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Kawaii
Here's another one
Name: Kawaii Age: 72 Race: Doll Sex: Female Hair: Blonde, up in a tail Eyes: Blue Weight: 78 lbs. (118 lbs.) Height: 3 ft. 11 in. (5 ft. 11 in.) Weapon: Her own body Armor: Her own body Strengths: She has superhuman physical strength, extremely disproportionate to her size. She also has superhuman running and jumping abilities. If she loses a limb or other part of her body she can just take a piece of wood about the size of the lost part and it will turn into whatever it needs to be. Though her curiosity and sub-par intelligence often get her into trouble, it also makes her fearless Weakness: She’s made of wood so she’ll burn if she touches fire. She’s deathly afraid of fire and concurrently doesn’t perform as well when she’s near it. Because she's a child she has many childish hangups such as disobidence, uncertainty, and confusion. She doesn't know how to read. She's a sucker for toys or shiny things, so she can be bribed out of or into situations without too much trouble. Though her curiosity and sub-par intelligence make her fearless, it also gets her into trouble. Skills/Magic: She can transform herself into a full grown woman for a short period so she can try and “talk” her way out of a problem. Though she loses her superhuman strength when she does this. Personality: She’s the most sunny little girl you’ve ever met. The smile on her face shines just as brightly as her personality. She loves nothing more than playing in sunny, green fields. She’s as clean and uncorrupted as the blue sky on a cloudless day. She runs up to people she doesn’t know just because she wants to talk to them. She’ll scream or cry when she sees something scary, or doesn’t like, like fire. When she’s in a fight she acts tough, but is still very compassionate. She finds fighting to be a form of play, until she gets damaged or is exposed to fire, then she has sense enough to take it half way seriously. She doesn’t know why men act strange around her when she’s full grown, but she’s not afraid to use that against them. Appearance: She has clear, pale skin that is only broken by a red circle on her left shoulder blade. Her blonde hair is put up in a tail by a piece of red string. Her loose, hot pink dress extends to her knees. A light pink bow marked with a blue jewel in the center covers her chest. And a red belt rests around her waist. She has red shoes with very light pink socks. History: Kawaii was made by a doll maker who will forever remain nameless to history. That doll maker was the best in the land, who could even bring his dolls to life. He made scores of men, women, and children to make others happy. But because his creations came and went so fast he himself was a very sad and lonely man. So he decided to make for himself a daughter. She would be the perfect little girl: full of energy and sunshine for the rest of his days. But a few days before his most perfect creation was finished, a lord, to whom he owed a debt, came in with an order. He needed an assassin: one that could break through anything, but could still charm their way into any enemy’s halls. The lord ordered that it be ready in only half the time it normally took to make a doll of that kind. So the doll maker turned on the only creation that was close enough to completion, yet had enough room to be built to the lords specifications: his daughter. He outfitted her with greater strength than his strongest doll, greater speed than his fastest, and greater regenerative power than his most resilient. The doll maker presented the doll to the lord, only for it to be turned down because of its appearance as a child. The doll maker, furious that he had bastardized his own daughter for no reason, shouted the most hateful words he could think of at the lord. The angered lord then sentenced the creator and creation to death. At that moment the doll maker’s sanity shattered. He touched the dolls back and whispered a word to it, activating it. As the dolls eyes glowed a sickly yellow it slaughtered all those around it, save its master. As they ran away soldiers launched a shower of arrows upon them. As the doll maker lay dying he touched her back, whispered a word, then pushed its lifeless body into the river. She woke with no memory, only knowing that she had a master somewhere to find.
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Re: Kawaii
What an interesting char. There's only one thing you need to sort out - either decrease the Strengths, or add more on Weaknesses. A vulnerability to fire doesn't really compensate for superhuman physical abilities.
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Re: Kawaii
Ready for another look over.
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Re: Kawaii
Wait, wait...you have a contradiction in there. First you say her child-like qualities include fear, then you say she's fearless. Which one is it? Other than that, seems fine to me. Just fix that contradiction before you post in the Character Thread.
*approves*
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