Edmund Callin

Name: Edmund Callin
Age: 104 (or 88, as a vampire)
Birthday: January 1st, 1902
Race: Vampire
Gender: Male
Hair: light brown with natural blondish streaks and slightly longish, but perfect and fluffy (Kind of like this but fluffier and a different color http://us.tv1.yimg.com/tv.yahoo.com/...mtv05vma_k.jpg)
Eyes: change depending on his appetite. When he is hungry, they will be black, but when he is not, or in a good mood, they are light and butterscotch. Or anywhere in between those.

Weight: eh…does 160 make sense? (I’m totally bad with boys’ standard weights)

Height: 5’11”

Weapon: His teeth. They’re really sharp, but from a normal glance won’t seem unnaturally sharp. They don’t protrude from his mouth or anything. And they’re pearly white. But they have venom in them. The venom will turn the other person into a vampire, unless their species is immune to it. Unless he sucks all their blood out, or a lot out, then they will die. He also owns a gun but he doesn’t use it like ever, or even take it anywhere from his home.

Strengths: Faster than your average human. Stronger for his size, more than a human. But not unbeatably strong. Just stronger than humans, his prey. This is how a vampire must be, as a lion is stronger than a lamb. Also extremely good looking, so as to attract his prey, like a fly to a Venus flytrap. He also has better senses than a human. (He can smell better and hear better) Basically, he is the perfect predator for humans.

Also, the only way to kill Edward is to cut him into a million little pieces and burn them. And some other things…but…(I have no idea what they are yet.) He cannot be killed by a stake in the heart, or any of that holy water stuff.

Weakness: He isn’t that good of a fighter, really. He doesn’t usually fight at all. He is only strong from being what he is. He is not a trained warrior, which does put him at a disadvantage.

Skills/Magic: He can sense what other people are going to do, but not like reading minds or seeing the future. He just gets the gist of their mood or thoughts.

Personality: He is an enigmatic person who tends to shy away from larger crowds. He wants to be a human, and doesn’t really want people to know that he is anything else. He also sees himself as a monster, which caused him to follow the lifestyle of his father-vampire (not his biological father, but the vampire who took care of him) which is “vegetarian.” Which means he doesn’t drink human {blood,} he drinks the blood of animals. It is a hard life because it is never really filling, but he doesn’t want to be a monster. He also has a very bad temper and gets frustrated easily. But he is very smart because he has been around for a century plus some.

Appearance: A heavenly perfect person. His skin is so white and pale that it seems almost transparent. He has dark circles under his eyes that make him look like he is extremely tired. From a distance, he looks very skinny, but closer, you can see he is perfectly sculpted and has perfect muscles, not too large but he’s not wimpy either. He looks like a clothed statue from Greek times, when only idealistic figures were sculpted into statues. His features are slightly angular. (picture coming soon)

History: Born in 1902, Edmund lived life as the son in a middle class family. He was an only child. When he was sixteen years old, he went hunting with his father. In the woods, savage, real vampires attacked him and his father. His father sadly did not survive the brutal, {blood} sucking attack, but he barely escaped. He somehow made it out of the woods, through days of agonizing transformation, until he made it to a large house. He collapsed from pain and hunger in front of it.

The next time he woke, he was lying in a bed. A young man who was only ten years older than him (or so it seemed) nursed him back to health. But he would not let him satisfy his craving by drinking the humans, which he desired. Instead he fed him the {blood} of deer and bears around, so Edmund gradually began to resist the cravings, though they not completely disappear.

Eventually he began going to school again, starting in an earlier grade. He graduated from high school, but could not stay any longer because people would start to notice that he and his “father” never changed their looks or age. So they began moving, starting the process over and over again, moving anywhere they had not been before. Also, they could not move to extremely sunny places. It is merely a myth that vampires cannot go out in the sun because they’ll be burned by the sun, but they are affected by it, in that their skin is turned to a reflective diamond-like state. It is so bright when the sun reflects off them that it will blind you like staring into the sun for a few seconds.

About twenty years after his rebirth as a vampire, Edmund’s father found a lady about his age who was dying of a disease. She was never married and had no one to take care of her as she died. She was poor, as most people were at that time. Edmund’s father found her, and decided that he would turn him into one of them. He bit her, putting his poison into her bloodstream, and after three days of agony, she was one of them. She became his “mother.”

Edmund hasn’t seen too much action, but has gotten into his share of fights due to his bad temper. He also fights vampires who attempt to hunt humans in his town, scaring them off.

Now it's time for the common sense police to take a look at this. AKA, me.

Now then, it's not that I don't like vampire characters, but sometimes people take the strengths a little too far. He needs more weaknesses, such as the fact that he is a vampire. I can understand about the stake and holy water, because no character carries that(or at least I can't think of one)

He should be weak against holy or Light magic, at the very least. Weak against anything related to light, even if he can survive sunlight. That's just good clean common sense. Also, add more about his weaknesses, just one way of death isn't good for a starting character.

Finally, downgrade his fangs. If he starts going crazy with those the BA is going to be overrun with vampires, seeing as their his only weapons.

Aw man, I knew this was going to happen. (But there was that little off-chance, right?) But I'm only using a Stephenie Meyer {model} for this.

Oh all right then! But what do you mean "downgrade his teeth?" His teeth are weak. There is no power there except the venom. He only bites people, if he gets a hold of them. And I ONLY said he was stronger than humans--nothing about Hylians, aliens, etc etc.

Fine, then I shall adjust him.

Edmund Callin

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Name: Edmund Callin
Age: 104 (or 88, as a vampire)
Birthday: January 1st, 1902
Race: Vampire
Gender: Male
Hair: light brown with natural blondish streaks and slightly longish, but perfect and fluffy (Kind of like this but fluffier and a different color http://us.tv1.yimg.com/tv.yahoo.com/...mtv05vma_k.jpg)
Eyes: change depending on his appetite. When he is hungry, they will be black, but when he is not, or in a good mood, they are light and butterscotch. Or anywhere in between those.

Weight: eh…does 160 make sense? (I’m totally bad with boys’ standard weights)

Height: 5’11”

Weapon: His teeth. They’re really sharp, but from a normal glance won’t seem unnaturally sharp. They don’t protrude from his mouth or anything. And they’re pearly white. But they have venom in them. The venom will turn the other person into a vampire, unless their species is immune to it. Unless he sucks all their blood out, or a lot out, then they will die. He also owns a gun but he doesn’t use it like ever, or even take it anywhere from his home.

Strengths: Faster than your average human. Stronger for his size, more than a human. But not unbeatably strong. Just stronger than humans, his prey. This is how a vampire must be, as a lion is stronger than a lamb. Also extremely good looking, so as to attract his prey, like a fly to a Venus flytrap. He also has better senses than a human. (He can smell better and hear better) Basically, he is the perfect predator for humans.

Weakness: He isn’t that good of a fighter, really. He doesn’t usually fight at all. He is only strong from being what he is. He is not a trained warrior, which does put him at a disadvantage. Also, unlike most vampires, (since he does not feed off human {blood}) he is only immortal until he is killed in battle. He cannot die of sickness or starvation or related things. He CAN, however, be stabbed in a vital organ and killed, shot in the head and killed...etc. He is weaker than he should be from feeding on only animal blood.


Personality: He is an enigmatic person who tends to shy away from larger crowds. He wants to be a human, and doesn’t really want people to know that he is anything else. He also sees himself as a monster, which caused him to follow the lifestyle of his father-vampire (not his biological father, but the vampire who took care of him) which is “vegetarian.” Which means he doesn’t drink human {blood,} he drinks the blood of animals. It is a hard life because it is never really filling, but he doesn’t want to be a monster. He also has a very bad temper and gets frustrated easily. But he is very smart because he has been around for a century plus some.

Appearance: A heavenly perfect person. His skin is so white and pale that it seems almost transparent. He has dark circles under his eyes that make him look like he is extremely tired. From a distance, he looks very skinny, but closer, you can see he is perfectly sculpted and has perfect muscles, not too large but he’s not wimpy either. He looks like a clothed statue from Greek times, when only idealistic figures were sculpted into statues. His features are slightly angular. (picture coming soon) He dresses in formally casual clothes most of the time.

History: Born in 1902, Edmund lived life as the son in a middle class family. He was an only child. When he was sixteen years old, he went hunting with his father. In the woods, savage, real vampires attacked him and his father. His father sadly did not survive the brutal, {blood} sucking attack, but he barely escaped. He somehow made it out of the woods, through days of agonizing transformation, until he made it to a large house. He collapsed from pain and hunger in front of it.

The next time he woke, he was lying in a bed. A young man who was only ten years older than him (or so it seemed) nursed him back to health. But he would not let him satisfy his craving by drinking the humans, which he desired. Instead he fed him the {blood} of deer and bears around, so Edmund gradually began to resist the cravings, though they not completely disappear.

Eventually he began going to school again, starting in an earlier grade. He graduated from high school, but could not stay any longer because people would start to notice that he and his “father” never changed their looks or age. So they began moving, starting the process over and over again, moving anywhere they had not been before. Also, they could not move to extremely sunny places. It is merely a myth that vampires cannot go out in the sun because they’ll be burned by the sun, but they are affected by it, in that their skin is turned to a reflective diamond-like state. It is so bright when the sun reflects off them that it will blind you like staring into the sun for a few seconds.

About twenty years after his rebirth as a vampire, Edmund’s father found a lady about his age who was dying of a disease. She was never married and had no one to take care of her as she died. She was poor, as most people were at that time. Edmund’s father found her, and decided that he would turn him into one of them. He bit her, putting his poison into her bloodstream, and after three days of agony, she was one of them. She became his “mother.”

Edmund hasn’t seen too much action, but has gotten into his share of fights due to his bad temper. He also fights vampires who attempt to hunt humans in his town, scaring them off.

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I hope that's better. I didn't mean to make him all powerful. >.< Just a completely and totally hot vampire with skillz. ^_^ (Enough with the excuses! XD)

Please say if there is more to be changed. I only want him perfect. ^_^

Now then, regardless of how "hot" you may think he is, you should know better . Now, what I meant for his teeth was that they are dangerous to a BA character's life, and should be limited. The sharpness is fine, but I don't want to let loose a character that could randomly attack, considering the fact that they are his only presumed weapons.

OK...so what should I do?

(But hottness rules all!) (Except personality) (That rules above all)