Elizabeth Hawns

Name: Elizabeth Hawns

Age: 24

Race: Italian Woman, ancestor of the Guardian Elders

Sex: Female

Hair: Long, straight, golden brown hair about midways down her back and cut in layers to frame her face.

Eyes: Green

Weight: 125 lbs

Height: 5' 4"

Weapon: Staff des Alcoolici
Apperance and Description:A long and slender staff with a crook at the end much like that of a Shepards Staff. The Staff is made of olive wood, and on the hook is a single olive leaf that never wilts, for it gains its power from the good and Noble spirit of the weilder. If the weilder has a darkened heart and mind, the leave will then only wilt and turn black, and the staff itself shall shimmer in that of darkness. The longer a darkened weilder holds it, the more envoleped it becoomes in the darkness, and vice versa for the Noble and good.

The Staff also has the power to control the momentary flow of time, plus look into the past and far future of the holder. Also As weilder's spririt, be it darkness or noble, increases in power, the Staff's power increases as well.

Armor: Her only armor is her cloak made for her by her mother before her passing. Each thread sewn with the love of her mother, protecting her form many spells.

Strengths: Extremely Agile. Able to make quick judgements and sense the very flow of the aore around her, thus telling when an attack is coming. Also, has the ability to call apon her sacred energies given to her by her ancestors, the Guardian Elders.

Weakness: Her wekness is her on love for every living creature, when something is in danger, she must help it no matter wht the cost may be. Also, being as light as she is, she can easily be thrown.

Skills/Magic: By calling on her bestowed powers as a descendent of the uardian Elders, she can create energ and control its flow to attack her enemys. These energies include the basic elements of Fire, Water, Earth, and Air.


Appearance: Elizabeth wears a pair offlowing green pants that are made of somewhat of a silk material. She wears a white tunic then a small leather vest over the tunic. Over all of that she wears a cloak made by her mother that is fastened with an Olive leave constructed by her ancestors and passed down to her. She carries her staff and a small stachel in which she keeps personal belongings and such in.

Personality: Elizabeth respects everyone, even her most hated opponets in battles. Every person/thing she fights, she respects it's abilities even if they may be pitiful. If she looses, she looses honerably and will fight until she draws her last breath. She is comptetitive in everything she does as well.

Biography: Elizabeth is now 24 yrs old and still living strong. She lost all her family, her mother, father, two brothers, and one sister when her house was burned to the ground in awful fire caused by a fire that caught up in the Olive fields around her family's house. She was gone on her nightly walk across the countryside hearding the sheep in for a nghts stay on an old hill that she kept them at many a times. But when she circled the hill to see the small town from which she was from, Arcadia, she saw her family's farm up in flames. The Olive trees, blazing so greatly, it lit up most of the small village. She rushed down to the village but it was too late, the villagers had tried to douse the inferno, but to no avail, her family, house, evrything, gone up in smoke. She had nowhere to go and no money to build her self a new home, she decided to leave the village and depart on a quest to deiscover, who, what, or how the blaze started, destroying her life at only the age of 17. In her quest she stumble upon an anciet cave, deep in the hillside of a large mountain when she was looking for a place to get out of a drenching storm. She found the cave, secluded, away from all civilization. When inside she built herself a quick fire. She didn't like the fire, but she needed it, to live. She thought of it strange how the one thing that killed her life, could as well save it, this is where she gained her respect for all things from, no matter it's wickedness, it had a good side, deep inside of it somewhere. As the cave was lit up, it became apparant to her that there was a corridor leading deep back into the cave, curiosity got the best of her and she made her way through the cave and there at the end, lay the Staff des Alcoolici. It lay beside an old man, what looked like an Elder she had seen from the pictures her parents had showed her before their passing. The staff enlightened something inside her. Something told her she was meant to find that staff and rid the world, for when she picked up the staff from it's resting place, she felt the power flow through her veins. She vowed to never cease untill she ridded the world of all evil. She had to, it was the purpose of the staff, she could feel it. The Staff awoken a part in her that she ahd never felt, a power of knowledge, a power of nobleness. The next morning after Elizabeth had found he staff, she set out on her quest, she had not forgotten about her family, that was her driving spirit, but now she had a greater task before her, dispelling evil from this sacred world she lived in.

Well I hope this good enough

ummm....................Is anyone ever going to tell me if I have been approved or not???? I gave it an entire week, so could somebody tell me if I did something wrong or if anything needs to be changed???

-NC

Hello there. Time to work out the bugs in this character.

1) I'd like you to add another weakness, if you'd be so kind. What she has right now isn't quite enough (close, though).

2) In Race, you say she is the ancestor of the Guardian Elders. Then, later on, you say she is their descendant. Which is it? Going by the Bio, I'm assuming the latter.

3) Please read through the whole thing carefully and correct any and all mistakes you find. There's a whole host of typos in there.

That's all.

okey dokey, np, i'll fix them asap, thank goodeness someone finally looked at it