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first character:myself
Age:13
gender:male Race: Human geeks Eye color: black Hair:black weight:32.0 kg height:3"02 class: time travelling wizard abilities:advanced healer, master of fire, ice, water and wind spells.....earth, not so much.....medium trained user of dark spells weapons: elemental sword( when i like to practice my swordfighting) and the know-it all staff which helps me very much on conjuring spells! weakness: a book(don't ask why) skills: time-travelling, predictions, good at thievery, love a good book Appearance: a gray robe, with a staff, mysterious looking Personality: extremely sarcastic, likes studying, likes to fight when in the mood Biography:I am from a village which travels through time, recording anything that could happen, teachings of magic, or any useful information....... and so only i and other timetravelers can take you to the village.....i am someone who also collects information about time, and its possibilities......and sometimes i drop in to fight... i am really selfish and i go crazy for a book... we don't have TV where i come from...really sad... i know. Sometimes i cry to distract my enemies! It works lots of times! i usually just like to show off my abilities and sometimes i lose concentration is lost...bad things happen then. i have no goals, i just wander through time, aimlessly. My job is to collect data from different periods in time and sometimes fix a few.. loopholes on the time line i don't care about dying a i am good now, and i'll be good when i die
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02-25-2007, 04:33 PM
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Re: first character:myself
Carge, hey. Now, I don't mean to offend you, but this requires massive revisions. You need to read the entire thread on making a character, and you need considerably more length and background. Look at some of my characters for a reference, if need be.
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02-27-2007, 04:29 PM
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Re: first character:myself
oh, ok, i'm gonna edit it.....
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04-01-2007, 10:23 AM
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Re: first character:myself
ok, can someone look at it now? i've edited it... can someone gimme feedback?
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04-16-2007, 07:18 PM
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Re: first character:myself
I would recommend going here and reading through everything in there. That should help you out a great deal.
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04-16-2007, 07:27 PM
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Re: first character:myself
oh, ok thanks
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