Kyzer

Derscription.
Name: Kyzer.
Age: Around somewhere between 75.
Sex: Male.
Race: Reploid.
Weight: 123 lbs.
Height: 6, feet 2 inches. I suppose I don't really know how big to make im. So this should do.
Eyes: Dark red.

Weapons: Red Recoil Rods. Red Kyzer-Saber. Red Gauntlet Shield

Armor: His body. And his Red Gauntlet Shield.
Appearance:

He also keeps his saber magnetized to his leg. But it is a strong magnet.

Personality: He is a reploid torn between the natures of good and evil. Though he has no heart. His creator did. She seemed to have put a piece of herself into all of her creations. He sees no real thing good or evil. He sees them for who they are. He is not good or evil, but a little bit of both. He is seeking the answer to why he was created. He is not easy to tick off, the fact that his creator was kind and she seemed to put part of herself into each creation. He is more of the kind protective type than a murderer. Though if he is cornered he will get angry.

Skills:
Shadow Soul, he flies through an object and then slashes it with his saber. But it is limited, he needs energy to do it. It requires a high level of energy to use. So if he is weak he can not use it.
Shadow Dash, he simply dashes through an object. It requires no energy. Though if the dash ends in front of a bullet, the bullet will hit.
Apocalypse, this takes all but enough energy to back away after using it. He jumps up into the air, skrunches up into a ball, and stretches back out again. Everything within a half mile radius is hit, being damaged. He normally uses this if he is surrounded or mad. But if he has little energy left it is impossible to use. It takes 80% of his energy.

Strengths: Due to being a reploid he is stronger then a human. He can dash through any object by means of using the Shadow Dash. He can even survive long falls. Though they may damage him if they are to long.

Weaknesses: Also being a reploid, if the crystal on his forehead ever were to be destroyed he would ciese to exist. But it is made of hard crystal material. Falling on sharp objects is a threat also though. Also. If a sword were to hit a circuit in his arms/legs/body. That part would be immobelized. His energy level may be decreased, his abilities can drain his energy. If he fights too hard too long his energy will start to drain faster.

Biography:
Kyzer was built twenty-five years after Zero went to sleep. His existance was kept secret. It was a mistery who built this reploid.

Doctor! What have we done? a scientist yelled. We have created a monster!

Warning Warning! Code red alert, sections three through seven have been locked.

Three through seven! Those are the escape routs! another scientist shouted.

Calm down, a femanine voice was heard. This is only the beginning if you give up now all will be lost. Find a way out, I will keep the reploid busy once it leaves the container.

Yes! Ruby do not be to harsh, but, try to keep him away from the power supply, a female scientist spoke out.

Yes! I will. Go get out of here! Ruby a reploid of the Leviathan series responded.

Aaaaaaaarrrgh! the reploid yelled as it smashed out of the container.

I must not allow you to move on, the female reploid said. You must stop he... What.

The reploid dashed through her and kicked her in the back.

Ugh! Why did she give him such power?

She spun around and shot magma stakes from her spear. The stakes stuck into the reploids back. But he grabbed them and forged them with some other items in the lab into recoil rods, a saber, and gauntlets. He took the recoil rod. And slammed it against the floor. Flying through the top of the lab.

Ruby! the scientist yelled after seeing the lab explode. Ruby was her most behaved and most human reploid that she built.

Let us go. a voice tried to comfort the woman. It is to dangerous here. We need to return to Neo Arcadia.

Ms... a fading voice came from inside the lab. Though no one could hear it.

Outside the lab the other reploid was wondering.

Why do I feel I have done something wrong? the black reploid wondered. I need to find my answers.

He lept up. Running through the forest destroying robots. At random a large figure popped up out of no where. There was a reploid fighting it. It looked like nothing more than a piece of cake to him. He ran over grabbed his forged saber. Jumped and slashed. The figure hit the saber and the saber disingaged, flying out of his hand. He took his recoil rods and started pounding on the figure left and right. When he had finally had enough. He went over to grab his saber, picked it up, and swung extremely fast and hard at the figure. Once he hit it. A large portion of the figure had blown off.

Wow! You just destroyed a golem! a soldier exclaimed.

Golem? What is a golem? the reploid asked looking really confused.

Hello, I am Jessy. You are? a woman walked up to the reploid holding a gun in her hand. There were a lot of people in uniform with guns.

I have no name. I do not even know who I am. he replied.

He is a reploid, he has no name, or an identity. a woman walked up to Jessy speaking.

They walked back to their base talking. A golem flew out. Kyzer jumped up and slammed his saber onto the golem. Destroying a large portion of its body. After that reploids and golems started coming out of the woods everywhere.

Get out of here I will take care of them, the reploid said.

The humans ran ahead of him while he cleared the path with his saber.
He stayed behind after they had gone off.

Apocolypse! he used his final move.

Clearing out most of the weaker reploids the golems were badly damaged.
He used what little energy he had left to get out. And go after the humans.
He made it to their base and fainted.

Three hours later.
There was a large commotion in the base.

What is going on? he asked.

Neo Arcadia has declared war against us. The resistance base.

Twenty five years later. The reploid was running through a snowy mountain.

Target aquired. Commensing mission. a reploid was talking on a mic.

He had destroyed many robots on the mountain.

Why do I continue to fight? Why do I still live after all of these painful years of war. Why? Jessy has grown yet I have only been battle scarred. the reploid was wondering in his mind while finishing the mission. Mission accomplished. Bring me back.

The... tel... epo... rter is mal... functi... he heard a scattered voice.

Hello Kyzer, a feminine voice spoke out. Remember me? I am your sister in a way.

Yo... I thought I killed you. he responded. And who is this Kyzer? I have never heard of that name.

Kyzer. You do not even remember your own name, she responded. Professor Diana created you and I.

I know no one who goes by that name. he replied.

He took his saber and turned it on. Who the heck are you, and what do you want with me?

Someone wants to meet you. Come follow me. she said.

He questionably followed her for a strange reason. He could feel he may find some answers. After a long walk they came to a large city. Neo Arcadia the city was called.
They entered a building, and he had a long chat with an old woman that claimed to be a Professor Diana.

My my. Kyzer you could not remember that day after all these years, the old woman said. I am dying I need you to remember this day and never forget it.

Thirty years later.
Waaaah! a crying sound was heard within the resistance base. It is a girl! a joyous voice was heard. The commander of the base had a daughter. Kyzer had revealed his name to the resistance a couple of years back. He wondered what was going on because he was just a reploid.

Kyzer went out on the cliff and sat on the side. Looking up at the night sky.
What is this feeling? Joy, peace, or chaos. I can not tell. There was a sudden hope in my mind when I heard of my creator. Diana who are you? Where are you? Kyzer said as what seemed to be a shooting star flew in the night sky. Slamming into the ground in front of the base. I need to check it...

Waaah!crying became louder inside.

Kyzer lept up and ran inside. There were reploids everywhere. He grabbed his saber and started to destroy them. He got into the mother's room and found three women lying on the floor he checked to see if they were still breathing, they were alright. And the baby was crying. The mother was unconciouse she had just had a baby.
He ran around the base looking for injured or maybe even more reploids.

A golem then slammed through the roof. It was not a normal golem though. It was heavily armed. Darnit I don't have the time for this garbage. He took his recoil rods and slammed them against the golem's face. Then took his saber and stabbed it in the middle of its mechanicle body the golem fell exploding. He ran over to the room where the mother was. And stayed there guarding all night.

After that, there were loud crashing sounds coming from outside the base. He did not move an inch the whole night. A red figure came dashing through the hall. He thought wondering whom or what it was. The women in the room woke up. He took guns off of the walls and gave them to the three.

Protect them with your lives. he said to the three. I am going to the front to stop this madness. Whether it kills me or not.

He ran out to the battle front the enemies surrounded the base. He saw no way to kill them all.

Need some help tough guy? he heard a femanine voice speak out. Long time no see Kyzer.

Ruby what are you doing here? he asked.

I came to help, she answered. Though two reploids are not nearly enough. Come on out!

A whole army of reploids and humans came out of tunnels and passages in the forest.
The war was even, many human and reploid lives were lost but they knew the stakes and they took the chances. A new human life had begun that night. Destined to become the leader of the Resistance, a baby girl named, Ciel.

Twenty years later.
The resistance base. Home to the many brave soldiers who fight for their rights, against Neo Arcadia. The members of this resistance were out on a mission to find the legendary reploid. They found him, but many men were lost during the battle.

Kyzer on the other hand, vanished during that mission never to be seen again.
Until now.

Okay that is it. Approvers do your stuff.

Hm...interesting char. Still some kinks that need working out, though.

1) Could you be more definite about his age? Kyzer may not know how old he is, but you should. Plus, I'd like to see a specific wiehgt - there are those of us here who have no idea who "Zero" is, and so don't know how tall he would be.

2) Add a little to the Personality, please. Is he bad-tempered? Impossible to anger? How does he respond to insults? That kind of thing.

3) I would like you to add another two Weaknesses, please. Simply being vulnerable where the crystal is concerned is not enough for a character with Kyzer's abilities.

Other than that, no real problems. I'll check back after you've gone through it. ^_^

Done Tiroth.

I changed the BIO a little also. I gave im about two more weaknesses.

Good enough. ^_^

*approves*