NOT DONE,in the making of making them

They Go together,read and find out.They are two different beings.will be explained in BIO
Name: Dorven&Yingling raw troll
Race:Spirit&Troll
Age:50076
Eyes:All black,and other guys is red
Dorven's items:none
Yingling's Items:dragon skin pack,Club size of small tree,Mistic sword of Dorven(unbrakeable),Hard skin for armor,red clothes.
Sex:male&male
hair:None for Dorven&red for yingling
weight:None&1023 pounds
height:always different&9.5 feet tall
magic/skills for Dorven :He is a spirit that can possess objects,people and animals.He can control the dead.He can fire darkness blasts,and can shapeshift.floats because he has no legs.
magic/skills for yingling:Can shoot fire blasts.Can run super fast,Is superstrong,and can shapeshift.
Weaknesses for Dorven:is weak to light,water,and thunder blasts
Weaknesses for yingling:cant swim,scared of heights,and weak in the neck.
Appearance for Dorven: Ball of black energy with Black eyes.
Appearance for yingling:Tall,muscular,and tan skined.He looks like a human but is much taller,and a little less smart.he has common clothes that are red with redboots on.The pack on his back and the sword on his red belt.club in hand.
pesonality for Dorven:A very angry,and mean,lier,and cheater he will do any thing to get his way.He feels no love or mercy,only greed.
personality for yingling:Has no personality Dorven is his master he only feels the need to listen to his master.
Bio: Dorven was born in Shamshire and raised by mother.She then died from the flu when he was 5.so he was on the streets till a stranger whos name is not important came and took him in.

the man was a warrior,and a necromancer.He taught him every thing he knew.Then he became stronger than him and killed him.
Dorven then became a strong king and invader.He Had a kingdom bigger than the usa which was very big for his time.no one could oppose him in battle,till a man finally killed him in battle but before he died he sent his life into his unbrakeable sword.

50046 years later a troll was walking down a path and saw a sword.He went and pulled it out of the tree it was in.The moment he touched it power over took him and Dorven became his master.his hair bacame red as did his eyes,and Dorven appeared.

I'm Done look,give tips or approve

I can't approve but as a tip I think it'd be better if you made each a seperate character thread, then made the bios more in-depth. The mods usually go for longer, really descriptive. They want people to be able to tell your fighting style, how you generally write, etc. from an approval.

Just a tip.