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Old 02-23-2007, 09:36 AM
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Avinash Sulfura

Name: Avinash Sulfura

Age: 18

Race: Scalix (Dragon-Human)

Sex: Male

Hair: Dark red, almost brown, hair. His hair is simple, the bangs reaching up to his eye brows. His hair length is about to the bottom of his skull.

Eyes: Darkish Blue

Weight: 185 pounds

Height: 7 foot 2 inches.

Weapon: Dark Blade. It looks similar to a normal blade, only completely black with blood red writing on the sides of it. The hilt is black and shaped like dragon fangs (I'll post a picture of it later). It used for mostly as a Physical weapon, and some times a focus for his attacks.

Strengths: He can fly very well with his wings. He is also quick on his feet. He has amazing accuracy and hardly misses.

Weakness: He is weak against Holy magic, or anything of Light Attribute. He wears no armor, so he can be hit by any weapon (swords, arrows, etc.)

Skills/Magic: Dark Blast- Creates a sphere of dark energy. If they get in contact with anything besides himself, then they explode like a bomb.

Dark Lightning: Creates blast of dark lighting to paralyze opponent for a short time (about a few seconds). This needs a long time (about 1 minute) to charge up.

Shadow Meld: He can disappear into the shadows, and cannot be damaged. He mainly uses this for sneak attacks, or to transport from one area to the next. However, he hardly uses to just to run away, for he mostly is brave in combat.

Dark Clone: Creates an exact copy of Avinash (it is all black though with red eyes). It cannot be destroyed physically, but it can be destroyed magically, or if the real Avinash is damaged too much. It is the same as Avinash in every battle style, strength, agility, etc. It also has the same weakness to Light Attribute creatures/warriors.

Appearance: Wears a gray colored tunic and dark blue jeans. He has dark red hair and dark blues eyes. He was born with a black tail and black wings. The left side of his body is decayed, but is as strong as his right side. The decayed skin is black and feels rough. The decayness hasn’t reached the top part of his head, but is slowly growing below his left eye. His arm is completely decayed with the exception that there are few strong muscles there and his arm bones are shown. (picture to come soon).

Personality: He is a dark creature with only the slightest amount of mercy. He loves to kill people, or make them suffer greatly. Being corrupted by his own powers, his good side slowly sinks into becoming nothing. Overall, meeting him is a bad thing unless you are evil.

Bio: Avinash was only 3 when he taken away from his mother. With no recollection of his other family, he lived life with his father and his step-mother, whom he thought was his true mother. He lived a life of complete and exausting training that lasted for hours at time, only leaving a few hours for rest, food, and hardly any playing time.

Years passed, and still Avinash would train to become the Scalix warrior his fathered wanted. But everyday was the same thing, utter failure in his father's eyes. Failure was not an option for Avinash, so he's try harder, only to fail again.

"Why am I a failure to him? Why!" Avinash punched the wall, sending a shock of pain up his right arm.

"He just wants you to become stronger Avinash...." said his mother.

"Stronger? I am already strong!" He shoves his mother to the ground. "But he doesn't care for me. He's only thinking of that vision of a perfect Scalix warrior, and I will never live up to it." He opens the front door and walks out. "I'm leaving to blow off some steam."

Little did Avinash knew, there was a demon feeding off his rage. A demon that would soon be released, and with it, the destruction of the world...

A thing Avinash did while walking was exploring. He didn't have much time to do it, but he explored once in a great while. Normally he'd explore the woods nearby, and that's what he did today.

Taking a step into an old temple he found, Avinash has already sealed his fate. Dark thoughts poured into his soul, causing the demon inside to be released. And with it, the God of Darkness...

He came home soon after, decayed skin on the left side his body. He quietly looked around for his father. Blood was about to spill....

His father was out in the training room. Avinash silently creeped up to him, and with one quick stab by his blade, killed his father. All Avinash could say was "Thank you..." as he gave an evil grin and walked off.

But the demon had bigger plans.... Far bigger plans, to kill all of life... To find the one chosen to be the God of Balance, and kill him. Then chaos will spread, and darkness will cover the whole universe....

Ok. C+C time. I know some parts will not be allowed, like the killing portion, but he'll accept his opponents as weak and will not kill them. Evil!

Ok. Tell me what should be added or removed.
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Old 02-25-2007, 12:21 AM
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Re: Avinash Sulfura

Alright, the only thing that needs to be worked on is his biography. It’s way too short at the moment. Add what his training was like or what it was like when his dark side took over. Did the light side fight back at all? Why did he murder his father and what happened to his mother? What about his brother? Why wasn’t Shrukan around?

Add onto the bio and I’ll take another look at him.
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Old 02-25-2007, 09:03 AM
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Alright, the only thing that needs to be worked on is his biography. It’s way too short at the moment. Add what his training was like or what it was like when his dark side took over. Did the light side fight back at all? Why did he murder his father and what happened to his mother? What about his brother? Why wasn’t Shrukan around?

Add onto the bio and I’ll take another look at him.
Ok. Shrukan wasn't around cause they lived quite a bit ways away. I'll add a new bio later. It'll be the same as this one (as far as events), but more discriptive.

I'll PM you about it later.
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Old 02-25-2007, 09:38 AM
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Okay. ^_^

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