Mano (Improved)

Can this be deleted?

Okay, so you like God of War. And this character's pretty good, if not generic in some respects...The personality is overdone, at the very least, when compared to others I've read. But, I'm picky. Now, the only thing that's holding you back is that weapon, the legendary orb.

If it can become any weapon, it needs to be given a particular maximum size. The reason I'm saying this is, if you can make any weapon, Mano could easily make a shield the size of his body, or something else that seems a little cheaty.

List an approximation of the orb's maximum transformation capacity, and I'll check back here again. Soon. I promise.

Pretty cool charecter you got there, except you overdid the orb, you keep metioning it in appearnce, weapos, even ARMOR! Maybe you should tone down the orb, maybe even merging the orb's description in appearnce to the orb's description in weapons. And maybe your charecter should find a portal to hyrule, since that's where many of the battles are placed. And I wouldn't metion Kingdom Hearts, I don't know if such things exist in BA.

Okay....From what I see in the improved version....good, good. I approve you, in the name of the BA council. Go forth and prove yourself.