Xitra Hynin

Name: Xitra Hynin (pronounced zi-tra hi-nin)

Age: 16

Race: Hyrulian/Gerudo cross breed

Sex: Male

Hair: Brown, Short and Straight

Eyes: Brown

Weight: 200 lbs.

Height: 6' 7"

Weapon: Double Rapier-esqce sheakan swords, throwing knives. Bag with small sticky-bombs.

Armor: Leather chest armor, Leather gauntlets.

Strengths: Agility, Quick thinking, aptitude for technology and
aptitude for multiple weapons.

Weakness: Small Arachnophobia. Physical Blows do little, but pure light and/or dark magic can harm him significantly, shorting out his body and sending him into spasms for a few seconds. This also automatically makes him go into beserker form.

Skills/Magic: Genes of the gerudo and the hylian races will attack each other as they fight to become the domninate gene, unleashing high amounts of adrenaline and taking away concious control of his body, unleahing what is called a Beserker form. He cannot fully control himself and takes tremendous will power to not attack his friends. (OoC: Think night rider without the flames and skull and attacking everyone.) Gerudo blood enhanced immune system backed by natural Hylian magic. Immune system works only after first time. (ex. new poison takes few hours to be remembered by white cells, after which poison is immedeatly disposed of, along with future poison that are the same. Effects still felt within that time frame.) Future Sight (Basic Sheakah training that tells the person what his enemies will do by looking at tells on the body, ex. tensed mussles, position, ext.)

Appearance: Burly build with wide shoulders. Long arms and high waist. Leather chest armor is brown and sleeveless and wears black pants made of cloth. His gauntlets are a dark brown and have a small stiff flap covering the top of his hands. Small tatooe on his right arm showing he is in work for the king of Hyrule. Black leather belt he wears has a gold belt buckle, an indulgence he permitted himself to have. Hilt of the swords are curved in a S-shape, standing for his sheakah training. The sheaths and hilt of the blades are purple, the color of royalty and the spiritual color of darkness, the temple behind Kakariko village. He wears regular brown boots when traveling or when doing battle. He also will place kunai, small throwing knives, inside the pockets on the outside of the boot, held in place by small straps that are easily replaced.

Personality: As a Gerudo/Hylian cross, he is unliked by both Hylians and Gerudos, while other races, such as Gorons and the Zoras, and the Kokiri, accept him as another creature of life, another member of another tribe (Jokingly called a Hyrudo or a Gerlian). He is strangly kind hearted, considiring his heratige, but that is the hylian side. In battle, he becomes a savage beast, tearing through the enemy with no second thought. Truely the perfect blend of both worlds. Even though he usally only cares for himself, he cares for children that he will come across and will help them if needed. His religious beliefs are somewhat strange. He dosen't find happiness in the church or other places, and so prefers not to be involved. He like to read the history books of the librarys of hyrule, mostly to glean information off of them. He finds solice in the fact that he might one day be able to implore these battle stratigies in the kings army if needed.

Biography: Born in a small village outside Hyrule, he was abandoned in the middle of the Lost Woods when the mayor found out the baby was a cross breed. He was found by a Sheekah, Gregory, who raised him to be strong and taught him the ways of the warrior. The only thing found with him was a piece of parchment with his name and a smal green medalion with strange writing. Xitra still knows nothing of where he was born or who his parents are. When he was 10, his training began with the other children of the village, as an equal. Since Gregory was also a retired mercenary for the king, it only increased the chance of Xitra becoming one in his future. While in his youth, Gregory had taught Xitra how to work with his hands, and how to hunt the animals and live off the land. When 15 he became a mercenary, but still visits his adoptive fathers house every few months, but never during a mission. Gregory hopes that his son could one day stop the fighting between the gerudos and the other races, being that he is from both worlds.

Battle Rank
Player: Moblin Massacre
Character: Xitra Hynin
Innate Element: None
Overall Rank: VI
Strength: V
Speed: VI
Elemental: 0
Skill: VI

Okay. The thing that I notice first is that it's really hard to read. Everything is all jumbled up and mixed around. It's also all mushed together. So try to sort that out a bit before we go on. Try to put the categories in the recommended order and space them out. If you notice that I'm taking too long to reply, just PM me.

Alright. Much easier to read. The appearance needs lengthening, though. I'll approve it now, but I still want you to make the appearance at least a small paragraph long.

*Approved*