Princess May

Name: Princess May
Age: 14
Race: Human (Princess)
Sex: Female
Hair: yellow
Eyes: green
Weight: 70 lbs
Height: 4'9"


Weapons: Light arrows

Armor: no armor

Abilities: She can use a power called light beam that will lock onto darkness and ONLY work on darkness. She can also use the light arrows. She also has the ability to think things through before she does it.

Strengths: Can close and open locked gates. Can make friends easily due to kindness, but can also make rivals easier. She usualy has more of a chance to do something right because of her ability to think things through.

Weaknesses: She is open to be attacked when closing or opening locked gates. Her kindness sometimes gets control over her, which gives the enemies a time to attack.


Appearance:


Personality: Princess Mae is a tough, brave, thoughtful, and generous young princess who loves to stand at the top of high places by the ocean and look into the horizon as she relaxes from fighting and stuff like that. She usually acts like she is 3 though because of her quite sensitive feelings.



Bio: May, as if she were Zelda, was born in Hyrule but married to a member of the royal family. For that reson, she did not grow up with her mom and dad. She grew up as the Secondary princess of hyrule. Her sister was Zelda, at least Zelda and May thought they were sisters.

May's childhood became Peacful after she met Zelda, but what May really wanted was a pet, a cat, but the king of hyrule never accepted it. "Its too big of a responsibility for a teenage girl like you, May." He would say. She didn't believe in anything yet, and she is traveling away from hyrule to explore the wonders of the rest of the world.


She has the ability to kill others, yet she is very easy-going. She loves being a princess, and she would hate loosing it. Her special item she is found of is her light arrows, gaven to her by Zelda so May could protect herself in battles. She would treat others the way they treat her and her dream is to become the best Princess ever. May, for these resons, never thought of dying, all she thought about were the happy peaceful parts of her life.

Hm...that's very fast for being hyper. Just about the highest a world class runner has ever gotten to is 24 mph.

How does she control enemies? And...really, could you please come up with a more original appearance?

Originally Posted by Awbri

Hm...that's very fast for being hyper. Just about the highest a world class runner has ever gotten to is 24 mph.

How does she control enemies? And...really, could you please come up with a more original appearance?

fixed!

You still didn't fix the speed issue in your strengths section.

Also, everything about this character nearly screams copyright infringment. I'd really rather see you take this character in a more original direction. Try to abstain from using Zelda references in your characters. They don't have to be Zelda-related, you know. In the BA, originality is held pretty highly.

Is it better now?

Sure. I guess it's fine now.

*stamps with approval*