Jade and Micralana

Name: Jade

Age: 18

Race: Human

Sex: Female

Hair: Blonde

Eyes: Green

Weight: 67 kg

Height: 5’9

Weapon: Angel sword Marshia (See below)

Angel Sword Marshia (Mar – Shee – Uh)
With every angel there was created an angel sword, to use against the forces of hell, to stop them from taking over the heavens. Each sword has a specific owner, although any angel, or part angel, can use it to its full power. If someone evil touches the sword it burns them, if someone neutral touches it, it can only be used as a sword. But if an angel touches it, it bursts into flames, and can have any element present combined with it to make it more powerful.

Armour: Enchanted bracelet, which creates a basic magical shield around the wearer, which can deflect weak magic and most physical attacks, and the angel wings, which are impenetrable, except when a daemon attacks, or it is dragon, or angel fire.

Strengths: Knows how to use the angel sword as a basic sword, is fast and agile, because she can use an angel’s wings.

Weakness: Doesn’t know much about sword fighting, is easily overwhelmed, and easily injured.

Skills/Magic: Jane has basic water based magic. Jade is able to make small waves in any body of water. She is also able to use the water to stop and opponent from moving forward, but nothing more. The element does not need to be present in order for jade to do this.

Personality: Jade is a bright and happy person, who is always willing to make a new friend. But because Jade is blonde she will often act as though she does not know much and be a bit dense. But when threatened she shows just how much she does know. Her favourite past time is reading. If she can get a seconds peace she will get out a book and read. Her favourite thing to do is to quote Yoda by saying “To quote a great Jedi Master ‘Do or do not. There is no try.’” As all girls her age where she comes from she will try and look nice for a boy she considers to be cute, to try and impress him.

Appearance: Jades blonde hair flows down to her elbow, and wears a pair of small round glasses that sit on her short stubby nose and small ears. Jade also has a small mouth with thin lips. She can be seen wearing either her blue t – shirt, red jacket, and green trousers, or her blue jacket, her black trousers, and her white t – shirt. Or another combination of these clothes. But no matter what she wears she will always have her white designer trainers on. Her angel wings, when she decides to use them, come from her shoulder blades, and have a wingspan of 5 meters. She has a bag on her back, which contains food and water, clothes, makeup and so on. Her bracelet is worn on her right wrist, and the angel sword is on her left hip.

History: Jade was a nice normal girl, born in Bradford in the year 2982, but moved to London when she was four. At the age of five she started school and, like most kids, got into trouble a lot through her school career.

She left primary school and went to secondary school, where she gained more knowledge, and her love for books. She read anything she could find. No matter how big it was. Her favourite was ‘Star Wars’ and her favourite quote from it soon became “Do or do not. There is no try.” Which she would tell anyone who told her not to even try and do something she wanted to.

She did well in her GCSE’s and went to college. After one and a half years of study she left to get work out in the big wide world. But she couldn’t find anywhere that would take her on as a member of staff.

On her 18th birthday her father took her to Lake Excal. This lake was said to have King Arthur’s legendary sword, Excalibur, at the bottom of it. People had searched for thousands of years but no one had found it yet. Three days later, on December the 31st in the year 2999, Jade and her dad went diving to the bottom of the lake to see if they could find the sword, Excalibur.

While diving Jade sow something glinting at the bottom of the lake, and, picking it up, took it to the surface. She climbed out of the lake and looked at it. What she had found was a sword, which flickered with some kind of mystical energy. She lifted it up to get a better view of it. It felt so light. Like it was made of cardboard, instead of metal.

Her father came up and asked if anything was wrong. To answer his question, Jade held out the sword. They both went to sleep happy that night. In the morning Jade discovered she had a voice in her head. The voice called itself Micralana the angel. At first Jade thought she had gone mad. But soon discovered she hadn’t, and got used to having the angel there. Soon after this all electrical equipment stopped working and magic replaced technology.

Jade trained for a couple of months, so she had some skill in the basics forms of water magic, and how to use the angel wings she now had whenever she wanted them, and how to change into the angel. She soon found out they both had to want to change in order for it to happen. When she had learned all this she packed her back pack full of food and water, some clothes and makeup, and then she left to help Micralana, who she had started calling Lana, on her quest.

To free the world and seal the devil and his demons in hell for another thousand years.

Name: Micralana (My – Cra – Larn – Uh)

Age: Older than time

Race: Angel

Sex: Female

Hair: Silver

Eyes: Silver

Weight: 67 kg

Height: 5’9

Weapon: Angel sword Marshia (See Below)

Angel Sword Marshia (Mar – Shee – Uh)
With every angel there was created an angel sword, to use against the forces of hell, to stop them from taking over the heavens. Each sword has a specific owner, although any angel, or part angel, can use it to its full power. If someone evil touches the sword it burns them, if someone neutral touches it, it can only be used as a sword. But if an angel touches it, it bursts into flames, and can have any element present combined with it to make it more powerful.

Armour: Enchanted bracelet, which creates a basic magical shield around the wearer, which can deflect weak magic and most physical attacks, and the angel wings, which are impenetrable, except when a daemon attacks, or it is dragon, or angel fire.

Strengths: When wounded a white light shines from the wound and it heals. Unless made by a demon sword. Can mix and element with the angel sword, if the element is available.

Weakness: If struck by a demon sword she must return control of the body to Jade. She can only stay out as long as her strength lasts, and she gets tired out quickly when fighting.

Skills/Magic: She is a good sword fighter, and knows how to use the true power of the angel sword.

Personality: Micralana is a very serious and down to earth angel whose main worry is getting her job done. But over the time where she was teaching Jade how to use a sword, she grew fond of her and will do anything she can to protect her. Even though they often argue over petty little things. Jade has also commented that Micralana has a funny sense of humour.

Appearance: Looks the same as Jade, but does not wear glasses. She also has an aura around her that shines as bright as a star.

History: Every 2000 years and angel is sent on a quest to find their angel sword and top seal the devil in hell. The quest fell on Micralana to complete it. She watched as her sword spun out into space and eventually winked out as it past through time. She searched for ages, trying to find her sword. Going through many planets and times to find it. But a human girl, named Jade, found it first.

Now Micralana and Jade inhabit the same body and are able to change when both want to. But not otherwise. Micralana watched as Jade packed her bag and left her home, her family, and all her friends behind. She secretly admires Jade for this, as she knows it must have been tough to leave without saying good bye.

Most of Micralana’s past is shrouded in mystery, which is because the angel has not spoken of her past, nor will she ever want to. Both she and jade are now close friends and work well together. Both of them will protect the other if they can.

Ok, first, I need you to expand armor for both Jade and Micralana. What is this magic bracelet thingie you speak of? And then, I need you to further explain Jade's water magic. What does it do? how does it work? and so on.

Seems okay, except for those couple of things.

I've done that now. Are they approved?

Yep, much better.

*Approved*