this sword to cast down evil. His goal in life is to rid the world of monsters forever.

I realize you're trying to help, musical zombie, but, please, don't post in other people's character theads. Only Councilors can do this line of work.

However, musical zombie does have the right idea, Marty0. Add a couple more weaknesses to balance out his strengths. His Personality section needs to be at least a paragraph long as so does his Appearance section, which you have forgotten. And his biograhpy needs to be much longer. Tell what Hikaru did on his journey and details such as that. This is your character's entire life, after all.

Okay, work on those things and I'll take another look at him.

Added a little to his story and personality. Also gave him an Apearance section. Also he now has some awesome moves. Aprove please. If you don't like please tell me.

Alright, he's a little better but he still needs some work.

The Appearance section is still too short. You've completely left out what clothes he wears. So, unless he's naked, you had probably ought to describe those, too.

I would also like to see a few more weaknesses added on to counter the number of strengths he has. Mainly, a downside to his healing ability. Otherwise he could heal just about any wound on himself and never lose.

Lastly, his Shout of Time seems a little powerful. He could just keep using it over and over to make the opponent forget about the fight and Hikaru could give himself and serious advantage. Try to tack on a downside to this ability.

Allrighty, many weaknesses, shout of time nerfed, and clothes added.

*Approvedeth*