Raykomi Hitikoshi

Name: Raykomy Hitikoshi (Ray-ko-me Hi-ti-ko-shy) or just Ray for short.
Age: 18
Race: Human
Sex: Male
Hair: Silver
Eyes: Brown
Weight: 150 pounds
Height: 5'6

Weapon: Raykomy has a blade and a lance. (See appearance below.)

Strengths: He's really good at counter attacking as well as attacking normally with his blade and lance. He's also very smart, enabling him to come up with new attacks and combinations and such. Though, he seldom makes really powerful ones.

Weaknesses: He's not the fastest guy in the world. Actually he's very slow because of his weapons, which are a litte heavy. Also, he often get's distracted, mostly when he's supposed to do things, such as missions, but not in battles.

Skills/Magic: None

Appearance: Click Here.

Personality: Ray is very patient unlike some people, he can wait for anything. He doesn't get annoyed all the time, but he does get annoyed. Especially if i's someone else who asked him to do something and is impatient when he doesn't finish right away. He's also trustworthy. When it comes to battleing or doing missions, he'll try to do anything just to win, though, that doesn't alwais work.

Biography: He was born in a town called Lakinto, and grew up there until the age of 13. The day he turned 13, he decided to leave and make a new life, since he hated his old life. Everyone looked up to him in his old life, expected him to do everything for everyone, and it made him mad, so he decided to leave. For once, he'd do something for himself.

Once he was on the road, he needed to learn some self defence. Until he did though, he was helpless, he couldn't defend himself in any way. Before he found him though, Ray had explored many towns and has met many new people. He's made some friends of which he keeps in touch with. After all the fun he had, he then decided to find a mentor. He traveled for about a month before actually finding a mentor for his training. It was hard to convince the trainer to help Ray out, but it finally worked.

Ray had to wake up every morning at 5:00 AM to start his training and finished a 6:00 PM. It was hard at first to get used to his new schedule, but after a month or two, he got used to it. This helped a lot though, it made Ray wake up early every day, and becuase he worked from the morning until the afternoon, his muscles were really dveloped, making him extremely strong, which is why his speed isn't as bad as it would normally be.

After a year of doing chores that enhanced his strength, Ray was allowed to start learning how to fight with a lance. He started out using a really light mock-up lance. After all the moves and attacks he learned, he started to use a real lance, which was a lot more difficult than he expected it to be. After mastering how to use his lance, he was awarded with a lance to call his own. After he was awarded his lance, he learned the art of the sword. He did the same as he did with the lance, he started with a mock up and eventually learned with a real one, but he wasn't awarded with a sword though.

Once his master finally thought he was good enough, he sent Ray on a few battle missions to see if Ray can use what he learned. The battles were tough, but Ray was capable of defeating his opponent in the end. The battles became tougher and tougher, but her never lost, although he came close to losing, he pulled through in the end. After those battles, Ray became free once again, but this time he was well armed, and actually able to defend himself.

After he started wondering and exploring the world around him again, he decided to go to a blacksmith to get a sword to use in battle, after all, what was all that training for anyway. He visited many towns to find the perfect blacksmith that would be able to craft the perfect sword. When he finally came across one that would be able to make his sword, he stayed in that town until the sword was crafted and ready for Ray. Once the sword was finally done, Ray went off exploring again, looking for people to battle, he was excited to test his sword out.

Ray had battled many people while exploring, but that didn't make him feel complete. There was something missing, so Ray had made it his goal to find what was missing.

Very good. Though, you might want to proofread the biography; I saw a couple simple mistakes.

*Approvedeth*

Thanks, and edited I shall.