Sinnai

Name:Sinnai
Age:30
born:1976
Race:kitsune (fox demon)
Sex:male
Hair:poofy shiny silver fur
Eyes:silver
Weight:38lbs(when in normal form)
Height:3ft(when in normal form)

Weapon: Claws, Teeth, one silenced p. Medium sized broad sword
Samuri sword. assortment of sutras

Armor: bulletproof vest( looks like Hawian T-shirt)
Skills:has an exquisite aim, which came from
years of practice (and actual combat) as a sniper.
knows martial arts, which he learned while he lived in china.
. swordsman skills, also learned in china. body guard, learned from his father
in australia. Asassin, his uncle taught him the ways of an asassin.

Magic: Transformation:allows transformation into almost any humanoid being
. This allows Sinnai to use almost all of his weapons and arsenal. This is also good for camoflauge. The downside is that He can only hold his disuise for 1-3 hours, depending on the form he takes. Also if he is hurt badly he cant hold the disuise.

Invisibility:A powerful, very useful magic.With the combined magic of
an invisibility sutra and a kitsune leaf spell, Sinnai can go vurtually invisible.'
This is extremely handy in battle and in areas of stealth.If the sutra and/or leaf falls off of his head, he will become visible again. It also only lasts 5-10
minutes, depending on other factors such as Sinnai's form.

last resort: when Sinnai is in trouble,He can use a magic spell called
last resort. Basicaly what it does is gives him an extra boost of power and energy and makes him go besurk, but after about 2 minutes the spell ends and if his opponents arent defeated he'll lose the battle and pass out. Also this attack can only be used in the most dire situations, so it can't be used in regular battle.

Kitsune magic: This Is just some simple magic that all kitsune know from childhood. They are mainly distractions that are really quite childish.

Strengths: He's very quick, Blends in well at night, can jump very high without hurting himself. his magic, and skills

Weakness: When badly damaged, he tends to pass out. he tends to be lured into taunts which get him damaged badly.He can't stand loud high piched noises eg. a phone ringing. he is easy to spot in the day. He'll faint on sight if he gets hit in the head with any sort of force.

Personality:He is very, very perverted. He'll do anything to catch someone doing it. As a teen he was sex crazed, as are many teens. And,well, it never went away. when he's not being perverted, Sinnai is actually very cheerful and cute. On the battlefield he is very cocky and ruthless. When he's pissed off he'll use any means nessesary to get what he wants, including cheap shots and pulling a rocket launcher on his opponent.

Appearance: as shown in picture

History:Sinnai greaw up in the boiling deserts of australia with his parents and brother, Usagi. They had a simple life, living in a very large burrow about 700km from sydney, the capital.Occasionally his father went into towns nearby to get food, Using his transformation spell of course.

At age 10 Sinnias father began to teach him about the ways of a bodyguard,
because he himself was a bodyguard. His father was a body guard of the Priminister of Australia. on his 13th birthday, his uncle Kianson [Kee-ON-sen] came to livewith them because his home in Japan was destroyed due to land development.

While sinnai's Uncle was living there, he taught Sinnai and Usagi the ways of an asassin. In Japan he was an asassin for a gang of asassins in Hiroshima. In about 3 months Sinnai had mastered the ways of an asassin and Usagi in 5.

Throughout Sinnais teen years he had many, many girlfriends. many wanting to marry him. Although he usually did it with them, he never married any of them. He couldn't marry any of them because they would eventually find out he was a kitsune and supposedly"hate him". He still calls some of them from time to time.

When Sinnai turned 21, he left home and went to china, where he learned many a skill, including martial arts, and swordsmanship.He stayed in china for 5 years. in march of 2002 he went to Japan and became a Body guard.

Then, in april of 2006 He got a phone call that would change his life. he was chosen by the U.S. administration to help save the world from a very serious enemy known as "the motherf***ing son of a bi**ch that killed George bush" (yes thats what he calls himself).

Sinnai will not kill anyone unless absolutely nessesary. Although he seems the type to kill on site, he acctually won't, Unless of course someone threaten's to kill one of his family members. Then He'll kill on sight.

He hates any sort of food that is not natural. He is very easy going and tends to be very rude. His dream is to defeat all evil in the world.

First off, you need to try to space things more properly. It was a little hard to read. Maybe apply for the Battle School, if you haven't already. Just tidy everything up a bit. Your linebreaks are all screwed, too. I suppose you types it on notepad? Fix that, too.

Then there's the transformation. We can't have him turning into anything he wants, so you'll have to put a limit on that. Maybe only humanoid figures, or something like that, or else he could turn into a walking skyscraper. o-o

And, uh... interesting personality... don't know what to say about that one.... and it continues in the bio XD. Very intriguing way of portraying sex. "They often did it" XD *Scrambles off laughing* So straight forward XD.

Anyway, fix the line breaks, and modify the transformation. Perhaps do something about the handguns, too. Just seems weird to have a Kitsune with handguns.

I fixed the spacing as best I could( stupid notepad ), edited the transformation so that he can only transform into humanoid figures and I changed the gun thing. I'd like to have him with at least one gun because, in his human form its his best ofence.

Hm, well... alright. Be nice with the gun, though. They're such nasty little toys .

*Approved*