Blood Link

Name: The Death
Age: 37,892
Race: Reaper
Sex: Male
Hair: None
Eyes: two red ominous lights
Weight: 125lbs
Height: 7 foot eight inches

Weapon: The Reaper Scythe - a sycthe that grants him the power to posses the weak minded(Like normal people, not enemy characters) and manipulate them. It also allows him to phase through walls. Since he is already dead you can never KILL him completley but he is still very defeatable. This scythe gains power from every soul it steals and the souls he stolen are still alive and when he calls upon them he can use them to decive his enemy. He can also read minds because of his scythe.

Armor: Death Cloak - a simple deciving looking cloak that is actually a extremely tough armor that can block most RANGED weapons

Strengths: Intimidation, Creating Fear, Distrust and Insecurity among his enemies, and he's talented
at sword play

Weaknesses: Light Magic, Axes because they can break his scythe in the middle and he hates sunlight and can't move around during day, Can't fight against long range weapons, Weak against all objects that are holy or blessed, He is weak and heavy armor will easily block the strongest of his attacks

Abilities/Magic:
Darkness Cloud - a sheild that renders hime invisible if he stands still
Dark Eyes - momentarily petrifies his enemy with terror

Apperance: He has a skeletal face but he covers it with a mask that has a special chemical,showing their worst fears, He wears a long blood red robe with a black scorpion on the back and he always wears a hood, carrying his scythe

Personality - He is ruthless, cunning, persuasive, and deadley and is also a surgist- a person who takes pleasure in others pain, some say his evil almost rivals that of the anti-christ and he intends it to be so

Background: Marcus Maximus was born 6/6/6 from the beginning he was a sign of bad luck. He was hard to control, disobediant and held many grudges.He became a man of great power known as The Death to many citizens because of his harsh policies and his hatred for any thing good He was corrupt and ruled injustley.When the Devil offered him a proposal for ultimate power, he sold his soul away to him. However to his horror he was then changed by the devil into a reaper that would collect on thoose who had debts to the devil but would not pay where it was due. Thus he a creature of pure evil was born and it showed neither pity nor mercy. After killing many people, a white mage came and defeated him and sealed him away for 2,000years. Until one day however, a mislead evil mage brought him bck in the hopes that he would be an addition to his army. However to his horror he turned on him and killed him. He then proceeded to kill his entire army in order to power his scythe. He realized he was much weaker now than he had originally been so he set out to kill and power his scythe to its ultimate level, and then the world would know true terror. However he also had one other goal and that was to destroy the white mages and their council for sealing him away. He however was still weak to their magic and needed a way to hone his skills. When he learned of an arena wher he could hone his skills he quickly set out for it......

One, Council members have real lives. Two, your luck officially ran out.

This character bears remarkable resemblence to Elrick of Red, a character used by me. The sword name, in one example, but that's not the only thing wrong here. I can overlook that in light of the problems with this character.

1. His weapon is too powerful, and makes little sense. Altering a character's timeline is a no-no, and is not allowed without a member's permission. That effect must be changed. We allow, however, weapons that can morph into other weapons.

2. He is too closely related to Link, that must be changed. We don't have characters that are either decendants or closely related to the characters in the Legend of Zelda series. This means you should take the concept back to the beginning, because it is not allowed.

3. Expand on his strengths and weaknesses

4. Tone down his magic, the Blood Cry is far too powerful. Blood strength must be changed because we don't have turns on ZU, we have posts. This isn't turn-based, though you have to wait for the other person to post. Have it instead say "briefly increases strength," or something like that.

Fix.

Okay I re-vamped it mostly, sorry about copying off your character, i had no idea that he existed, because when I made this I was on my first day here.

1. If the Sex is N/A, why do you refer to him as a he? Makes little sense.

2. Expand the bio a little

3. Redo the weaknesses, they are not things that a person hates, but rather if a person is stronger or weaker in some areas. You can keep those, but go physical and magical in the weaknesses.

Fix.

Okay, I expanded the bio a little but i'm not quite sure about the weaknes'

Sorry I haven't been on late.

For the weaknesses, put what he's bad at. Since he's a dark monster, he might hate light and holy magic. Since he's light, he might be fast, but weak physically. Things like that.

Okay expanded weaknesses

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