Chaos Valkyrie

Name: Kyralie
Age: 150, appears 18

Race: ½ Valkyrie ½ Chaos Lord

Sex: Female

Hair: Long auburn hair that falls to her waist in loose waves. If she wants to, it will alter to match her surroundings. For example, if she were in a forest it would turn to dark brown and greens with leafy patterns imprinted upon it. This is due to her Chaos side.

Eyes: Left is sapphire blue and right is ruby red
Weight: 76kg
Height: 5ft7”

Weapon:
The Suppressor:

A long thin blade with an ornate hand guard that swirls up the blade. The blade is made of sharp, clear crystal that cannot break and is extremely sharp along any edge. Runes are inscribed along the length of the blade. This blade is essential to Kyralie keeping herself humane. Whenever she does a good deed a blue mark appears along the edge of the blade, when she does something bad a red mark appears. When she reaches 10 blue marks her Sadistic form takes control and when red the Berserker side is dominant. Only when she cancels out a deed will she be able to maintain her balance.
The sword also has a compulsion spell within it, urging her to lash out and balance the scales of her debt; disregarding whatever situation she may be in at the time.

The Reaper:

A long ornate scythe. Its blade is made of the same hard crystal as the Sword. Along the staff are metal vines that snake their way down the entire length. At the bottom is a spike like that on a sphere, which can be used to jab at opponents coming up from behind.
It is a scythe used to collect souls from that battlefield and store them until they are released at the gates of the Over world. When Kyralie is in her normal form it glows with a clean white light, yet in her other forms it shines with their respective colours.
When used in battle it tugs at the surrounding souls, urging them to give themselves up and surrender to the paradise that awaits them at the end of their lives.

Armour: She wears a silver breastplate that links over her left shoulder, which has a shoulder guard. Her left arm is armoured with intricate metalwork, reminescent of vines snaking along her arm. Due to the nature of such a metal it is bendable but still hard and connecting the vines is a thin layer of more such metal, encasing her arm in it.
Her right arm is bare of armour and is free for her to use her sword or scythe. Her boots have armour attached up to her knees with vines snaking up her legs to prevent them being hacked off.
Her legs are armoured in the way her left arm is, the armour seeming more like jewelry than defence.

Strengths: Due to her Valkyrie and Chaos sides she is proficient with all weapons but prefers her sword and scythe. She also has the ability to turn into two different forms, the Sadist and the Berserker. Each form has its own strengths and weaknesses, discussed under each respectively.

Weakness: After turning into either of her alternate forms she will fall unconscious, requiring an hour to regain her senses. When she does she will have vague recollections of whatever atrocities she has committed, what few memories she has will haunt her and plague her with what she doesn’t remember.
Everything she does that interacts with other people is countable to her Karmic Debt – for every good deed she does she must do something evil and vice versa. She must always deliberate on what battles to fight and whether she has slighted someone unintentionally.
Her fear of spirits interferes with her task of collecting souls and hinders her in battle, as she does not wish to be accountable for another soul she has to collect.

Skills/Magic: In her normal form Kyralie can use her Valkyrie and Chaos powers in battle.
Valkyrie Inheritance:
Soul Reaping: She can collect the souls of the dead and bring them up to the Over world’s gates.
Flying: She does have four wings on her back that allow her to fly and carry one other person if she tries hard enough. Like her hair, her wings can change to help her camouflage if she wraps them around herself.
Animal Affinity: She has an affinity to ravens and wolves that are the scavengers of war. Her skill allows her to summon them if they are within range and to communicate with them as well.
Shape Shift: Kyralie can also turn into either a raven or a wolf. However she cannot stay in such a form, if she goes over an hour the magic pains her, slowly forcing her to revert back to normal or face the implications of pent up magic going wild.
Chaos Lord:
Luck: Casting a luck spell causes a random quirk of fate to occur that will act in her favour. Can only be used once a day.
50/50: Chance of something un/helpful will occur
Chaotic Sphere: A globe full of bright lights surrounds the opponent, dazzling and confusing them and allowing Kyralie and other not within the spell to take advantage of the opponents distraction.

Appearance: Kyralie has a delicately boned face, almost elfish in its delicateness. Her figure is slim with lithe muscles to prove her worth as a warrioress. Her clothing is mainly white with red lining. She wears a white sleeveless tunic beneath her armour, with a long hood coming over it at the back. Behind her, the armour crosses, allowing space for her four wings. Depending, Kyralie chooses whether she wants her wings out or not. On her right arm are armbands and a glove for gripping her sword. She occasionally wraps a red ribbon around her right arm depending on her mood.
Around her hips are an ornate silver belt and a transparent red skirt that falls to mid thigh. Beneath this she wears tight white shorts and over skirt and shorts is a length of cloth that falls to a point at her knees, with intricate designs upon it in red.
Her boots cover her shins and are covered with ornate armour, vines wrapping around them and extra length at the top to cover her knees and thighs. The armour becomes malleable from there up and wraps around her legs like vines, allowing her to move freely and strong enough to prevent people from slicing her leg off, though it can’t do anything if they stab between the vines.

Personality: She does enjoy talking with people when she loosens up and is friendly to people she meets, unfortunately is she does something to help them she compulsively does something bad, like knocking over market stalls or tripping people. This causes people to regard her as a prankster or as someone mean spirited, not knowing those are the nicer ways of paying back karmic debt. If she wanted to she could easily kill someone to repay the debt.
The thing that stops her from doing so is her persistence in not wanting more souls to collect and she does her best to make sure none appear in her vicinity by trying to stop fights.
Due to her childhood she has moments of low self esteem and these are enhanced by the haunting images of the massacres dealt by her hand and the souls she collects.

Biography:
Her mother was a Valkyrie and her father was a lord of Chaos. Due to this pairing, even though her mother was technically dead, the chaotic nature of her father allowed a child to be carried to full term within her mother, thus creating Kyralie.
This conflict of life and death affected her, her heart becoming half ice and half flame. The icy nature reflected that of her mother, who was dead and therefore had lost her connection with her higher emotions. Her father’s nature was chaotic, full of life and spontaneity and creating the fiery nature of her heart. Unfortunately such things are rarely easy to live with, Kyralie having to learn straight away how to keep her hearts in balance lest she live her life in passion or indifference.
To this end her father gifted her with a sword, the Suppressor. The sword withheld her darker nature, allowing her time to balance the scales rather than switching back and forth between the two states indefinitely.
To allow her to survive her childhood it was agreed that she would be contained in sleep for 150 years, allowing her body to grow til her eighteenth year and then stopping its growth for the remaining length of time.
While in her sleep she was educated on her role as a Valkyrie and Chaos lord, learning from the memories of various warriors and Chaos sorcerers on how to fight and cast spells.
However all was not well. Only her father seemed to approve of his accidental daughter, indeed, her mother had been furious to discover she was with child and had wanted her killed at birth. Instead a deal was struck, Kyralie would live and after she was born her mother would have nothing more to do with her.
Even the attention of the father was not enough though. His attention wavered, always being pulled by the chaotic vibrations in the various realms. It wasn't in his nature to remain fixed to one thing so it was not surprising that his curiousity in what powers his daughter would have would wane, that eventually his visits and thoughts would grow fewer until Kyralie was alone with only vague memories.
When she finally awoke she was given the period of a week to acclimatise herself to the body she inhabited before being sent down into the world to fulfil her duties as a Valkyrie. Yet those childhood memories haunted her, causing her to question her existance and whether or not she was trully meant to live. Her demonic natures within her made her doubt her reason for life and she struggles with herself, trying to keep herself afloat in a world where she knows no one and has never been treated a kind word or a loving touch from a parent.
Every day she strives to find a way to balance her two halves, to make herself whole in the hopes that doing so will redeem herself in her mothers eyes. It was a long concluded fact that love from her father would always be erratic, but it was there.
Kyralie searched for a way to make herself normal, to be accepted by others and to raise her self-worth so that she wouldn't give in to the whispering of her scythe that turned its temptations of giving up upon her when she was at her lowest.

The Sadist
Hair: Becomes a pale cold blue that is straight and hangs in sharp spikes around her face and down to her waist. Ice and frost glitter among her locks, adding the illusion that her hair is made of ice.

Eyes: Both eyes become sapphire blue to indicate her Sadist side is dominant.

Weapon Preferred: The Suppressor

Fighting style: In her Sadistic form she prefers minimalist movements, using sidesteps to evade and occasionally using her sword to divert the enemy’s blade, not directly confronting it.
If not staying still she circles her opponent, using quick strikes to leave painful wounds that aren’t themselves lethal. She slowly inflicts more wounds to bleed her opponent out or she incapacitates them bit-by-bit, disabling one limb at a time and pro longing the death.

Weakness: The Sadist has the habit of underestimating her opponents. Due to her Chaos side she is stronger than normal humans and has the belief that none can reach her skill at death art. Because of this she prolongs the deaths enough that her enemy can strike back. Her arrogance causes her to overlook the passion in her enemies, a passion she doesn’t understand due to her cold heartedness, and therefore she doesn’t understand the strength those who have it can call upon. This also causes confusion to her, again leaving an opening to her opponent to take advantage of. Yet another side effect of her arrogance is that mid way in the battle she becomes careless, tending to forget her opponents strength and not evading far enough to avoid injury.

Due to her affinity with Ice, Fire is a major weakness to Kyralie in this form. Warmth makes her uncomfortable, hence the temperature she creates around herself to keep from becoming too warm.

Skills/Magic: Only in the Sadistic form can she use Ice magic. A natural state for her in this form is to have her immediate surroundings at near sub-zero temperatures. However, in her forms magic is used rarely. Rather than using her stronger attacks she instead uses her minor magics of Freeze and Ice Darts to Icy Coffin. There is also the consideration that Kyralie does whatever she can to avoid turning into her other forms- when she is normal she can't use these spells.
Icy Coffin: The enemy is captured in a block of ice that slowly fills up, letting them know they are being frozen alive and finally encasing them completely, their faces a mask of pain, fear and helplessness. The problem with this is the fact that since it does take so long to fill up, while a thin layer of ice does trap them within, it is thin enough that they can smash their way through if they don't let panic set in. This attack is also one of her strongest and can't be used often, nor does she like to, thinking it an admittance to weakness on her part.
Freeze: Ice forms from the ground to encase the enemy’s feet, keeping them locked in place for Kyralie to attack at her whim, usually with Ice Darts.
Ice Darts: Darts of ice that range in size from hand darts to being as thick as an arm. Used as a long-range projectile, generally to slowly torture people caught with Freeze.
Frozen Lake: The top layer of ground is frozen over to create a slippery surface to place the enemy at a disadvantage.

Other spells depend upon Kyralie’s imagination and how she adapts them to the battle.

Personality: To the Sadist, death is a slow art if it is to be fully appreciated by both the killer and the victim.

The Sadist is the cold half of Kyralie’s heart, the half ruled by cool logic, icy regard and complete self-control. When in this form she is the cold-hearted killer, an efficient killing machine that ruthlessly torments her enemies with pain and suffering before administering the final blow. The Sadist rarely speaks and when she does it is with contempt and little other emotion.

The Sadist disregards passionate conversations, thinking that those ruled by their emotions are baffling and beneath her regard.

When not summoned up during a battle, as is mostly the case the Sadist prefers to travel quietly through towns, perhaps lingering over any intelligent novels in a bookstore.

The Berserker

Hair: Flame red, falls to her waist in a riot of curls. Much of it is pulled into thin braids to restrain the mass of hair during a battle. Sparks dance around her hair as well, especially when she drags a hand through it- the friction seems to create more sparks.

Eyes: Both eyes become ruby red to show her Berserker side is dominant.

Weapon Preferred: The Reaper

Fighting Style: Like the name suggests this form goes berserk in battle, glorying in carnage and bloodshed. In Berserk mode, Kyralie’s speed in enhanced but is used only to dash for enemies. Upon reaching them the Berserker tears into them with enhanced strength, laying waste to everyone in a fast-paced, deadly dance with the Reaper harvesting souls. Whether it is used to slice enemies or to throw them back, the Reaper is used to deadly effect, its wide arcs leaving bodies in its wake.
Unlike the Sadist the Berserker makes fast work of enemies, preferring to maul them and mutilate the bodies with a frenzy of fast slashes as opposed to time.

Weakness: Stamina for the Berserker is low; she expends high amounts of energy where less would have been more effective. Due to the preference of the scythe in this form, if an enemy gets within her guard she is vulnerable until she can get more space between them – close combat is not a strong point for the Berserker, although she will lash out with a strong kick or knee to try driving them away.

The Berserker allows her passions to rule her mind, responding quickly to insult, allowing her to be drawn into battles that could be against her from the start. She will also make irrational decisions that could be costly.

Due to the affinity with fire, water magic is the Berserkers weakness. Her body temperature is higher than usual and cooling her down causes her responses to become sluggish and awkward.

Skills/Magic: Only in her Berserker form can Kyralie use fire magic. Like her nature, the Berserker uses spells that will kill quickly and rarely uses them, preferring to get into the thick of things. There is also the consideration that Kyralie does whatever she can to avoid turning into her other forms- when she is normal she can't use these spells.
Incinerate: A spout of hot fire shoots from the ground beneath the enemy, burning them to a crisp in a blaze of glory. this attack once summoned can't be re-directed. The opponent will be forewarned by the fact that the air around such a place will turn deep rimson and the earth beneath will tremble in a circle the circumference of the attack. This attack is used rarely and only if there is sufficient fire or heat within the ground to summon. Then again, in Berserker form she niether has the time or inclination to use spells, if she has to use magic she prefers fireballs, leaving Incinerate and Flame Cage alone.
Flame Cage: A cage of fire springs up around the opponent, burning them inside. The heat can be adjusted so as to capture people without harm.
Fire Ball: Has to have a long-range fire attack, even a generic fireball that can range in size from fitting in the palm of a hand to as big as a boulder.

Again other spells depend on the situation and the imagination of the spell caster.

Personality: The Berserker is a creature of impulse and passions, created by the burning half of Kyralie’s heart.
When in battle she will be in the thick of things, swinging a scythe dripping in gore and blood. Outside of battle she is a tempestuous woman, her emotions swinging wildly depending on what is happening around her and how people are interacting with her.
Unlike the Sadist the Berserker does have a sense of humour and likes hanging around bars, enjoying the loud atmosphere and volatile passions of the people within. She is quick to anger and will easily rise to a killing frenzy if she feels insulted but can quickly die down if distracted by something.

Very nice. However, there are two things I would like you to change. The Icy Coffin and Incinerate spells are very powerful. Either tone down their strength or make it so she'd use them extremely rarely.

Yai I edited it ^_^ I also added that she tries not to transform so therefore she can't use those spells alot anyway

*Approvedeth*