Tsuukai Ita

Name:Tsuukai Ita
Age:34
Race:Human
Sex:Male
Hair:Long dark purple hair. Usually tied back.
Eyes:yellow
Weight:210 pounds
Height:6'1

Weapon: Main weapon Saber. Secondary weapon bow. Also has daggers hidden in his cloak.

Armor:none

Strengths:Master of mental fighting (He uses diffrent tricks of the eye to confuse and startle his opponent). Master fencer and very accurate archer.
Weakness:Magic not only damanges him greatly but it stuns him because he dosent want to belive that it exists.
Skills/Magic:No real magic. But has a wide selection of small capsuls that can create smoke screens, flashes of light, fire, and somtimes holograms. He also implanted high powered magnets in his boots that can be turned on and off by a tap on the ground. the magnets are designed to repel metals in the ground giving the aprence that he is flying.

Personality: He is a trickster and cheater. Always breaks the breaks the law when the opertunity(sp) strikes. Not a stranger to brawls but prefers a good sword fight. No matter who it is he will always accept a challenge. Uses his "magic"(or what people think is magic) for surprise. He is also very well educated and can talk his way out of almost every thing if the situation arises.

Appearance:Wheres a black cloak with the hood over his head to hide his face because he is wanted by many diffrent countries. His facial features are preety normal but dose have a scar on his chin. His cloak usualy is wraped over his body. Under his cloak he wheres a red ripped shirt with black patches over it. he where a silver keltic cross on a chain. He where sevral spike braclets on his right arm silver and black glove on his left. Black jeans on his legs with a leather belt with a Emerald buckle. Wheres brown leather boots.

History: His mother was japanese and his father was english. His mother was the one to name him. His name roughly meaning thrill, pain(ita is his middle name but he uses it as his last name)

He Grew up in very well to do family and had a very normal childhood. After completing his education and being the highest in his class he decided to take a diffrent root then the one his parents laid out for him.

He started by stealing his towns most precious object. A emerald that now is placed on his belt buckle. But before he could skip town a old friend named Ralph stood in his way. After faling to talk his way out Ralph drew his sword even through he knew he could not win because Tsuukai was a fencing champion and black belt in ti jit sue(sp).

Ralph was quickly defeated when Tsuukai stabed his blade through Ralph's leg. He stole a horse and ran to germany where temptation took him and once again he went back to his stealing ways. This time he took the silver cross now around his neck. The athorites(sp) came quickly this time he shoot three of them with his bow killing one of them. He was chased for five day he was finaly was caught there was only one man who was still chasing him.

The man charged with his sword at Tsuukai only to be blocked by Tsuukai own blade. Not knowing Tsuukai skill with a sword he foolishly continued the fight. Tsuukai dominated the fight almost killing the man many times. When he was about to finaly kill the man Tsuukai was hit by a powerfull fire spell from the man. He was shoot onto his back by the power his sword flying toow far to reach. The man stepped on to Tsuukai chest pinning him down with his sword on Tsuukai heart about to push down when suddenly the man was stabbed by dagger the man fell limp. as Tsuukai grabed his sword and jumped on his horse and ran far away.

Currently he is nomad never staying in one place for two long. Still a theif and is always ready to shut somebody's big mouth. Often reffered to as the black rider he is feared by many and loved by none. Although a theif he will still fight for others if he feels there opponent has a unfair advantage.

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This was my first character I hope I did every thing right

Well, you could be a bit more descriptive with his weapons. For example, what does the saber look like? I'm sure most of us know, but it's good to use lots of detail.

Next, I have a slight problem with his weakness. How is he any more vulnerable to magic than anyone else? Does it make him sneeze purple gorillas? Explain.

Other than that, he seems fine.

There I edited it should make more sense now.

Okie dokie.

*Approved*

Thank You