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Old 01-23-2006, 04:30 PM
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The dark child.

I'm making one final character. This one is the one I'm planning on being Gorin's successor, meaning that I'll use him at least as much as Gorin. I think I'll get rid of Darges soon...

Name: Unknown. (He was never given a name at birth, so he'll go by anything)
Aliases: The dark child, Abomination, Monstrosity, The Thing, It, Beast, Evil Boy- By the villagers of his home town. Kid- Gorin, Tokumaru, and Nenet call him that.
Age: 2, but looks to be 13.
Height: 5 feet 8 inches.
Weight: About 130 pounds.
Sex: Male
Race: Abomination. (Mix of three or more races)

Weapon: Two spirit orbs. They can change into any weapon he needs at the time, excluding bombs and projectile weapons.

Armor: None.

Appearence: He has short white hair. One eye is brown, the other is green. He isn't very muscular, which hides the fact that he is as strong as a dodongo. He wears rags usually. His teeth are normal except for his canines, which are slightly larger and sharper than usual.

Magic/Abilities: When has grown angered and badly damaged, he will turn into a wrath demon form. In this form his eyes glow red and his strength and speed double. He also grows regenerative abilities in this form.


Personality: He is very quiet. He angers easily, one of the things that separates him from his father. He doesn't like to accept help, as he considers himself unworthy of any such service from anybody. He has a low opinion of himself.

Family: Gorin- (Unknowing Father), Harges (Grandfather), Darges (Great Uncle), Jamenda (Cousin), Amanda (Unwilling Mother), Nenet (He considers her the closest thing to a mother he’s ever had).- Gorin and Amanda explained in bio, as well as Nenet.

Strengths: He cannot be possessed due to the small amount of angel blood that runs through his veins. Being part demon god means that he can't die from injuries. He also has the strength of a dodongo.

Weaknesses: He isn't as skilled with weaponry as his father was, and has a low opinion of himself. He angers fairly easily, and never asks for help. Also unlike his father, he is unable to control himself in wrath demon form.

Bio: Shortly before Gorin was accidentally slain at the hands of Tokumaru, Grasthos possessed him and forced him to rape a female peasant by the name of Amanda.

Amanda gave birth to a demonic litter of eight children before dying. The children grew quickly, seven of them joining Gorin's army as the Dera mages. They died of old age due to the overly quick growing process.

The eighth child was no different. He aged much quicker than most other species, and by the time he was a year old he looked to be six.

The remaining child grew up in slums, just barely managing to scrap food. He found out about his fighting abilities when he killed a man he caught trying to take a blind girl into his home.

The villagers, finding him with his hands covered in blood and what turned out to be the father of the blind girl's corpse, beat the child with sticks and nailed him to a wall.

He was stuck hanging from the wall, the villagers insulting him and throwing things at him for days. They stopped when Gorin found them. The then wrath god was appalled at what they were doing to a mere child.

After chasing them off, Gorin helped the teen down. After giving the child food and healing his wounds, Gorin went off to return to the Dome.

With Gorin gone, the villagers resumed trying to beat the child. He fled, following the same path that he remembered Gorin taking.

His first sight upon entering the Dome was the fatal blow that went through Gorin's chest. The god had never known that it was his own accidental child, whom he didn't know even existed, that he had helped that day.

The child lashed out at Tokumaru when the Heavenflame Samurai realised the teen had seen Gorin's slaying. Tokumaru took him in for a time, letting him see Gorin's funeral.

The child couldn't bear it. He had seen enough murder. He stole Gorin's spirit orbs from the coffin so that he could remember the kind man who saved him from the villagers, and fled. He went back to living in the slums, changing towns from time to time.

At one town, he accidentally killed a drunk. The child was surrounded by villagers, all ready to kill him. A female charged through the group and chased them off with a large sword.

The female’s name was Nenet, and she turned out to be just as kind as Gorin and Tokumaru were. She gave him food, protected him whenever an angry villager tried to kill him, and talked to him more than anybody else had ever done before.

During one of these conversations, Nenet mentioned somebody named Gorin. The child remembered the name from Gorin’s funeral, and went off to try and find Gorin.

He's still looking for Gorin, whom he still doesn't know is his father. He still lives in slums, but moves from town to town more quickly, looking for Gorin.

He also wishes to find Tokumaru and Nenet, both for the reason of leaving their care without properly thanking them. He only realised this days after he left Nenet to search for Gorin.
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Old 01-23-2006, 07:14 PM
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Re: The dark child.

Slightly confused, why exactly does he look like a teen when he's two. Expand the bio, and downgrade his strengths.
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Old 01-23-2006, 07:18 PM
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Re: The dark child.

Errm, I thought it was explained in the bio. Oh well, I edited it just as you asked me to. I took out the strength about stealth, and I added to his bio.
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Old 01-27-2006, 03:39 PM
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Re: The dark child.

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