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Spiff
Name: Spiff
Age: 13 Race: Human Sex: Male Hair: Wavy, light brown, short hair. Eyes: Shining hazel Weight: Without armor 165lbs with armor 205lbs Height: 5ft 3in Weapons: Diamond forged sword, its special attributes are its knowlage of decades of sword combat, and its sheer power that makes it glow. Spiked Shiny Shield, very shiny and will cover all of Spiff if he ducks behind it. It reflects some spells and light. When some spells or light hit the spikes, magic or light is scattered and reflected everwhere. Small pocket knife, not much use but is great at real close range. Armor: Heavy Black Chain Mail, four layers of heavy black chains. It provides great protection, due to the weight, increases the force of blows. The only negitive is that it slows movement. Strengths: Mastery of Sword combat through the knowlage of old wise warriors who once used the sword and stored their wisdom, knowlage and power in the diamond sword, which was given when Spiff touched it. Power, his blows are devistating to light enemies but, that is, if he hits them. Anger also increases his power. Defence and stamina are also of Spiff's strengths, his chain mail is close to unbreakable which provids great protection while going with Spiff's abillity to take many hits which also helps against the force of the blow on his armor when he takes hits from weapons. Weaknesses: Magic, due to his small knowlage of magic his only protection to magic is his shield, which reflects and scatters the magic. Agillity, due to his heavy armor and relying on power instead of speed. Fast enemies can out run or out manuver him. Cheapshots, becaue he is only human. Unexpected things, Spiff tries to examine the enemy and tries to predict their moves so if they do something unexpected he can't predict it so he can't protect against it. Flying enemies, he can only try to pull them down with a retrieving spell if it doesn't work he has to become creative. Skills: Mastery of Sword by gaining the knowlage and wisdom of old warriors who once used the sword. Some weak fire spells, used to help in icy situations and fuse his sword with fire to help against ememies that are weak to fire. Some weak ice spells to help in hot situations and to fuse his sword with ice to use against enemies that are weak to ice. Combining spells, to combine spells like fire+ice= bluefire. Retrieving spells, to retrive far away items or pull flying enemies or when spiff throws his sword at an enemy, to retrieve it. Manipulation, Can manipulate people easily with his smooth words and his hazel eyes seem to look into one's mind and find the perfect things to say, it usually gets him what he wants. Appearance: Spiff has wavy light brown short hair and shining hazel eyes, and fair skin. Normally would wear a sweatshirt and pants, but now wears deep black chain mail, and is equiped with a sword that glows with power and a big very shiny spiked shield that reflects some magic and light. Pesonality: Spiff is very intelligent, curious, loyal, proud, somewhat friendly, and laughs at danger. He is also argumentitive, manipulative, cunning, and sarcastic. Spiff will not run from a fight and kind of likes fighting to see if there is a challange. Dislikes things that take a long time or repetitive things. Belives in courage, not to brag, honor, and common sense. Spiff was born Thirteen years ago. He grew up with rich parents and was pampred most his life, because he was a single child. He was interested at midevil warfare since he was six. He always used to "swordfight" with his his freinds with small sticks or branches. Spiff was very intelligent when he was a kid and still is in every class he was in advanced classes and he still thought them to be too easy. Then later, at the age of thirteen, he realized somthing, it was that he was bored. Armed with a small pocket knife and a lot of money, he ran away. Not long after he ran away, he found an antique shop. As Spiff walked in he noticed that inside was filled with weapons. He noticed two weapons that were very exepensive, even for someone very rich. They were a big spiked mirrored shield, and a sword that seemed to glow with power. He walked up to the old man running the shop and asked to purchase these items and some heavy black chain mail. Spiff noticed one more thing about the shop, that there was a basment entrance and a sign above it that said "Do not enter" and Spiff, curious by nature, asked where does that path lead to and the old man said "It's a secret". That night he slept behind a tree behind the shop. Later he woke up he noticed the store was gone, so he headed back home and noticed that his home was also gone. Infurated at the thought that he had been abandoned he felt that he had nothing to lose and he rushed back to the spot where the store was. He noticed that all that was left was the basement. As Spiff neared the basement, he unsheathed his sword and all of the sudden decades of knowlage about using the sword and shield was shoved in to his brain. Fealing a rush of courage, he swiftly opened the basement door and saw what awaited him, The Dome. Last edited by spiff2; 03-18-2007 at 03:29 AM. Reason: Made it better and corrected spelling. :) |

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Re: Spiff
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Take a look at what's actually needed for a Character, and put it into sections. Then I'll get back to you. |

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Re: Spiff
Extend Strengths, Weaknesses and Skill from more than just one sentence. And run it through a spellchecker.
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Re: Spiff
It looks great, just one thing:
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Re: Spiff
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Very well, approved. |

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