Larum

Name: Larum
Age: 17

Race: 1/2 human 1/2 demon

Sex: male

Hair: Short black hair that is straight and goes on his forehead

Eyes: red

Weight: 164 lbs.

Height: 6'1"
Weapon: Larum uses two knives that are super sharp. He also can transform into a demon for a short time. only once per battle. as a demon, he uses claws and his head (headbut).

Strengths: Larum is very fast, and has pinpoint precision with his knives. He can target a vital organ just by seeing someone move. he has to stand still for that though. Anything he does in battle is hardly seen. he has such fast movement that he can create doppelgangers when he runs.

Weakness: Occasionally, Larum will get splitting headaches in the heat of battle, and slow down immensly. I probably spelled that wrong. He also gets blinded by huge light, so he hides until nighttime, or wears a hood. Larum can't be riminded of what happened at his village or he will get really angry and mess up his battle. For example, if he is reminded one thing he will do is grit his teeth and run at his opponent, missing, and worthlessly expelling energy.

Skills/Magic: once per battle, Larum can throw his knives at super speed. His knives come back immediately if they are within twenty meters.

Appearance: Larum wears two black sheathes on either side of him, and a green cloak outside of battle. He has a tattoo on his left arm that is an arrow sort of, and two curved lines above and below it. On his right arm is a cloth to heal wounds, he keeps it on at all times. He has a jet black tunic with a design in the middle,(It will explain that in his biography.) on under his cape and black pants. not jeans but a tunic like links pants that he wears. his boots are black too, and they make him trip sometimes.

Personality: Larum is quiet, but he mumbles to himself in public. if angered, as mentioned earlier, he will assault the person with "very easy to dodge" slashes with his knife. If the sun get's in his eyes, he will actually talk and scream because he can't see. If somone mentions Gannondorf, he will beg and plea for answers, if he doesn't get answers, he will threaten them, even fight them for answers.

Biography: Larum grew up on in a jail. His townsfolk imprisoned him because he was half demon. they didn't know it until one day, he transformed into a demon and ravaged the town market because the merchant wouldn't give him any good fruit. The townsfolk had one clue though. When he was in kindergarden, some kid was bullying him. Larum grabbed some sand and threw it at the kid.
"Aah! My eyes!" The kid cried. Larum ran at his blind opponent with such speed that a dust storm was created. The kid that was bullying Larum was suddenley thrown into the air. Luckily, he landed on a trampoline of sorts. Everyone was coughing, and when the dust cleared, Larum was gone. Apparenly, he was hungry. He was found in the butcher's shop later. He had a good life after that. Though his parents punished him, he was worshpped at school until that fateful day when he freaked out at the market. His meals were brought to him by knights who had Silver lances. no matter how hard he tried, he couldn't turn demon again. When he was twelve, his village was attacked by stalfos, and the knights were fighting a war far away.
"What's going on?" He asked a civilian from his window.
"Monsters! someone let the demon out! He can kill them!" a few second later, someone unlocked his cell, only to be killed by a stalfos behind him. Larum grabbed the knife from the dead body and stabbed the wolf-like creature. He went outside and saw bodies falling, people yelling and a man on a horse laughing. Larum figured the man to be a knight and ran up to him
"Sir knight! do you not see the monsters? Please! Protect the village!" Larum cried. The man looked at him, and shot a ball of energy at him."Ugh!"
"What? A knight you say? Ha! Thats rich! I am no knight. I am Gannondorf! This land rightfully belongs to me!"
"Stupid Gannondork." Larum mumbled before he rose and charged. Gannondorf grabbed him, wrenched the knife from his hand and looked him over.
"Hmm. Half demon eh? Well. I won't kill you here. You could be a good resource in the future." Gannondorf put a seal on his shirt so he couldn't turn demon and kill him."I'll see you later, Larum." The man knocked Larum unconsionshunse(Spelled wrong) and left him on the ground. five years later, Larum set out on a journey to train. Suddenly, he got a splitting headache. Memorys from that night came back. He knew he would have to face them eventually, and when it stopped, he left his village. He had to kill Gannondorf. If he didn't, those memorys would haunt him forever.

Put in some more strengths and weaknesses. Expand on personality. Can you explain some of his 'childhood' before he was put in jail?

Okay Gracie, I edited it.

It seems fine enough now. Approved. *stamps*