Iyasis Namaru

this is an old character, but please go easy on the approval, i don't usually make profiles > <


Full name: Iyasis Alula Namaru
Gender: Female
Race: Fire Unicorn
Her immortal spirit form is a winged fire unicorn, which is basically just what it sounds like. A giant unicorn the color of firelight, the mane and tail being made of fire. the wings are enormous feathered wings, with red and silver patterns and designs all over them. (Her wings can also come out in her human form at will.)
This is her spirit form, which she can release to take over her body, then go back to her humanoid form at will. They have amazing endurance and can run and fly at speeds well over 70 mph.


Hair: Blood red with silver tips, fairly long
Eye Color: silver, turn gold when working with fire magicks
Height: 5' 10''
Age: 50,676 (appears about 18-19)

Weapons: mainly her bonded sword, called Aroklia, but also occasional staff. Aroklia holds some magickal ability, but Iya's power is not based on it at all. She rarely uses it for magick, only as a regular sword.

it was forged when she was very young, with her help, to be her bonded sword before she set out to become a warrior. It is 'bonded' because it was infused with her own energy and 'life force' if you will, so when she fights with it, it moves like its a part of her; follows her slightest breath, her slightest whim, like it reads her mind and body; which is why she is such a good swordswoman. She can summon it at any time, though it usually remains at her side, and it can never cut or injure her no matter who is wielding it.

Armour: chain mail under a plain shirt, leather vest
Magicks: is a master Fire Mage, earth magicks, general magicks (general meaning a little of everything)
A few spells commonly used:
Vines: she can summon vines from beneath the ground to wrap around enemies
Levitation: the can levitate things around her and herself in fighting moves in a battle
Fire Wall: pretty self explanitory, a wall of fire
Fire Spiral/Ropes: Streams or ropes of fire to lash at enemies
Various healing spells: healing physical wounds of herself as well as others
Trademark Move: Iya can break apart her body to fuse with the shadows around her, making it feel like she's everywhere at once.

She also can apparate and use various types of shields. these are just a few of her most commonly used spells.

Strengths: very skilled with the sword and in magick, feet make no sound or footprints, can sense enemies from afar, flying, speed surpassing humans greatly

Weaknesses: her mercy, if you count that as weakness, and she can be distracted easily and loose focus, because her senses are so sensitive, she can sense small things constantly, thusly can be distracted. And attacks from a distance Iya has a hard time defending against; she is a much better fighter close-range. using a great deal of magick at once can also drain her.

Personality: Iyasis is a strong person, who likes to keep mostly to herself. she's very quiet and calm most of the time, immortality hardening her a bit over the centuries. She is an observer, and doesn't like to be the center of attention; as modest as she is. She's a very kind and compassionate person, despite her heart of Fire and her warrior status.
She, like i said, is usually calm and collected, but is very easily angered when someone is committing ill against her loved ones. She's very loyal and protecting of her friends, once made. She can be a little distrusting of people sometimes, at first, after all she has seen humankind do over her time.
She mostly hides the fact that she is an immortal from people, since she and her family have been treated very badly once people found out about them. She also likes helping people.

History: Iyasis was left by her family at birth with a large temple of monks on a world called Sakora. She was taken because she and her twin sister together made up half of a spirit that could lead to the Apocolypse. To avoid the prophecy coming true, her eldest brother Serenth took her away, giving her to these monks. The prophecy, in short, was that Peace and Destruction would bring upon the end of the world. Iya's sister Sagira was the embodiment of Destruction for this prophecy, and the spirit of Peace was split between Iyasis and her twin sister Kiara. So, Serenth thought if the Peace spirit was separated, the prophecy would not come true. So Kiara grew up with the family, and Iyasis was dismissed.

So there in the temple forest she grew up in the safety and bliss of a sacred forest and temple, learning everything she knows from the monks. A vast majority of her teachers were mortal, so Iya had to bear the weight of immortality and watch as they slowly died. But the monk who cared for her more than any other was also an immortal, Iyro Halaria, who helped her along.
After a few thousand years, Iyasis was given her Bonded Sword and set out to become a warrior. She moved around battalion after battalion all over Sakora for most of her life. In doing so, she mastered many of the arts of war. Then she finally returned to the monks and stayed for another few hundred years, honing her magicks and becoming a Fire Mage.
Then she left for the last time, as she finally set out to find her true birth family. It didn't take her long, for she stumbled upon Kiara. Kiara took her to the rest of the family, which consisted of 5 brothers and Sagira. And so there she remains to this day, but is often found wandering through forests, or just alone, or with her companions Ayalmar and Lohiya.

Your character has a most intriguing name! ^^

I noted a few things I think could be improved upon:

- Include a description of the race of Fire Unicorns. How do they differ from humans?

- Expand upon Iyasis's various, magical skills. Name any particular spells she might command, as well as give them some explanation.

- The bio could use with some expansion, some events with further explanation. What happened to Iyasis's twin to begin with? How did the change of situation (going to live in a temple) keep the prophecy from transpiring? Et cetera.

there we go, i edited it. i hope thats better ^^

Hmm...alright. It looks better now.

*stamps with approval*

yay! ^.^ thanks