Alatian, son of Artemis.

Used name: Alatian Scyrus

True name: Ptomely Elkald

Age: 15

Race: Demigod (Half blood)

Sex: Male

Hair: Black, down to his eyes

Eyes: Silver

Weight: 140 lbs (average 15 year old weight)

Height: 5 ft (Small for his age)

Weapons: Moon Daggers (A gift from his mother, they are quite long for daggers, almost swords. The grip is made from a moon rock, and the blade from celestial bronze inlaid with
silver essence. One is named Luner, the other Eclipse.)

Bow of the Sun (Apollo, Alatian's uncle, gave him this bow. Made from the very sun itself, the bow is 4 feet long, made from celestial bronze, and inlaid with the sun's fire, it can generate both heat and light.)

Armor:

Head: Nothing, but his cloak comes with a hood.

Chest: A brown, woolen cloak, with leather armor underneath, provide his chest garment.

Hands: Leather gloves

Legs: Brown pants

Feet: These seemingly normal brown boots are actually winged wonders. Simply by saying Maia, these boots sprout wings. They only lift a few meters off the ground, but are invaluable nonetheless.

Strengths: With his heritage, Alatian is invigorated by the moon. It makes him much more powerful when bathed in moonlight. He gets sharper reflexes and can overpower enemies more quickly. He is also gifted with the bow and daggers, and is an expert hunter. The sun also strengths him, but only by a small amount.

Weakness: As Alatian is the fast, quick type, he is often defeated by more powerful opponents. He has a fear of fire, and so always hesitates before going near it. Although not a big weakness, it should be noted he often gets nightmares, and freaks out when something from his nightmare becomes true. Also, he is quite lightweight, and is easily tossed around.

Skills/Magic:

Moon Magyk: He knows almost all the moon magyk there is to know. Such magyk includes Luner spells (offensive such as moonbeam, starshower, and meteor. Moonbeam is a ray of solid moonlight and is fired from his hand. It consumes very little energy. Starshower is a hail of small light orbs and comes from just above Alatian's head, slamming to the groun just infront of him. It consumes moderate energy. Meteor comes from a point high above the arena, and is a massive flaming rock that can hurtle in any direction. It consumes a massive amount of energy.), Silver (Defensive, such as reflection, moon shield, and veil. Reflection is an invisble shield that reflects most projectiles. A tiny amount of energy is consumed. Moon Shield is a spell that summons a shield made of moonstone to use in battle. It can withstand any phisical attack, but goes away when hit with a powerful blow. Moderate energy consumed. Veil temporarly makes the user invisible, and gives him the ability to fly. A huge amount of energy is consumed.) and Praying to Artemis (powerful yet draining attacks related to the moon or hunting. They are random spells, but usually help a situation improve. No energy is consumed, but Alatian can only pray to Artemis if he is on the losing end of a battle, and only when the need is great) The strength of all moon magyk doubles the the moonlight, and halves in the sunlight.

Solar Magyk: Alatian knows the basics of Solar magyk. He knows Pyro (weak offensive skills such as sunbeam, lava flow and blind. Sunbeam is a sun based moonbeam. Same energy consumed. Lava Flow is an explosion of molten energy. Moderate energy lost. Blind flashes a ray of bright light into the eyes of an enemy. Low amount of energy consumed.), Gold (weak defensive such as absorb and flame wrap. Absorb weakens an opponet while strengthing yourself. Moderate energy consumed. Flame Wrap makes a small cacoon of flames to protect yourself. Moderate energy consumed.) and praying to Apollo (semi-powerful yet draining attacks related to the sun and archery. They are random spells, but usually help a situation improve. No energy is consumed, but Alatian can only pray to Apollo if he is on the losing end of a battle, and only when the need is great) The strength of all Solar magyk doubles in sunlight and halves in moonlight.

Hunter Magyk: Alatian knows every single skill a hunter can learn, such as tracking and trapping a creature, and most of the hunter magyk, which is mostly just good reflexes, but contains a few magykal elements, such as soul arrow (firing arrows constucted of light rather then phisical ones), and foresight (ability to reacted to something a splitsecond before it happens, but often fails.)

Appearance: Alatian has black hair, that goes down to his eyes. He has silver eyes, and always a serious, solemn look on his face. He is short for his age, which is good, because it keeps his center of gravity low, which is good for dodging attacks.

Personality: He is always serious, but tends to be a kind individual. He helps people, but always expects something in return. He takes on his enemies in a professional manor, and doesn't 'trash talk' a lot.

Biography: The cloaked figure slowed down as she got to the village of Tarn. She stopped and bent down. A claw mark was embedded in the mud. She got up and muttered something to herself. She picked up her pace, and stopped in front of a house. She climbed onto the window, then the shingles, then onto the roof itself. She started running. Rain was coming down fast. She would have to talk with Zeus about the weather later. She jumped three meters onto the next roof, and kept running as if nothing had happened. As she jumped onto the next roof, a growl got her attention. She ducked as a thorn went over her head. Defiantly a manticore. She turned to face a man. He was quite tall, with a tattered robe. He had clawed feet, and a scorpion-like tail, from which he fired another poison thorn. It whipped past the woman, so close it took off her hood. She had brownish-blackish hair, and silver eyes. Her ears were slightly pointed, and she had a stern look on her face.

"Artemis" the manticore growled.

"Yes, Thorn. It seems I missed you in Salbrooke."

Thorn the manticore laughed.

"Did you enjoy the show?"

"Twenty deaths and eighty fatal woundings is no laughing mater, Thorn."

Thorn spat on the ground.

"What's it to you, Artemis? Just another hundred mortals send to Hades?"

The clouds parted, and Artemis was bathed in moonlight. All of a sudden her senses opened. It was like instantly drinking a thousand cups of coffee. She drew her blades, and ran straight at the manticore. Thorn fired twenty thorns at Artemis, but, thanks to the moonlight, she easily ducked, dodged, and weaved through each one. At the end she rolled up to Thorn and stabbed him in the stomach.

"It's not over, Artemis." He chuckled. "I'll be back in ten years, as every monster does" and with that, he disintegrated into dust.

***

Artemis flew back to Olympus on a Pegasus Poseidon had lent her. She entered the massive hall of gods and strode up to Zeus.

"Thorn is destroyed, father."

"Good work, Artemis. He was becoming a real threat to the Mortals."

Artemis strode away, and Aphrodite stepped into her path.

"Why in Sparta would you become a maiden?" she asked.

Artemis sighed. Aphrodite was the goddess of love, and was always questioning her about becoming a maiden.

"Because someone needs to think with common sense"

"THAT'S IT!" screeched Aphrodite. "I CURSE YOU TO FALL IN LOVE WITH THE NEXT MAN YOU SEE!"

"Damn you, Aphrodite" Artemis said angrily as she searched for a blindfold.

***Three days later***

Artemis crossed the sky at full speed. She had to make haste towards Tarn. She relied on the Pegasus to take her there, as she could not see because of the blindfold. Rumors of a rouge minotaur had started in Tarn, the place where she had fought Thorn three days ago. As she landed, a young blacksmith by the name of Percy Elkald came outside to find a winged horse sitting in his back garden. A blindfolded young women slid off the horse and strode over to Percy. She used her sense of touch to move around.

"Excuse me." Percy called out. "You seem to be lost. May I help you?"

"Yes" Artemis called back. "I'm looking for the village of Tarn."

"It's about a half mile from here."

"Thank you"

A second later, a minotaur burst from the bushes. It rushed Artemis, and tore her to the ground, ripping off her blindfold. The Minotaur came for the killing blow, but Percy stabbed it in the back with his sword. It disintegrated into ashes, and Artemis opened her eyes, and saw Percy. The curse took over, and she instantly fell in love with him.

They lived together for a year, and had a baby, Ptomely Elkald. After exactly one year, the curse broke, and Artemis left Percy and Ptomely. On Ptomely's tenth birthday, a manticore attacked him. After Artemis came and killed it, she gave Ptomely the moon daggers Luner and Eclipse.

***Ptomely's thirteenth birthday***

"Thanks, dad!" Ptomely exclaimed as he took out a book of myths and legends from it's box.

"Your welcome, son. Open this one. It's from your mother."

Ptomely tore open the package, and found a pair of brown boots.

"My mom is SOO cheap!" he lamented.

"There's a card as well."

Ptomely opened the card and read.

To Ptomely.

Happy Birthday! I can't believe your thirteen already. The boots in here do something special when told Maia!

-Artemis

Ptomely strapped on the boots and exclamied "Maia!" The boots sprouted wings and hovered a foot in the air.

"AWESOME!" Ptomely yelled as he wove around the living room.

"Ok, that's enough, son. You can try them outside later" called his father.

Ptomely touched ground and moved over to his last present, from his uncle, Apollo. It contained the Bow of the Sun.

"Cool!" Ptomely exclaimed.

"It's a really nice bo-"

"ROAR!"

The house was engulfed in flames as the dragon Ladon flew over his house. Ptomely ran for cover, as Ladon ripped the house in two.

"Run, Ptomely!" Yelled Percy as he fought the dragon. Ladon picked up Percy and ate him in one bite.

Ptomely turned in horror and ran. Ladon rushed outside, but Ptomely simply turned around and used his blind spell on the dragon. Temporarily blinded, the dragon thrashed about as Ptomely escaped. Ptomely ran to the Temple of Artemis, where he prayed to his mother. She told him that she had just killed Ladon, and told him to change his name and never stay in one place, because many monsters had risen and were looking for him. So Ptomely cast away his old name and changed it to Alatian. Alatian fought countless monsters, and one day encountered a fairly young man, named Saronius Damnold. Saronius knew a lot of the old legends, and Alatian questioned him about one he had read about, the Time Pebble.

"Oh yes, the Time Pebble. It was said to have the power to turn back time. It currently resides with the cyclops Polyphemus. No one knows where he is."

So Alatian started his quest for Polyphemus, and has been on it ever since.

Could someone please (dis)approve my character. It's been a long time.

Been a long time?! Excuse me?! A lot of people have to wait over 10 days, you posted your character YESTERDAY. Normally i wouldn't go out of my way to post something this irrealavent, again, but seeing someone complain about wait time after not even giving the mods 24 hours really burns me up.

I don't mean to sound harsh, but get in line. You'll be waiting here for a spell.

Sorry, my friend filled me in on what to do

First, you're going to have to elaborate upon his "magyks" (I'm assuming you intended to spell it that way.) What are these skills/spells/abilities? The descriptions you have now are too vague.

Once you've fixed that, post here and I'll take another look.

Yup, magyks is the translation of the greek word for magic, and i thought it looks rather neat. It's all fixed up now, i divided the magyk into schools, offensive, defensive and prayer, while the hunter skills/magyk was explained better. I also added a surname to his fake name, to give it more authenticity.

Okay, good start, but you're going to have to detail each skill a bit more. What do they look like? How does he use them (blast the energy from his hand, etc.)? How much energy does each consume?

Ok, i worked and improved on the skills/magic section.

*pokes Altamira*