Angel Ly

Name: Angel Ly
Age: 19
Race: Human/Half Angel
Sex: Female
Hair: Blonde Highlights
Eyes: Light Brown
Weight: 125 lbs.
Height: 5’6


Weapons: Double Angel Swords and Light Magic

Strengths: Angel can fight with accuracy. She is calm and steady like her mother when in battle. Angel is also fast and steady when performing her attacks.

Weakness: Angel is very weaken when someone uses Dark Magic against her. She can fight with one sword if the other is not within reach. Also she lacks defense so they penetrate her defense when she is not alert of her surroundings.

Skills/Magic: Angel fighting and Magic Skills are:

Angel Blast: She gathers her Light Magic and forms it into a ball and blasts it in front of her enemies and blinds them.

Angel Dance: She grabs her enemy and starts to perform a five hit-combo, which she slashes him four times then with the fifth hit she blasts her enemy with her sword which throws her enemy far from her.

Light Sword: She can fuse her two swords together to form the Light Sword with the help of her magic.

Angel Fury: She slashes her enemy about eight times and then throws her enemy up in the air and slashes once more and then throws the enemy to the ground.

Appearance: Angel wears blue jeans and a whit tank top and also wears chucks. Angel hair is long, down to her back and half covers her face, but when in battle she puts it in a bun. Angel also wears her mother’s Bracelet on her right wrist. She is lightly tanned and her body figure is that she can hold a fight on her own. Her mother's bracelet is white with light blue stones inside it containing her mother's powers for her to use. Angel's wings appear during battle but then disappear when she is not fighting. Her swords are white and long swords and they are double edged swords.

Personality: She is outgoing and gets along with everyone. Angel is very special person and her favorite food is Ramen. Angel is special because she is was Ly's only child and when Angel is severely injured a great power grows in her and fully recovers her health and magic when the time comes. When Angel fights her battle she thinks of a plan or may sometimes leap in without thinking. when she fights she fights with power, speed and skills that her mother had.

Biography: Angel Ly was born in Kyoto, Sento. Angel’s mother Ly was glad that she had a daughter and felt so warm inside that she has a child of her own. Ly named her daughter Angel Ly. Angel was the most precious child that Ly that could ever had. When Angel was three her father had left them cause he cheated on his wife with someone else but Angel didn’t know why and how cause she was still little and didn’t understand why. Angel didn’t have a father figure and she just had her mother, which she loved very much. When angel was seven she had discovered her magic when she was playing with her dolls. She ran up to her mother and showed her mother what she did and her mother wasn’t surprised she knew that one day Angel would discover her magic. So Ly took angel to the living room and talk to Angel about her magic and that is was alright. So Angel hugged her mother with great love and left to go play. When angel was 17 he mother had a very special gift for her. Ly gave Angel her very own Double Angel swords with her name engraved in it. Angel was excited and happy. She had never felt so good and what her mom had been there for her. She would never ever forget this day that she had a passionate mother. The next day her mother was called out for the war and she was the best of the best among the fighters they have chosen. Angel wasn’t worried about it, actually she was excited about this and she wanted to join her mother in the fight against the Lanster Clan. Ly told no that she couldn’t just yet that this was a serious battle. So Angel hug her mom and kiss her goodbye and she left. Its been three weeks that the battle was going on and that the Lantser where taking over the city and Angel had to do something. So she grab her Swords and left the house as she left the front door she noticed that there were bombings and people screaming all around and that it was more of a battle it was war. She dash towards the fighting to help her city armies to fight them off and as she attack some of the monsters she noticed her mother fighting as well. Angel dash towards her mother and help her fight them off so they wont enter the inner city. Angel could see her mother fighting with great power and skills that she had never seen before in her life. Ly quickly grab Angel and made a dash to safety. Ly told Angel that it was war and that she needed Angel’s help. Angel agreed and helps her mother fight them off. Angel was beginning to discover her powers and abilities that she had. Angel noticed her mother wasn’t going to make it. She grabs her mother fight the monster off while they attack her in many ways. The war began to go down and we had the upper hand and the Lanters retreated back to the depths in which they cam and Angel had to get her mother to a hospital. Angel got her in and they took her and Angel waited outside in the lobby and waited then a doctor came out and told her that she was going to be fine that she had minor injuries. Angel went inside of her mother’s room and seen that she was all bandage up but Angel didn’t care she was just glad that her mother was fine and alive. She walked up to her mother and held her hand and sat there thinking of her mother when they had great times together. Ly put her hand out and gave Angel her bracelet and Angel put it on and hugged her mother. Angel left her mother to rest and left the hospital. Now it has been two years and Angel mother past away due the minor injuries that she had gotten while in battle. Angel dug her sword into her mother’s grave and now uses her mother’s swords in remembrance to her mother. As that happen the Lanster had taken over the city and it is up to Angel to restore the city and to bring peace within the city.


If there is anything that need to be change let me know ok

Alright, this is a pretty good character. The only things to you need to expand on are the Appearance and Personality sections. In the Apperance section, try to describe what she looks like, not just her clothing. Does she have pale skin, is it darkly tanned, or is it medium colored? Does she have a thin, dainty appearance or does she look like she could hold her own in a battle? Does she have wings like an angel? What does her Mother's bracelet look like? What do her swords look like?

Okay, in her Personality section, what kind of things does she like to talk about. You kind of contradicted yourself when you stated she was shy in the first sentence but then said she was outgoing in the second. Are there some people she can't get along with or does she make friends with everybody. In what ways is she special? How does she fight? Does she think of a plan or does she just leap in without thinking? What does she think of fighting?

Okay, once you've expanded those sections I'll take another look at her.

ok I went ahead and did the changes and sorry for taking so long I had the holidays come in and I left for awhile and stuff but im back and once again sorry for taking so long ok

No problem. *Approvedeth*

Thanks for your approval!!!!