Dameul Sublustris

Name: Dameul Sublustris (or Dan)

Age: 14

Race: Human

Sex: Male

Hair: Crimson colored. The front is spiked, and the back is somewhat spiked like Sonic the Hedgehog.

Eyes: Brownish-red color.

Weight: 165 pounds.

Height: 5'8 1/2" (5 foot and 8 1/2 inches)

Weapon: Double Blade Halbred (example: http://www.curiousantiquities.com/images/HalbredLrg.jpg). There's a strand of cloth wrapped at one of the edges, near the bottom of the blade. The handle is crimson colored.

Strengths: He's experienced with his halbred and tends to swing his body around to do several quick combos. He can also use this as a means of defense. He's an average runner.

Weakness: No armor. He can't pick up his halbred as quick as he wants (its a bit heavy). He has no other physical weapon besides the halbred.

Skills/Magic: Flame manipulator. He can use Flame attacks only.

Fire Stream: Shoots a wave of Fire at the opponent. It is a reddish colored flame thats power depends on how much time he could charge it. A short charge makes it weak, and a longer one makes it stronger. However, getting hit makes him need to charge, AGAIN.

Flame Wall: Protective flame wall that incinerates anything that touches. However, this spell drains his energy. This prevents him from being hit from any physical or magical attacks (besides Light, Shadow, Water, and Wind attacks). This is also a charge attacks, so the shorter the charge, the weaker and smaller the wall is.

Flame Ring: Makes an inferno ring that surrounds him and his opponent. The Ring slowly comes inward, and is too high for a ground person to avoid. The only way to avoid it is to cancel the spell by damaging Dan. He RARELY uses this attack, since he thinks its a big waste of time.

Flame Whip: Flame wraps around his arms into whip like objects to hit the opponent. This isn't a charge move, but it is standard strength. The whip can be easily cut through and cancelled.

Appearance: Crimson spiked hair. Brownish-red eyes. A Crimson handle Halbred. Reddish t-shirt with golden rings around his neck, and the end of his sleeves. Brown braggy pants with golden lines running down the sides.

Personality: Happy-go-lucky. He doesn't fight a lot, but he seems to try to stop them. Optomistic in life, and thinks nothing could ruin it. He's nice to people and loves to joke around, even if they are making fun of him.

In battle he can become very serious, though he never looks to win or lose the fight. He just doesn't want to be viewed as a weakling.

Biography:

Damuel was just a normal teenaged boy. He lived in the human town of Elida down from Ilidar mountains. There, humans built farms and raised live stock. Dan was a wrangler then and used to help around Elida.

He'd wrangle up goats and other fame animals and help around the village. Everyday he was payed a silver. The more silver he got, the closer he was to actually helping the entire city.

One day when the merchants were coming through, Dan bought a medallion that had the mark of fire etched into it. Little did he know, this medallion slowly inhanced his body.

After a month or so of having this medallion, Dan started to notice something strange. Fire, a previously feared thing, would BEND at his command. He would make it go left and it would follow. He raised it, and it obeyed. He had control over fire!

No one noticed however. He practiced in secret. Any sort of wizardry was automatic banishment from the town. But Damuel never wanted to leave, so in secret he trained.

The ways he'd practice were simple. See how long he could control the fire and how many ways he could bend it.

He thought this was cool to be able to control fire. Yet he had little control. That ultamitely had a downfall.

One day, when he was practicing, he accidently ignited his house on fire. He told it to stop, but it continued to burn. He tried to move it away from the home, but it spread to other areas. Soon all of Elida burned to the ground. None survived.

"What have I done?" Dan stared at the burnt area that used to be his home. "WHAT HAVE I DONE?!"

Dan ran away from the wreckage and seeked someone who would train him to become better at controlling his powers. To this day, he hasn't.

Is this good?

Pretty good. It just needs a little work in two areas.

First off, his personality is a little weak. Try to tell what he thinks of other people and maybe what he thinks while in battle.

Second, his biography is rather short. Tell what happened before he bought the medallion. Then maybe tell how he practiced with it. Did he tell anyone about his magical power? Did everyone die in the fire or did they survive yet hate Dameul because he caused the fire? Things such as that.

Alrightly, edit those two and I'll take another look at him.

Sorry for the wait. I've enhanced Damuel over the past month so go ahead and look at him.

*Approvedeth*

Originally Posted by Ranarath

*Approvedeth*

Whoo! Thank you! :3