Ryu Faang

Warning! May contain gore. Helpful tip.

Name: Ryu Faang

Age: 14

Race: Human/Dragon. Its a race called the Scalix.

Sex: Male

Hair: Brown/ Long hair, a bit spiked

Eyes: Yellow

Weight: 147 pounds

Height: 5'6" (5 feet 6 inches)

Weapon: Rile's Blade. A blade from a Dragon's fang. Allows Ryu to use the power of Dragons, such as a flaming Blade, Dragon Breath, Dragon Wings, a Dragon tail. Also is called the "Dragon Destroying Blade".

Strengths: Ryu isn't really strong at many things but is skilled at flying (Dragon Form).

Weakness: Ryu is weak at hand to hand combat. He has a light body, so he tends be weak and feeble.

Skills/Magic: Has the Ability to turn into a Dragon. He also can breathe fire as his human form.


Appearance: Human form

Dragon form

Personality: Ryu is very aggresive in battle. If he is defeated, he usually goes back to the same person for revenge. Otherwise, he gloats if he wins.

Biography: Ryu is an average Scalix. He's not very powerful, but is not really weak. He's the weakest in his family, and is often picked on.

Ryu grew up in a town far in the Scalix Kingdom of Ruhi. It was a town full of many Scalix warriors, big and strong. In this town was a legendary Scalix warrior named Gyth (Geeth), who was also Ryu's father. He slain many other creatures, until one day was slain himself.

Ryu was chosen to be the next successor after his father. And so Ryu set off to train his dragon abilities. Along his quest to be the best Scalix, he met many other friends whom taught him many other tricks to being a Scalix. Many taught him to glide better as a dragon. Other's taught him that even though his Dragon form was powerful, some times It was best to stay as a human.

When he became strong enough, he set back to his town. But when he got back, an evil Lord ruled it. His name was unknown to others besides his group of loyal minions. He was nicknamed "The Blood Shedder" since he killed many thousands before him.

Ryu did not like how "Blood Shedder" treated his own town and then went after to kill "Blood Shedder". Ryu went on a rampage against this man and even human nor dragon could defeat "Blood Shedder". Ryu was severly hurt and was on the verge of being killed, when his friends, Arika, a 16-year old female Scalix, and Dover, a 17 year old Scalix, swooped in from the sky and rescued him.

"Blood Shedder" wasn't happy enough to become the Town's lord. He then hatched an idea and invaded the Kingdom's Castle. He killed the King, and was no longer called Lord "Blood Shedder" but "Blood Shedder", the Merciless.

Elsewhere, somewhere not seen under "Blood Shedder"'s eyes, Ryu was secretly trained. Under a master Scalix, he was trained not only to glide in his dragon form, but was trained to weild the same Blade his father once used. The Dragon killing sword, Rile's Blade. Many a generation used this blade to fend off evil Scalix. When Ryu was fully trained with this blade, it seemed that another person was coaching him on what to do in battle.

Ryu, feeling better, not only physically, but mentally as well. He went back to the Ruhi Castle and challanged the King. "Blood Shedder" put up quite a fight, blood staining the walls. But in the end Ryu struck him down with Rile's Blade. He sliced "Blood Shedder" in two and defeated him, thus bringing peace back into the land.

Ryu, Arika, and Dover were hailed as "The Young Warrior's". But Ryu felt his powers weren't strong enough. He told Arika and Dover one night that he would return again. Ryu then picked up his sword and tied it to his back and then walked away from his land. But will he ever return?

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Ok this took me awhile. Please rate on it. And tell me what I should add onto it. Please do not say Biography.

Right. Well, the bio is a bit... strange, to say the least, but I suppose it's an okay story. However, it could be better if you could shed some light on his childhood and his mother (which you haven't mentioned), as well as more details on his relationship with Arika and Dover.

Your strengths and weaknesses could use quite some work. For example, you could mention his strengths/weaknesses as a Scalix in comparison to a human. Check out any of my characters to see how you could add to the strengths/weaknesses.

As for his appearance, 'twould be good if you could write out his appearances as well as the image links

The personality part needs a lot of work. Again, have a look at any one of my characters to see how the personality section should be.

Fix 'er up, and I'll get back to you

ok. Thank you. Sorry if the Dragon looked like crap. I'll have my friend make me a newer version of that. I'll have to get back to this. i'll write it out and then edit.