Drake Alan Card

Name: Drake Alan Card

Age: 23 years old

Race: Human

Sex: Male

Hair: Short, spiked and brown

Eyes: A dark shade of brown

Weight: 151 lbs.

Height: 5'9"

Weapon: Differs on each mask: Mental Magic; Elemental Magic; Metal Weapons.

Armor: Differs on each mask: A swirling aura over his skin that blocks arcane attacks; floating pieces of metal close to his body that blocks most melee attacks, and nothing, but the third mask doesn't protect from anything, but turns him into whatever form he chooses.

Skills/Magic: As explained, the first allows him to be himself, he can and morph into anything he wants and make things float in the air, moving objects with his mind as long as he concentrates. The second allows him to summon plate or chainmail armor and any weapon at random, nothing other than that.The third allows him to cast elemental spells, fire blasts, water whip, earthquakes, and gale winds, plus he can combine any of the four together for different results.

His first mask is named the Deception Mask: It doesn't transform Drake, but his mind mellow and understanding. He likes to be around people, isn't easily angered, organized, romantic, chivalrous, and happy. It allows him to transform into anything he wishes and can use this mask anytime he chooses and telekinesis and telepathy, but he needs a few moments to concentrate for that.

The second mask, the Wrath Mask: This mask transforms his eyes and hair black, his skin pale and morphs him into a warrior and cannot change to the Empathy mask, he has to wait a few minutes for it's energies to replenish. He is usually rash, rude, relentless, and always wanting to fight. He can summon any weapon, but it comes at completely random.

The third mask is the Destruction Mask: It turns his hair red and eyes green. His mood is selfish and strange. He enjoys pain and is sadistic, cruel and mocking. It offers him the power of the elements but he can only use the four basic elemental powers of fire, earth, water and wind. He needs control over them via his emotion so he can't use them in any other form.

Strengths: Drake has to have one of his mask on at all times, the all keep his face the same way it looks, though. Whenever he puts on one, he can see and live fully, but the mask changes not just how he looks, but how he feels and thinks. Each mask offers different strengths and weaknesses. His masks can only be removed by himself and can't be separated from his person.

Weakness: The first mask doesn't offer any protection or power other than shapeshifting and telekinesis which needs concentration. The second makes him hotheaded and he doesn't think things through and is weak to magic while the third makes him weak to melee and he underestimates his enemy. He cannot change between the second and third mask freely he has to wait a half an hour to change.

Appearance: He always wears a dark blue coat and a black shirt with blue jeans and brown boots. The masks only affects how how his eyes and hair look.

Personality: As stated before, it differs on which mask he wears, but he usually wears his first mask as a default, it makes him feel the most normal.

Biography: Drake was always a competitive troublemaker. The main reason was because he was always bored with his life. His brother, Daniel, was cruel to him and it rubbed off, while his sister, Laura was nice and cared about him, that left a mark. Still his parents always fought and his brother constantly made fun of him for being the youngest, weakest person he knew. Drake was a confused teenager at the time and decided to work at a theatre during the day, making masks and puppets for a strange man who knew some weird magic that made the puppets come to life, the theatre's famous gimmick.

Years later, his brother had joined the king's guard and found another reason to mock Drake. Drake, jealous and angered also joined. He trained day and night, always mad at his brother, trying to beat him. Meanwhile, his sister trained at the arcane academy and she wanted to help him with his problem with their brother. She offered him magic lessons and he accepted, knowing with this knowledge he could beat his brother.

When he turned 22, he learned enough and challenged Daniel behind the theatre. Daniel wanted to prove how superior he was and accepted. He also told Laura he would be at the theatre, watching a show since she always told their parents of her brother's devious agenda. She didn't believe him for a moment and followed him after he left. Drake and Daniel met behind the theatre and started the fight. Using all he learned, he beat his brother. Drake still wasn't satisfied and was about to kill him when Laura ran out to stop him.

Laura hated her brother, but she wasn't going to let him be killed and stopped him. Drake, still enraged fought back and after a prolonged battle, he used a fire blast to kill her and his brother, also setting fire to the theatre. After a few minutes, he broke down, realized what he had just done. The strange puppeteer came out to see what exactly happened to cause his theatre to be destroyed. Drake begged for his forgiveness and wished he could realize what his siblings could have felt. The puppeteer brought two blank masks and brought them to life, molding them from his brother and sister.

That's his story.

(Man... it's hard to write bios, I don't want my other character approved)

It would be best to organize this differently. Try this:

Originally Posted by MaskedLegend

Skills/Magic: As explained, the first allows him to be himself, he can and morph into anything he wants and make things float in the air, moving objects with his mind as long as he concentrates. The second allows him to summon plate or chainmail armor and any weapon at random, nothing other than that.The third allows him to cast elemental spells, fire blasts, water whip, earthquakes, and gale winds, plus he can combine any of the four together for different results.

His first mask is named the Deception Mask: It doesn't transform Drake, but his mind mellow and understanding. He likes to be around people, isn't easily angered, organized, romantic, chivalrous, and happy. It allows him to transform into anything he wishes and can use this mask anytime he chooses and telekinesis, but he needs a few moments to concentrate for that.

The second mask, the Wrath Mask: This mask transforms his eyes and hair black, his skin pale and morphs him into a warrior and cannot change to the Empathy mask, he has to wait a few minutes for it's energies to replenish. He is usually rash, rude, relentless, and always wanting to fight. He can summon any weapon, but it comes at completely random.

The third mask is the Destruction Mask: It turns his hair red and eyes green. His mood is selfish and strange. He enjoys pain and is sadistic, cruel and mocking. It offers him the power of the elements but he can only use the four basic elemental powers of fire, earth, water and wind. He needs control over them via his emotion so he can't use them in any other form.

Strengths: Drake has to have one of his mask on at all times, the all keep his face the same way it looks, though. Whenever he puts on one, he can see and live fully, but the mask changes not just how he looks, but how he feels and thinks. Each mask offers different strengths and weaknesses. His masks can only be removed by himself and can't be separated from his person.

Weakness: The first mask doesn't offer any protection or power other than shapeshifting and telekinesis which needs concentration. The second makes him hotheaded and he doesn't think things through and is weak to magic while the third makes him weak to melee and he underestimates his enemy. He cannot change between the second and third mask freely he has to wait a half an hour to change.

See? It's best to list all that in skills/magic first so you can just change the order of the sections to better fit your character. Understand? You don't have to do that but I strongly recommend it. So does that work for you?

Originally Posted by Shrub

It would be best to organize this differently. Try this: See? It's best to list all that in skills/magic first so you can just change the order of the sections to better fit your character. Understand? You don't have to do that but I srongly recommend it. So does that work for you?

Oh sure, I'll reorganize it so it's more easy understood, thanks.

Okay, I suppose that will do for now, but truthfully those descriptions are lacking. I hope to see this guy again later, when you have developed him more with a more impressive profile. I also strongly suggest doing character updates after a long time of RPing and battling with a character. So many things can change and be developed as you gain more experience.

I also suggest checking Forneus' characters for a good idea of what a good and detailed profile for a character is. Check out his character Narken, and keep that in mind for the next time you create a new character or want to update one. I'll approve this now, though.

*Approved.*