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Old 02-26-2007, 11:37 PM
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Fenir

Name: Fenir Beealzibub Astaroth

Age: Older than time

Race: Demon of the First Hierarchy

Sex: Male

Hair: Demon: Pitch black hair that goes to his waist. Scarecrow:none

Eyes: Demon: Black. Scarecrow: flames

Weight: Demon: 2 tons. Scarecrow: 100lbs

Height: Demon:12'. Scarecrow:6'

Weapon: none

Strengths: He can see better in the dark, and he has more power at night. Any mind control attempts are shot back at the user. He is burned by a crucifix and will go into convulsions, but afterwards, he will get up with more power.

Weakness: He can not see very well in the daylight and has less power in the day(doesn't effect him while in the Scarecrow). A crucifix will burn him and cause him to go into convulsions, but afterwards, he will get up with more power. The name of the lord makes him flinch. If said at the right time, it could provide an opening.

Skills/Magic: (D=Demon, SC=Scarecrow)
(D)Flame Armor: Flames jump and from a fiery film on his body. Blocks out sunlight.
(SC)Ichabod's Dance: Fenir will dance around wildly, causing the enemy to let their guard down.
(D,SC)Deception: Fenir can deceive people by changing his appearance and voice.
(D)Demon Flame: Fenir will shoot fireballs at his target until it hits them, or he is hit. If a target is hit, the flame will burn them, but it will also seep into the person's soul and spread until it burns it's victim from the inside out. This takes 72 hours.
(SC)Stretch: Fenir will stretch his arms and reach for his victim. If they are caught, Fenir will strangle or crush them.
(D,SC)Possession: Fenir can transfer a portion of his being into people by touching them. But he can only do it 7 times. Once for each Deadly sin. Once transfered, the person will enact the deadly sin that possesses them, while they go about doing Fenir's bidding. The more times he does this the more Fenir's condition deteriorates.

Appearance: Demon: He stands at an amazing 12' tall and weighs an astounding 2 tons. He is the image of a classic demon. red skin, black eyes, bat-like wings, claws, a spear like tail, and pointed ears, Goat like bottom half, and cloven hooves. He has two horns just above his eye brows. They go out horizontally for about 12" and go up vertically 42". His pitch black hair goes past these horns down to his eyes. The back goes down to his waist.

Scarecrow: His head lookes like Oogie Boogie form the Nightmare Before Christmas. He has a very evil smile, and his eyes are holes that have flames in them. He has a rope around his neck to keep his head on. He has a plaid shirt on and his hands are a pair of gloves that are extended to look like claws and are as sharp as them. He had ropes around his wrists to keep his hands on. He had a rope around his waist to keep plain brown pants on. His feet are socks that are extended into two sharp toes. He has ropes around his ankles to keep his feet on. On his middle section is a sewn up gash where someone had cut him open. Under that cloth is a black shadow.

Personality: He has a twisted personality. He will always crack black humor even during battles. He is insane, even by demon standards. He will "play" with his enemies in battles and come in swiftly for the kill. Being a demon, he only needs to devour peoples souls, but he enjoys the feeling he gets from eating like a mortal, so he will eat the entire person, bones and all. Whenever he comes in for the kill he always says "Me thinks me sees a meal". Sometimes, if he is facing a tough opponent, he will injure them and take them to a place to torture them until their souls break, then he devours the person. His excuse being that "Tough souls give him indigestion," If he is not grinning an evil grin, he is in a violent rage. He does have great appreciation for music. If someone can impress him with their musical talent, he will let them go.

Biography: At one time his name was Fenir Jehovah Michal, but that was along time ago. Since then he and the other followers of Lucifer, now Satan, had been cast down into an area below earth called Hell. Fenir was punished more than Satan. He had been a spy on God. He was thrown into the deepest pit in hell and was forced to watch his life over and over again. The guilt was too much, and he cracked. Even by demons he is considered insane, and dangerous, but loyal to Lucifer. Then one day, Lucifer called Astaroth.
"Astaroth, have i not been a good leader to you and your fellow incubi?" asked Satan.
"You have my liege," Astaroth replied nervously.
"Then tell me why we are loosing SOULS!!" screamed the Prince of lies at the incubus. Everyone in the throne room stopped and stared. Satan sighed and sat on his throne. He putt his head in his hands and shook his head. Suddenly he had an idea.
"Astaroth, send for your son."
"Fenir, sir?"asked Astaroth in an unbelieving tone,"But he's uncontrollable."
"Send for him, or I'll throw you into the pit with him, and let him tear you apart." This scared the incubus and he ran to fetch his son. When Fenir arrived he was bound in chains.
"Those won't be necessary," said Satan to the guard as they took the chains off. Leaving the two to be alone. The room was empty save for Lucifer and Fenir.
"Do you know why you're here?" asked Satan.
"Your going to send me to earth," said Fenir.
"My, my , my, you're smarter than i thought." They spoke of the events that were to occur.
When he was ready to leave, Satan pulled him aside. "Remember Fenir, return without 100,000,000 souls and it's back to the pit." Fenir nodded. As he stepped thru the portal the light hit him. He was weak and he couldn't see. He stumbled into the underbrush and his vision was returned. His first weakness was discovered. He waited there, in the forest for two days, killing all who passed his path. One day a warrior passed his path. He jumped to kill him, but the warrior was quicker, he dodged and thrust forward with his holy sword. It sliced thru Fenir's skin and into his heart. His body was taken into Hell but he knew he couldn't go back, so he sought to find a new body for himself. he searched for years when finally he found the perfect body. A scarecrow. It had no mind to begin with and it could be altered. As he Possessed the scarecrow, a farmer passed and saw his scarecrow hop down from it's post. Fenir saw the farmer and said aloud, "Me thinks me sees a meal," and devoured the farmer. He loved the feeling of eating. so much he kept doing it to all his victims. After many years of collecting souls, he found the warrior who killed him, attacking him more cautiously. after a fierce battle, Fenir was open for attack. The warrior lunged and cut thru the cloth. underneath was a shadow. The bewildered knight was open and Fenir took his chance and consumed him. then consumption of the knight gave Fenir extra strength. He now wanderers the land trying to meet his goal of souls for Satan.

How's this?

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Old 02-28-2007, 03:21 PM
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GRRRR! i hate waiting to be accepted

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Old 03-01-2007, 05:21 PM
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I didn't mean to post the post above this, it just happened out of my anger
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Re: Fenir

Everything looks fine, just maybe hit enter in-between paragraphs of the biography to space them out, so that it's easier to read. He's approved!
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