Mina Kunashi

Name: Mina Kunashi
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Purple
Height: 5'3
Weight: 89 pounds
Appearance: And short red with a bit of gold at the top none-heeled boots.

Weapon: Broad Sword
Weapon description: Normal broad sword she can make disappear and turn into a necklace she puts around her neck. The necklace has a red string with the charm that is attached to the end. (Appearance in picture. *Points to sword in appearance*.)

Attacks: Iron Blade, Silver Sword, Killer Blade, and attacks she pretty much makes up.

Iron Blade: Her sword becomes as then as paper and cuts threw the enemy easily.

Silver Sword: Her sword will shine as bright as a star and she will run at the enemy and cut him/her/it blinding him/her/it.

Killer Blade: Her sword will become lighter and easier to swing, but will have a more painful and deadly inpact.

Personality: Easy to gain her trust, likes cats, careful, loves her friends and family, very sweet to whom she trusts, Pretty much normal a bit of a tom boy, loving, and someone who you might want to gain trust of.

Weaknesses: Cats, Jewels, Friends, Family, Silver, Gold, Precious Metals, And Her Memories.
Elemental and Physical Weaknesses: Lightning attacks and magic, Ice attacks and magic, Fire attacks and Magic, Hard Attacks, heavy magic, Getting punched in the gut, shin or chest, getting cut in the chest, gut, or shin, and heavy combat.

Strengths: Snakes, Lizards, Worms, Jerks, Fools, Idiots, Spiders, Cute smiles to get to do something, Boys, And Stupidity.
Elemental and Physical strengths: Wind magic, water magic, light magic, dark magic, and getting slaped in the face.

History: She was born in a village called "Hikashuki Village" She was raised by her parents until the age of thirteen, in her village they knew enough by thirteen to be able to stop school and move on in their lives, she went to her parents and told them her grades, she had worked all day everyday of her life after four, her parents were amazed she could get the best grade there was, her brother was not to happy. Mina walked to the village stores, she saw her brother, he was at a store in the middle of the night, the shop was closed and he was taking items, she was shocked that her brother was committing thievery, her brother tried to kill her, she was told to leave the village by her parents before he had the chance to kill her, she left at the age of thirteen, her parents did not want her brother killed for attempting murder and thievery, their parents hid him, but he escaped and left the village searching for Mina, she is in grave danger, and it is to easy for him to gain her trust once more. She headed for a village near by, but just a few more days and she was found by her brother, he fought her in the village until she managed to escape with a sword she had picked up with money her parents had given her, the shop keeper had no idea of the value, he had never used it so the sword was not expensive, on her way out of the village she attacked him and cut his leg, his leg was almost taken off, but he still has it, she managed to leave the village with just a few scars and bruises, but the worst is yet to come...

"All the scars that remain with me from our battle are well with my memory, is he ever going to forgive me? Is he ever going to love me like he once did years ago? My memories are all I have left, but are they what I really desire?" Mina Kunashi

Succinct is the best way to describe this profile. *Chuckles* While the strengths/weaknesses sections are fairly amusing, you shouldn't isolate it only to psychological weaknesses. Think combat as well. How could your character be overpowered? Is her strength/defense/speed/magic/intelligence low? Things like that. Fix the expand on the strengths/weaknesses, and you've got yourself an approval.

Also, you might want to have your brother look over the profile and fix any typos or grammar errors. Good luck. ^^

Heheheh, I have some grammar problems again? What a pain! Okay, I will take care of it, thanks for the tips! ^^

*Chuckles* On a sidenote, it's okay to use periods in the bio. If you get the urge at some point in the future, you can edit the profile anytime. You're free to do so at your whim now that the Evolution system is gone. Rejoice!

*Approved* ^^

Yes, I will rejoice, I just don't like to use periods!

Thank you Wielder.