Dybia

Name: Dybia
Age: 46
Race: Human
Sex: Male
Hair: Short salt and pepper colored
Eyes: Blue
Weight: 183 lb
Height: 6 foot 7
Weapon: Pair of enchanted iron gauntlets, enchantment gives an electric charge to his punches. Also allows him to shock the hell out of his enemies by grabbing their sword or weapon to amplify the charge. The gauntlets are permanantly melded to his hands.

Also carries a platinum, gold hilted, ruby encrusted sword, the right end of the hilt is made like a second handle to better aim focused lightning bolts, and the left half appears like a spread bat wing. The sword is also wrapped in a cloth, and he almost never uses it. Hung from his belt. The sword also has magical properties allowing him to focus the electricity into a bolt of lightning, on the rare occasion that he uses it. The blades name is Enola.(Referencing to the Enola Gay, or the plane that dropped the Hiroshima bomb.)

Theme song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T4AxQXmasg4

Appearance: Wears a long sleeved unbuttoned Khaki Denim jacket (ever watch full metal alchemist? sort of like those military coats but it only goes down a few inches below his waist). Wears a pair of slightly loose long denim pants(not fall down loose, just free movement loose) And a black shirt under his jacket and a pair of leather steel soled boots. His gauntlets bear a symbol of a forgotten god, a circle with a + inside. The symbol is also on the back of his jacket. Has a belt that hold medicines and ointments, various things like that. Has short hair done like alex's in my avatar.


Drawn by Quark

All in all He's pretty similar to Alex in this picture, at least in the type of clothes and hairstyle, but Dybia does have distinctive physical qualities. Such as his Grey and black hair, and the black cross on the back of his jacket. His jacket is usually open.

Strengths: close combat is his major strength, and he has great speed and strength. The vision in his bio below gave him great longevity. That's why he can still fight at his age as a human.

Weaknesses: no armor off of his hands, and not good at ranged combat. If he's severly wounded the electricity's power is severly cut.

Magic: His ability to focus lightning through his gauntlets and sword. The enchantment on the gauntlets I mentioned earlier is what lets him do this and he can only focus lightning bolts through his sword but can still shock the hell out of anyone else by grabbing theirs. He can also focus the electricity through the steel soles of his boots to power up hs kicks but he does feel a small jolt going through his legs each time so it takes a little out of him each time. The electricity of the gauntlets is drawn from Dybia's natural energy, not an arcane spell.

He also has the ability to stimulate every muscle in his body, with the electricity from his gauntlets, giving him near super speed and strength ,but this burns power from his electric attacks for a while and only lasts a few minutes.

Bio: He was born and raised in a mining town in the west that exported iron mainly. At one point the town got lucky and found artifacts of an underground culture. They found riches not only in the old fortunes, but from museums who bought the artifacts. One day they struck the wrong wall releasing a noxious gas left by the ages of rotting corpses and other contained gases in the mining tunnel. Many were killed from that day including Dybias father.

Those that got out had to abadon the town because the gases seemed to stay in the tunnels never dissapating. Moving from mine to mine always running out, never getting lucky like that one time. Most were able to support themselves for many years from the small fortune they had gotten. Dybia was still scarred from then, so he simply kept digging, never socializing much. He left the other people to find some new surroundings, but just get back to mining.

At the age of 21 he was on an archeological dig, Dybia had been at the dig for three days for the 6months it had been going on. On the third day he struck the wall of what looked like an altar chamber. He walked forward to the altar where his future weapons layed. There were skeletons laying through the room of all types, man, beast, monster, and some carrying weapons. As soon as he touched them though (in Indiana Jones fashion) the skeletons in the room started to come to life one by one. At just that moment one of the other diggers walked in with a look of awe at the large room.

"run!!" Dybia yelled darting for the entrance with the gauntlets and sword in hand. "what?" the man said with Dybia passing him a skeleton caught him in the head with a scimitar. the miners had installed points of explosives in several points in the mines and with the skeletons preoccupied with the many miners that were too slow to react. all Dybia had to do was set it off. When he made it to the entrance he slowed down to carry and place one more set of dynamite at the entrance with only five other diggers coming out from behind him, he jumped to the plunger setting off the dynamite. If not destroying but trapping the undead skeletons in the tunnels.

When the six of them were leaving to report what had happened to their employer Dybia decided to put on the gauntlets. As soon as he put them on, he was given a vision from a forgotten god. Giving him great power from within the weapons he took from the altar. It seemed a god of transference and refinement rather than raw power. He gave Dybia something all living things possessed deep down and the ability to use it.

He left the diggers to pursue new opportunities with his new power. He kept fighting and getting more powerful and skilled with his new weapons. Over the 25 years from then, he did not make many enemies, because most were not left alive to hold grudges.

He has few people left he really cares about. The only family member he has kept in touch with is his younger brother Atton. He only sees him about once a year, if at all. Atton was only ten at the time of the mine incident so he was not old enough to work there. Atton stayed with his and Dybia's mother when Dybia left.

Personality: Not a big talker, Fights when he finds some justification or loop hole for it. Doesn't like to play the hero, but does have a good sense of right and wrong. Not good at making friends, but picks the best allies when he does. His personality out of battle is also similar to Axel's from KH2.

One problem is that you seem to have forgotten the Personality section. Also, you need to add a bit more to his Bio like what he did before the age of 21 and some of what he did after he got the gauntlets.

is that any better?

*Approvedeth*

thanks alot