Taldarin

First character. Feel free to give any feedback.

Name: Taldarin

Age: Said to be over 3000 years old.

Race: Protoss

Sex: Male

Hair: Few brown/black hair.

Eyes: Two luminous eyes.

Weight: around 170 lbs.

Height: Three meters tall.

Weapon: Once fought long ago with warp blades, But due to injury he was sent into a Dragoon*.

Strengths: Like all other Protosses, he has strong confidence on the battlefield. This confidence can overcome most of the situations. His knowledge makes him a remakable ally for the Protoss and its allies.

Weakness: His stubborn confidence might bring him into perilous situations, and he learnt the lesson when he fell into the battle years ago. He can't stay alone.

Skills/Magic:

Appearance:digitigrade legs, four digits on each of his hands (of which two are opposable), toes, broad chests and shoulders, and narrow waists with slim midsections. His skin is smooth and will become rough and cracked with age. Extending back from the crown of the head, Taldarin has a bony crest.
He does not appear to have any visible mouths, noses, or ears. Like any other Protoss, it is unknown how his senses of hearing or chemoreception operate, he is widely believed to possess such sensitivities.

Personality: In battle, he acts like a leader: he fights with honor, he attacks before his friends do. Hopefully, Taldarin like to fight. He dislikes the time he can't fight. But much tells him that his destiny will be filled with danger into a treacherous path. His true goal is to find his brethren (When brethren is mentionned by a Protoss, it refers to their comrades of the same race) who still fight in battle and help them. He believes he is close to find some.

Biography: He was born in his homeworld Aiur. Usually, unlike the Human race, the Protoss do not grow with their parents. They are thought to live with their brethren and are trained for combat, for their race's survival.

Taldarin is a personal friend of the Protoss hero, Adun. He was injured in action three thousand years ago, and spent a very long time in a Stasis Cell. He only emerged when Protoss Dragoon technology was invented, which could keep him alive.

Taldarin claimed he and Adun fought side-by-side three millennia ago, before he was placed into stasis. Taldarin and Adun would have been alive 2,000 years before Adun's rescue of the Rogue Tribes. But unfortunately Adun was not able to live after Taldarin and his injuries.

A statis cell prevents the Protoss from aging, so he lost all of his valuable friends from the past.

A normal Protoss child is in training to be prepared to go on the battlefield when he will be an adult. It is said that Taldaris has trained with Adun. There is no pet into the homeworld of Aiur.

Protoss religion takes its roots from the wars that plagued Aiur following the retreat of the Xel'Naga. United after several years under the teachings of Khas, the Protoss began to adhere to Khas's teachings of the "Khala", or Path to Ascension. The resulting religion bears a striking resemblance to modern day Hinduism in teachings, e.g. it includes a caste-based social system, and even a group of "Untouchables" not considered part of the caste system at all (the Dark Templar). There is also a resemblance to Islamic religion in the historical aspect; Khas united the warrior tribes under a single religion, much like prophet Mohammed did with the nomadic arabic peoples. However, it is more like Medieval Catholicism in how it is carried out, with a hierarchy and Zealot warriors (The Templar caste could have got its name inspired on the Templar Crusaders, which also were holy warriors.). Another resemblance of Catholicism is the name of the Conclave, which is the same of the high Vatican instance. The Khala has a caste system and focuses heavily on the teachings of Khas and the ability of the Protoss to use Psionic powers. When Protoss warriors die in battle it is believed that they have reached the "Khala's End."

Taldarin left home to search other Protoss brethren in need. As in, he travels the Universe into a Protoss Carrier flagship. He only kills or destroy anything that could be a threat to his race.

Taldarin's got pure Protoss blood flowing through his veins, he cannot prevent himself from battling his enemies. If he does not battle, it would be considered with cowardice and there is nothing else more shameful for the Protoss. But his long wait into the Statis Field made him regret the lost time he could have assisted with his brethren in the fight against the Zerg race. Therefore he can't blame anyone and can't be considered a coward.

Hopefully, Taldarin like to fight. He dislikes the time he can't fight. But much tells him that his destiny will be filled with hatred.

The most happiest thing he experienced was his fight alongside Adun.

Taldarin gets to know people before making a final decision about them. For example, in one of his come backs implies Taldarin meeting a human named Jim Raynor. Jim Raynor joined the Protoss after being through a difficult past. Taldarin learned that all the humans are not the same, that he could trust some of them. For future reference he can ask Raynor about the humans he'll meet soon.

He is saddened that he hasn't found any fell Protoss through the universe. He wish he could. Although he heard there was some refugies on Earth.

Taldarin almost died once, but it's possible for him to recover when he is sent into a Statis Cell. As long as he has served his race well, he won't have any regrets dying.

*Dragoon: A four-legged machine, made with Protoss technology, which blasts Photon Surges. A dragoon is a mobile vehicle used to contain dead or severly hurt Protoss units who fell into battle. The protoss are sent into dragoons after slowly recovering from their wounds in a Statis Cell.

Not bad but you seem to have forgotten the Personality section. Also, could you go into more detail about what a Dragoon is? Just work on those two things and I'll take another look at him.

Originally Posted by Ranarath

Not bad but you seem to have forgotten the Personality section. Also, could you go into more detail about what a Dragoon is? Just work on those two things and I'll take another look at him.

Yup, I completely forgot about personnality because I skipped it and planned to do it after I do the other stuff, but I never came back to it. I filled the section, and gave more details about what a Dragoon is.

*Approvedeth*