Kuro Mitsukai

Name: Kuro Mitsukai (Dark Angel)
Age: ??? (25 years since last reincarnation)
Sex: Male
Race: Demonic Angel
Height: 7ft 4
Weight: 240 lbs
Eyes: Left-Blue Right-Red
Hair: Long, Silver
Weapon: Hitokage Touzoku Sword (Soul Thief)
Appearence:
Normal Form- A huge man, but besides that, he just looks like a regular, well-built person. Strange scars on legs and arms. Looks as if someone or something were trying to grab him and pull him in two directions. Usually wearing black jeans and white t-shirt, but has been seen with strange robes that look old and worn.

Angelic Form-Two large, white, feathery wings sprout from his back, and a faint, golden halo is seen around his head. Hair becomes blonde. Both eyes become blue. Muscles bulge from both arms

Demonic Form-Two grotesque, monsterous wings emerge from his back, and bloody horns emerge from his head. Sinister tatoos of the coming of judgement day cover his body. Hair becomes black. Both eyes become red. Muscles bulge from arms and legs.

Angelic Demon form- (Pic by BlackFeather)

Sword Appearence- Kuro's sword, which is rarely seen, is usually strapped on his back unsheathed. The handle has an angel wing on one side, and a demon wing on the other engraved in the black steel of the handle. The blade itself, is made of an ethereal matierial that cannot be broken my normal means. The blade looks like a normal broadsword when not wielded. There is a black, crystal looking stone in the handle of the blade. This, apparently is where souls taken by the sword are kept. When Kuro is wielding this sword though, it is said you can see the souls spiraling around the blade. The handle of the sword, is wrapped in simple, bandage looking fabric.


Skills: Kuro aquired his skills from the touch of Heaven and Hell, and gets the energy to use them through the souls that rest in his sword.

1) Heal- This skill heals anybody but himself. It can cure wounds, sicknesses, and diseases

2) Regeneration- This skill regenerates the flesh of Kuro. Also cures various poisons, diseases, and viruses within Kuro's body. Takes seven days for full effect.

3) Arashi- This skill creates a violent downpour of rains that can destroy, lightning that can incinerate, and winds that can carry skyscrapers away. It has been known, though that he had once been struck by a lightning bolt that he had brought on by one of these terrible storms.

4) Hellbender- Manipulates techtonic plates to creat huge gaps in the earth that lead staight to the fiery depths of hell. Whenever used though, it is said that demons violently grab at his legs and try to take him down with them when used.

5) Ressurection- If killed, Kuro reincarnates 666 days after death.

6) Yuuku- Unleashes souls of the damned to show opponents their darkest fears

7) Last Stand- If the flesh around Kuro's heart is penetrated, his sword auotmatically reacts, and throws itself at the opponent at great speeds.

8) Soul Stealer- Not usually used in combat, this skill rips the soul right out of its body, and sends it to Kuro's sword. If not using regeneration while this skill is activated, it could kill him.

Strengths: Since touched by both demons and angels, Kuro can easily take out both by using its opposites power.

Weaknesses: His only weakness is his heart. If attacked physically or emotionally, It could break the bond of good and evil in his body, rendering him useless against magic attacks.

Armor: N/A

Personality: Normal form- Just a regular person that has the emotions and attributes of a normal human being. Seems very peaceful in this state, and when he can, he loves to share stories of mythical creatures to the children of his town. Though he hardly ever does this, because none of the parents want their children around him. He loves to make people laugh. Doesn't usually get angered. In fact, he isn't bothered by the fact that parents keep there children away. He himself knows his past just as well as everyone else, and wants to protect the human race by holding back his dark emotions.

Angelic form- Very good hearted, and will stop at nothing to make someone happy. Also, heals people and helps them get back into normal living conditions. Does not usually fight in this form, unless conditions are very bad. In this state, he greatly fears the death of the innocent.

Demonic form- Ruthless and shows no mercy for anyone, even his friends. Will slaughter the innocent without thinking twice. This is the form that everyone fears he will turn to, although the only account of him in this form was at the beginning of time.

Demonic Angel form- Nobody has ever seen Kuro in this form, but legend has it that in this form, Kuro can destroy planets with one blow, but it also weakens him to the point where he can't stand or breathe. When in this form, Kuro stays as far away from human as he can, because depending on what side is infecting his heart more at the moment will determine his reaction.

Bio- Long ago, just before the great battle of Heaven and Hell, Kuro was created by angels to cleanse hell of all sins. They wanted him to be the hmost divine being aside God himself. They planned to send Kuro to hell to wash away the wrongdoings of all demonic souls. Once word got to the demonic lord, he was enraged. He wanted Kuro for himself, to wipe out any goodness in the world. He waited until Kuro was sent to the demons fortress, and was captured by the demon lord's best men. The demonic emporer gave him a choice. Forever live in the fiery depths of hell, or serve as His minion. To reassure he would choose to be Hell's minion, the emporer promised he would give him his sword. The sword was said to hold thousands of souls, good and evil, within its blade. Kuro accepted. The moment Kuro was given the sword, something happend that not even Satan himself would have expected. The moment the blade was grasped, it was purified by the hands of Kuro. But not all darkness can be washed away. When the great battle finally began, Kuro was being torn in two by both sides. Demons and angels grabbed and tore for him, because both sides new that he would be the fate of the universe. That was when he relized, this battle was not for the fate of the world, it was over him. As the wounds from the tearing of souls at his arms and legs began to drip with blood, his stomach began to churn. The heart inside him filled with darkness and hatred of the world. The feathers of his left wing began to fall. As they floated down to earth, they were replace by veins as black as night, as a new wing, similar to the one on his right emerged. By this time, the holy and hellish decendants watched in aw as he began to to rip at them, killing them one by one effortlessly. He burned the land and was merciless to both sides, and one day, all the violence and destruction just stopped. That was the end of the century-long battle. He was never seen again until centuries later. His story was so terrifying, the scripture was ripped out of the holy book, which he still searches for today.

Now, he is living a normal life with his normal human family, occasionally healing his young brothers if they are ill, or have gotten a paper cut from that last school project. Born into this family with his last reincarnation, it has been a long time since his demon form has revealed itself, but the darkness still flows in his blood. Because many know (or think they know) about Kuro's past, he was never allowed to attend school, or any public events. Generations have past down Kuro's story, and it is well known to the public. All though his elderly parents love him very much, they must keep him locked away. Regardless, when he is seen, he looks very peaceful and kind.
His two brothers, Umi and Kaze, love him very much. They know the goodness in his heart, and are with him whenever they can be. His family means everything to him, because they are the only family in any of his lifetimes that have actually treated him like a normal human being. Any human interaction he gets, young or old, makes him happy. Even a small 'hello' by a distant child will cheer him up.
Kuro tries his hardest not to think about his past, because he his afraid it will trigger the anger that can bring on his sinister form. Although he does want to find that sacred scripture, which tells of his past. He knows much, but there are some things that are a mystery... even to him...

Okay, not bad but there are couple of things that need work.

First off, it’s okay that his age is unknown but please put what age he looks like. Does he appear to be in his 20s or 80s?

You need to expand the appearance section greatly. What kind of clothes does he wear? Does he have any scars or strange markings? Is he usually smiling or frowning? Various things like that.

You need to add a downside or two to Arashi and Hellbender. Right now, those attacks are far too powerful.

The personality sections needs to be expanded, also. You’ve probably noticed that no one acts the same, regardless of whether they are normal or not. Is it easy to make him laugh at a joke or does he like to tell his own? Perhaps it’s rather easy to make him angry. Does he get frightened by something? Is it easy to make friends with him?

Expand the bio, as well. How exactly does he go about cleansing hell of sin? How long did this battle last? How did Kuro suddenly get caught between the two sides? Did he know he was the target of this demonic lord? In the last paragraph, you suddenly mention his family. Who is his family? Is it a normal human family or an angelic one? What kind of school does his brothers go to and why doesn’t he go with them?

Fix these things and I’ll have another look at him. If you need some examples, feel free to look at my characters or other approved characters to get some more ideas.

Originally Posted by graceful_sheik

Okay, not bad but there are couple of things that need work.

First off, it’s okay that his age is unknown but please put what age he looks like. Does he appear to be in his 20s or 80s?

You need to expand the appearance section greatly. What kind of clothes does he wear? Does he have any scars or strange markings? Is he usually smiling or frowning? Various things like that.

You need to add a downside or two to Arashi and Hellbender. Right now, those attacks are far too powerful.

The personality sections needs to be expanded, also. You’ve probably noticed that no one acts the same, regardless of whether they are normal or not. Is it easy to make him laugh at a joke or does he like to tell his own? Perhaps it’s rather easy to make him angry. Does he get frightened by something? Is it easy to make friends with him?

Expand the bio, as well. How exactly does he go about cleansing hell of sin? How long did this battle last? How did Kuro suddenly get caught between the two sides? Did he know he was the target of this demonic lord? In the last paragraph, you suddenly mention his family. Who is his family? Is it a normal human family or an angelic one? What kind of school does his brothers go to and why doesn’t he go with them?

Fix these things and I’ll have another look at him. If you need some examples, feel free to look at my characters or other approved characters to get some more ideas.

There, how's that? I tried to fix the bio a lot along with his appearence and personality.

Alright, he’s looking much better. Still, some more description is needed. Appearance, personality, and bio are the most important parts of a character.

Appearance: What does his hair look like, long or short? What do the strange clothes look like? Is it a robe or maybe just some pants? How does his sword appear and how does he wear it? It is in a sheath or just hanging out in the open?

Personality: Does he like other people besides children? What does he think of parents not wanting their children around him? Does he get easily depressed or is he rather easy to cheer up? Does he think of the war a lot? Does Kuro really love his family or does he just help them because he is nice? Also, expand the personality of his demonic angel form. Does he destroy everyone he sees or does he try to help them? Or is he a balance of good and evil and doesn’t really care what happens to people?

Bio: I’m still a little confused about his family. Is his family human or angelic? Did they fight in the war or did Kuro adopt them afterwards. If he did go to them afterwards, why did he decide to come to a family? How old are his brothers and his parents?

Okay, add some more and then I’ll have another look at it.

How's that? I put a lot of work into it this time.

Alrighty, this looks good. May you have the honor of being my first approval. ^_^

*stamps with a big 'Approved' badge*

Thank you! It's an honor to be your first ^_^

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wow link....I am very sorry, but I assure this was pure coincidence. The only thing that is the same, though, is the name, which I got off of a japanese translator. I will PM you to set things straight.