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Derrel of the Fire Tribe
Name: Derrel
Race: Dinofos Age: 20 Gender: Male Height: 6'0" Wieght: 300 lbs Eyes: Red Hair: None Appearance: Dinofos' look like Tyranasaurus Rexs that are the size of Velociraptors, and have longer arms. He has black claws, leathery green scales, and black spines along his back from head to tail. The head spines give him a mohawk look. His tail is about a third the length of his body, and his muzzle is wide with serrated teeth. Personality: He is aggresive, mean, and as merciless as the desert that he lives in. He's also cunning and calculating since his people often hunt in packs. He shows compassion only to those useful to him, and respect only to those stronger than him. He is protective of his family and closest friends, but distrusts anything unfamiliar. Weapons: A broadsword, Longbow, and bombs. Armor: Breastplate, Kite shield, and helmet Skills: Tracking and strategy. He knows how to fully utilize what he's got. Strengths: He's calculating, and often goes for the quick kill. He has a lot of stamina, and can go days without food or water. He can stand heat well, as well as cold. Weaknesses: He doesn't do well when surprised or all alone. He doesn't like being over waiste deep in water, even though he doesn't mind cold temperatures. Spells: Heat: The heat spell is used to heat the edges of his sword, the front of his shield, and light fuses and fire arrows. Fireball: He can breathe fire, Nice when his hands are busy. Smoke: Breathing smoke is a good defensive meneuver. Background: Derrel's world is broken into four tribes: Air, Fire, Water, and Earth. The Fire Tribe resides along the equator of the world, among deserts, volcanoes, and other hot climates. Derrel lives in one of the largest deserts in the world, surrounded on three sides by a mountain range, with the sea on the far side. Derrel is a Liutenant in the Fire Tribe military, and helps train the trrops fresh out of the academy. He gives assignments out to squads, and holds down the main base that protects the desert he lives in from Earth Tribe soldiers. While he uses both magic and weapons, he's partial to weapons. He began training in unarmed combat when he was seven, and upgraded to armed combat over the years. He has recently been training in spellcasting to become more balanced. The tribes have long been at war with each other for territory and resources. One is never able to conquer the other because each capital is guarded by a powerful Dragon of each respective element. These Dragons never attack each other because a fight between just two could drain oceans, and sink continents. So a delicate balance has been kept for centuries. The Earth Tribe poses the greatest threat to the Fire Tribe, because they fight over similar territories. While the Air Tribe doesn't pose as great a threat, battles in the sky are waged for the Air cities that the Fire Tribe desires. They could use the Air cities to enhance thier magic and attack the Earth Tribe from above. The Earth Tribe also poses the greatest threat to the Water Tribe because they want to mine the sea floor. The Air and Water Tribes are reletively isolated, so they don't pose a threat to anyone. They just deal with their respective enemies. Last edited by Daphnes; 05-29-2006 at 07:04 PM. |

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Re: Derrel of the Fire Tribe
Can you expand on strengths and weaknesses, and maybe his childhood?
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Re: Derrel of the Fire Tribe
There you go.
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Re: Derrel of the Fire Tribe
...did you expand on the childhood? I don't see any changes...
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Re: Derrel of the Fire Tribe
I added a few lines in the second chapter of his background.
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Re: Derrel of the Fire Tribe
...okay...approved. *stamps*
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