Syzarin Fenrath

name: Syzarin Fenrith


Age: 483(He's a ageless immortal)


RaceUnknown(he resembles a human)


Sex: Male


Hair: Black with silver and redhighlights


Eyes: Redish-Black


Weight: 200 Lbs


Height: 6'10"


Weapons: Two Dragonfang Greatswords. One glows with a black Aura, Has a demon stone in the hilt,and has a black blade and is called Fexrinth.The other glows with a light Aura,has a sapphire Cross in the hilt,and has a white blade and is called Berthenrix.The two can be combined together to make a black and white blade that shimmers with chaos energy called Legacy.


Armor: Dragonhide plate that has intricate runes carve into it to enhance his speed and magic power.


Strengths: Has great resistance to arcane magic due to dragon blood flowing through his veins along with chaos magic.When he goes in to a rage he turns into a Half-dragon/Wolf hybrid form.He also has a natural affinity with nature and can speak animal languages.A dragon shaped mark on his wrist gives him the power to consult with bahuemet.If seperated from his swords he can call them back in an instant.

Weakness: Dark magic and chaos magic.Altough it runs through his veins,it makes him weak to it.he often underestimates evil creatures some times.He is greatly hurt if his swords get injured cause they are bound to his soul.The swords can be in jured by powerful magic or other magic weapons.he cannot use any elemental magic.Also when in rage mode he takes much more damage.


Skills/Magic: He has a strong Level of Dark and light magic Due to it running through his blood.He knows how to manipulate Mana and how to expiriment with diffrent spells.his IQ is well over 300.

Mana Channel: Once per a day he can channel raw mana through his body,but it tires himout and greatly slows his natural regeneration ability.


Dimension Wave Slash: Syzarin can summon a Mass amount of energy form the chaos realm and can release it in a waev of energy.This skill causes mass strain on his body and can only use it once a month.if he uses it more than once a month he dies.A last resort


Dark Messiah: Syzrin opens his soul to Maelbolgia,a great dark spirit, and allows him to use his body for 10 minutes.When in this form his body Grows Black and he starts to resemble a Demonic Dragon.Spikes Grow on his back ,he grows big Demonic scarred wings( kind of like Illidan's but Black),and He grows horns 1 foot long.This move strains his soul greatly and holy creatures sense him as a demon for 1 hour.In this form he is limited to dark magic and is weakened by holy magic


Redeemer:Syzarin opens his soul and lets the platnium dragon,Bahumuet take over his body for 10 minutes.When assuming this form he turns into a golden werewolf like form withe White angelic wings and a halo.He grows Iron plating in varios places on his body like his Forehead,Chest and Neck.This strains his soul greatly and dark creatures sense him as a angelelic being for 1 Hour.in this form he is weakend by Dark magic and is limited to holy magic.

Rage mode: When greatly enraged, Syzarin's mind loses control to his chaos side and takes control.It starts a rampage on everything it senses for 15 minutes and then his sane mind takes control again.This rarely ever happens and has only happened when his wife was killed.


Apperance: Usually wears a Brown/Light tan cloak that hides his armor.His Skin has a tanned complexion and his face always shows boredom.His swords are wrapped in bandges and hanging on his back.On his wrist theres a silver dragon shaped mark.He has an aura of freindliness around him so he's kinda likeable when u first notice him.His hair is kinda wavy but only goes down to the bottom of his neck.Has Crystal on a necklece around his neck.


Personality: He usualy has a Happy-Go-Lucky personality but in battle he gets more serious and never panics.He dislikes anyone who he senses is evil.He also belives in The Platnium dragon god,Bahamuet.He likes to help churches and will do quests for them.He has made many Frieds but he never travels with anyone Because he fears that he they could get hurt by his many enemies


Bio:"Fear denies Faith,But innocence proves nothing"

Born in the heaven an only child,he and his parents lost their immortality when his father had to kill god's son to save his family and god.Though the evidence was never found that that happend,Tiamat Kept the secret hidden.

Tiamat revived god's son and turned him into a demon which hunted down Syzarin's parents as a vendetta.To save him his parents Killed theimselves to kill the Reborn son of god.

Syzarin grew up in a orpanage till he was 18. He found out his his powers when he was 30. He has died once but was revived thanks to Bahuemet.He trained in greatswords till he was 300 years old.He noticed he wasnt aging when he was 100. he found out from Bahuemet that he was a AI(Ageless Immortal).

For the next 100 years he trained ever more with Magic and swords and mastered them.He found companion with a wolf named Rett.He then took3 years to Find his Mothers Sword and his Fathers sword.He then married a farm woman named Mary Shireth and they lived together for 40 years.

Then a turn for the worst happened Tiamat herself came to the material plan and killed Syzarin's wife and locked her soul in the Burning pit of Abbadon.This is the only time he has ever Snapped and lost control of his mind to the chaos side.Now to save her he has to kill both Tiamat and the fallen angel Abbadon.He has tried to open a portal to the Chaos Plane but ended up in Hyrule instead.For 40 years he has searched for a way to Tiamats home plane of Chaos.After finding the Shard of Exlophytis and the Mirror of Segretin in his own world he closer opening a portal to Tiamats Plane of existance.He needs to find artifacts of dark power in Hyrule and has heard of a orb held by Ganondorf...But history has yet to write the rest.......

Okay, not bad but there are some things that need work.

First off, I want you explain how his swords can get injured in the Weaknesses section. Can they be used against other swords for a long time? Do they have to be melted to be hurt? It's a sketching what you're trying to say. Also, I would like you to put at least one more weakness onto him to balance out the strengths he has. He's a little too strong at the moment.

Second, I want you to go into detail about what happens when Syzarin uses the Dark Messiah and Redeemer abilities. Does his body change shape when this happens? What kind of skills can he use? Does he gain a weakness to light or darkness?

Alright, edit those two things and I'll take another look at him.

Ok i edited it

Okay.

*Approvedeth*