Erotate Fenkin

I must come back to the BA...with a pre-made character. (By me though, I'm no theif.)
This is a username from an RPG, but I don't give if you don't, eh? Anyway, here:

Name:Erotate Fenkin

Age: 3 really...but is technically 34 (see bio)

Race: Enkidukai, man-like cats

Sex: Male

Hair: Dark-ish Gold

Eyes: Red

Weight: 140 lb

Height: 5 ft. 9 in.

Weapon: A whole arsenal of daggers and swords; but only has one dagger hoister and a sheath (nope no arrows)

Armour: A cloth vest and leather pants

Strengths: Good with swordplay (and axeplay at that) and can run real quickly

Weaknesses: Scythes (as he is HORRIBLE at dodging them), the basics naturally; giant goblins with blunt objects, horsemen when he is on foot and has the instincts of a cat in some points (I'm not saying he's afraid of dogs or anything though), he's not a Matrix type person(he can only block a sword with a sword or an arrow with a sheild) yet he can still dodge things, he's a horrible swimmer, and can't hold his ground very well(because he's really light)

Magics: Ah here is where it begins: Can cast a healing spell that heals him or others(yet it's quite slow and would be really hard to use in battle) Can throw fireballs(at the moment it's quite harmless and off aim due to lack of training) and most importantly, he can gather the light and life around him to create a menacingly powerful arrow that sheds off light and can use a lot of force on an enemy.

Personality: Has a dark, depressed side, but usually takes bad situations and mocks them(no matter what, he's always able to be happy/jolly) Acts pretty toguh sometimes and supports a lot of teamwork.

Biography: Erotate started out as a fish type person (looked like a zora with wings) and had nowhere to go in life really. He found the random inspiration to be a warrior of some kind. So he went around on a quest to get a weapon. He was given one and tested in battle; and it just so happened that the giver was the leader of a clan called The Warriors. The people in this group were like the family he never knew. One day he was banished though, for being a total freak. He was re-accepted by a kind person named Amani (yes, Swathili for "peace"). He battled along these fellow Warriors for many years to come.. (31 to be exact) But one day he found he was behind the others; much too weak. He had no idea what to do, and silenced himself until he was going to feel good about himself. He went on and on....little by little slipping into exile. When one day he just fell to the ground; seemingly dead. That was going to be the end of Erotate(or at that time, Sean) until the gods noticed and found he DID have a meaning. He was incarnated into a cat-like creature. He went back to his guild to find dying people. He had new powers as this cat! He healed them, but it didn't work well. They went to the Death Realm and consulted a healer...and everyone survived. He went back and killed the dreaded monster, and found he had re-awakened as a strong fellow! And from that day forward, Erotate Fenkin was on his way to becoming something big in this clan of skilled and fruit-ful new family members. So along he went, searching for adventure. Along a road he saw a sign that stated "Tournament of the Champions! Come to the Arena to sign in!" Erotate saw no adventure here until he saw a band of Rogues and Theives...with a hostage! Erotate unsheathed his sword and attacked; only one theif remained, on the ground; arms cut off and Erotate's Sword to his neck. "Now tell me, Evil One, what were you and your band doing with this hostage?" "I'll never tell you! Not as long as master does not find out!" And with that, Erotate stabbed his neck. He went over to the hostage and cut his ropes off and all he saw was a dead man with a note: Join the Tounament of Champions, or your clan will die as it stands! We have your friends and a nice furnace to go with it...and a bet offer. If you win the Tournament, we will, of course, set them free. If you lose, well you won't be living to see them die; it's a no holds barred tournament. So join or witness death." As determined as Erotate was, he knew something really devious was about to happen. Someone who could afford THAT MUCH ink could definately afford a good advisor. So he had no choice; he had to win the Tournament. He strutted along and all he could see was the massive size of the arena; the very place that the Warriors had accepted him. Well...kind of. So he went down to the first auditorium. Most of the Warriors were tied up against the wall! Except for those who had chosen to join the Tourney in free will... Jorelle, Penult, and Trale. Penult and Trale were doing very well; until the final battle of their category, where they were placed against eahc other! The roaring vicous crowd kept urging the not so sure Penult to fight... and they did. It seemed to go on for ages! Until....Trale killed Penult with a huge blow. And after that, Jorelle went to the top of the next category, and in the last battle, died at the same time as her opponent. Now it was Erotate's turn. He had to go up against the big guy. At first it was just simple strikes, and then Erotate cuts his head off and it grew back! Then Erotate had to think fast. And that is just what he did! He used his mind to move all of the huge statues down and they crushed him. That was the end of that. As a last wish, the big guy wished for Erotate's death. And got it... Trale freed the Warriors, and Penult, Jorelle, Erotate, and the Big Boss Guy were all in the death realm. They had to fight their way out! The whole place was crushing around them. Then Erotate threw him off the cliff and everyone escaped. And that leads up to today. (Need more info please ask)


Sean [no last name] Erotate Fenkin >
Oh, and just to clarify things, Sean doesn't really need a bio becuase he isn't the one battling, but it's safe to tell that his Father was a healer and Mother a musician.

All right, let's get started here.

First, use indents so I can read everything better. Secondly, touch up a little on his weaknesses, they seem too out of the ordinary. Like, for example, is he strong or weak? Fast or slow? Things like that.

Work on those things, and then we talk.

How's that? Thank you again for looking at it.

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Expand the bio. I want to see a little more.

Expanded it to an extremely important event.

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