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Old 10-29-2006, 08:54 PM
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Kasumei

Name: Kasumei (kawh-soo-may)
Gender: Female
Race: Dragon child
Age: 13
Height: 5' 3''
Hair: long, silver-white
Eye color: Sapphire Blue

Weapon: white sword, one her of most vital channelers of power (see pic below)
Armor: none
Commonly used Spells:
Dragon Fire: summons her familiar's power through the sword and blasts heavy amouts of white-hot dragon fire through it
Illuminate: Calmer spell; illuminates her sword with a steady white glow to light dark places
Dragon Scale: Hardening her body and the air around her as a shield against enemies
Sister Chant: calling dragon spirits to aid her in battle or trouble
True Form: Kasumei has a dragon form within her, which she can release to manifest her body. Even unmature, this form is obviously extremely powerful. In human form, her magick is strongest and her phyical power is weak. In dragon form, it is vice versa. Her dragon form also isnt fast at all, and the belly is vunerable. This form also has a hard time against long-range fighting. So an attack with great speed or great distance would cause a lot of damage in this form.
Her dragon form in appearance, is a young dragon, considerable smaller than adult dragons obviously, white in color. Her eyes are the same color as her human form, and she wears a golden collar-breastplate around the base of her long neck.

Strengths: Kasumei is very powerful in magick despite her small size. She is very fast and very clever. She doesnt let anything get in her way when she's out to do something, even emotions.

Weaknesses: Where she excels in magick, Kasumei is weak physically. Without her magick, she is just short of helplessness, save for her speed. Also, without her sword, she is considerably weakened.
From tragic childhood events, Kasumei is also deathly afraid of fire, thus vunerable when in contact with it.

Personality: Kasumei is usually serious, but is not afraid to smile. Though so young, she speaks as if she as lived for centuries, inheriting some of the Wisdom of the Dragons.She doesnt easily make friends, and spends most of her time alone with her familiar, Luminar. (the dragon in the pic below). She's competitive, and determined. She's very set on proving herself, not so much to others, but to her dragon ancestors, and to herself. To prove that she is not just a half-breed mistake. She spends little time around others; mostly just alone with Luminar.

Appearance --->

Usually is wearing this white dress, and the black ribbon choker necklace, even in battle. Occasionally wears a silver cloak when she needs to carry her sword with her. Otherwise she simply calls it to her hands magickally when she needs it.
Luminar is her guardian, and her only friend. He has been with her since her birth, and at her side is where he will remain throughout their immortality.

History: Kasumei was born from a half-dragon half-elf father, and an exiled dragon 'princess' for lack of a better word, mother. Her parents ran away from their dragon realm to have their child, knowing that she would not be accepted, being born by such an unholy union. They fled to an outer desert, where Kasumei was born in the middle of the night. They named her Kasumei, for the moonlight, that seemed to hang around her. There the small family stayed for the first year, until the dragon armies came for them. The dragons, in human form as well as true, came bared with weapons, and fire. Everything the family had built, and everything they had spent creating in that year, was set to feed the hungry flames. These sights, and the sounds of screaming, running.. marching, have scarred Kasumei, instilling her with a great fear of fire.
The dragons didnt stop there. They killed Nahrana, Kasumei's mother, and even her father, Brytalisys. But on Nahrana's last breath, she sent a desperate cry to an old friend of hers, who was still young, but had helped her many a time. It was Luminar. He answered her call, and obeyed her order to take her daughter to Earth, and watch her until she knew the dragons would end the hunt for her. Luminar quickly turned the frightened and confused Kasumei away just in time to not see the dragon's savage and bloody murders of her parents.
"Go, child. Mommy has to go now... dont cry... Go with him, he'll protect you... like i never could... I lov--" her mother's last message was cut from her throat by a blood-soaked maw of a dragon. Luminar would not let Kasumei turn around when her mother didnt finish, but rushed her away to a nearby portal.
And so Luminar has stayed faithful to Nahrana's orders and to Kasumei herself, ever watching over her, and helping her understand her powers and making it through her abnormally long life as a dragon child. She is still young, and is only beginning to realize the pains of such long life.
To this day, the dragon child barely remembers what happened that night, but just remembers fire, and her mother's voice fading away. She tries to shut it out as best she can; crying now will change nothing. She remains in hiding, though she doesnt quite realize this. She already ever questions Luminar, so again, she doesnt even know that she is in hiding. And this way she shall remain until Luminar sees the dragons move on, or forget...

Last edited by fire_by_rain; 11-01-2006 at 10:11 PM.
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Old 10-30-2006, 02:41 PM
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Re: Kasumei

This is a sweet character, fire_by_rain, nicely done. ^^ There are a few points I would like you to consider before I approve, however...

- Does any of Kasumei’s spells have downsides? Her True Form seems a bit powerful, from its description, but I hesitate to call the others too powerful - in fact, I believe them quite fine. But I think a hinted downside or two will give some equality to the power of Kasumei’s True Form.

- From the biography: what is the ‘ice of immortality’?

Look over those and I shall return presently!
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Old 10-30-2006, 07:55 PM
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Re: Kasumei

there we go, dulled down True Form, and fixed the immortality bit. anything else? *crosses fingers*
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Old 11-01-2006, 06:13 PM
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Re: Kasumei

Nearly there. ^^ The True Form is excellent, but immortality in characters isn't encouraged - perhaps Kasumei merely looks forward to a longer span of life than a normal mortal, due to her lineage? Fix that and I shall be back.
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Old 11-01-2006, 10:12 PM
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Re: Kasumei

...alright. mortal, check.
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Old 11-02-2006, 07:54 AM
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Re: Kasumei

Looks good to me!

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