Haysen

Name: Haysen.

Age: 12

Height: 5 Feet.

Weight: 100pounds.

Race: Human.

Village: Jatelo Village.

Weapons:
Haysen has two powerful daggers and he has a Standered Bow and arrow set he made himself.

Deafense:
Haysen only defense Is two metal wrist gaurds.
He also weres a Leather silk shirt and a leather and silk pare of pants.

Weakness:
Haysen's weakness is fire, and he also is not good in the cold.
He has a weakness for aniamls too, he would rather take a life for a animal then a person. So if you wantto deeafeat him...Bring a puppy.

Strongness:
Haysen has a powerful strongness when he is in the woods or forrest etc.
He also has a very good arm and can throw things very far.

Skills:
Haysen Skills Are: The Kidney Shot: When Haysen sneaks behind some one he stabbs them in the Kidney area and then while there woonded he jumps in the air and stabbs there neck (This does 50 damage and uses 100% of Haysen's enregy.) He also has a skill with his arrow called: The Sharp Shot: This skill is performed when Haysen Is from a max distance (80feet) or closer, He takes a arrow from his qwival and fires at the person at the head (This does 20 damage and uses 50% of Haysen's energy.)

BackGround:
Haysen is a laid back guy who likes to hangout on building roofs and throw rocks at dumpsters He comes from a family of five. He has a older brother a older sister and I mom and dad. He was born in a hospital when he use to live in A very big city. He was homeschooled and didnt have any friends exept the rare kids that came out side when he was out.
He turned 10 and started a job as a Food stand marketer. He made a little profit and he used it for his family and sometimes he would by some garb for his family. He left home one day when he had to go out of the Village to pick a rare berry flower but when he was out he was kidnapped by a Organization called "The Red Fule" he was taken to there camp after two days in a bag with little breathing area and no food. He managed to escape from the camp but ended up in a village that was nothing like his, It was a bit bigger and was more markety. He got supplies and went of to search for his home.

Personality:
Haysen likes to jump up things and swim in lakes and rivers. He builds things and is best at eating anything he can, He kind to nature and knows how tomake a fire in the wilderness. He has three Orbs he keeps in a sack on attached to his pants. He uses them to keep cool and stop stress, he is a Keep self kid. He try to be responsible but that dosnt always work out...

1) A 52-foot tall 12-year-old that only weighs 100 pounds? What planet do you come from?

2) Please read the Character Approval Policy and re-write this character.

Oops I Ment 5foot lol!

*sighs*

I suggest you read through a few established characters (I suggest those of Council members, like myself or Andúrhil) and then go through this again. Here a few things to look out for.

1) Appropriate Strengths and Weaknesses.

2) Cleaning up the Background.

3) How Skills etc are meant to be done.

4) The fact that there is no HP system here.

Sorry if I'm sounding harsh, but I'm tired and have a bunch more to get done tonight.