Lily [Revised]

I've decided to redo all my Elementals since my first ones were a bit lacking in structure. Here's my Earth Elemental, Lily.

Name: Lily
Age: 22
Race: Elemental
Sex: Female
Hair: Long, straight, black
Eyes: Black
Weight: 61 kg
Height: 165 cm

Weapon: Two steel tonfas forged from the metals of planet Force. This metal is unbreakable. Her tonfas also have a special ability to change forms. Because of her ablilty to manipulate energy, Lily is the only one who can transform these weapons. Throughout the years, Lily has worked on her weapons. They now have six different modes: Tonfa Mode, Katana Mode, Nun Chuck Mode, Bazooka Mode, Bo Staff Mode, and Pistol Mode.

Strengths: Lily is the last Earth Elemental. She can create and control all forms of Earth. She cannot be hurt by any form of Earth. Lily is an expert in weaponry. She can easily adjust to any weapon given to her, whether it is a sword, a sai, or a staff. She has a special ability that she was born with that allows her to steal her opponent’s energy and use it as her own.

Weakness: Lily still carries around the weakness of low stamina. She can fight, but cannot exert too much energy or she will get tired easily. She is also very bad at taking too many hits at once.

Skills/Magic: Throughout the years, Lily has trained to strengthen her Elemental skills by enhancing older ones and developing new ones.

Spirit Steal – Lily’s signature skill. As stated before, in order to keep her energy up, she must steal her opponent’s energy. This can only be done if her opponent is in some type of contact with her weapon, either directly or indirectly. The energy is stored inside her weapons and she can either use it as her own or fire it back as an attack. She can also absorb any type of energy attack.

Stone Armor – A defensive move that is triggered automatically. When Lily is about to be hit by an attack, a patch of earth armor covers where she is about to be hit. This move is activated without Lily’s consent. Even if she is unconscious, the Stone Armor will still set off.

Bazooka Blast – While in Bazooka Mode, Lily can fire large boulders shrouded in Earth Elemental energy.

Rocky Rapid Fire – While in Pistol Mode, Lily can shoot small pebbles shrouded in Earth Elemental energy like bullets.

Elemental Forms: There are four forms an Elemental can reach. In each form, an Elemental’s appearance changes and their energy, speed, and physical strength increase. Also, depending on how strong their battle spirit is they can lose control of their mind in different forms. Meaning they will not have control of their body, all they will think about is destroying their opponent. At the moment, Lily has a strong battle spirit.

Elemental Base – This is an Elemental’s first form. In this form they look like they regularly do. An Elemental can use their element and have the regular speed and strength they normally do in Base form. This is the form an Elemental starts out with. No matter how weak an Elemental’s battle spirit is they will always maintain control of their mind.

Elemental Boost – This is an Elemental’s second form. In this form their iris and changes to the color of their Elemental aura. In Lily’s case, they turn green. In Boost form an Elemental’s energy, speed, and strength increase by quite a lot. In order to achieve this form, the user must be completely surrounded by their element. If the user has a weak battle spirit, then they will lose control of their mind.

Elemental Ascended – This is an Elemental’s third form. In this form their hair turns into their element. In Lily’s case, her hair turns to grass. In Ascended form the user can summon or create their element anywhere they wish. In Base and Boost form they can only create their element near them. In this form, the user is in control of enough Elemental energy to destroy a city. In order to achieve this form, the user must be in Boost form and then insert their element inside their body. If the user has a medium battle spirit, then they will lose control of their mind.

Elemental Hyper – This is an Elemental’s fourth and final form. In this form they turn completely into their element. In Lily’s case, she becomes a body of rock and earth. In Hyper form the user can disperse themselves and reform anytime they want. This is the most powerful of all the Elemental forms. In this form, the user is in control of enough Elemental energy to destroy the planet. Also, the user cannot be hurt by any type of physical attack. The only way to damage an Elemental in this form is to use their elemental weakness, in Lily’s case, lighting. In order to achieve this form, the user must be in Ascended form and then insert the stone from their necklace into the tattoo on their left arm. The user must have a very strong battle spirit to keep control of their mind.

Personality: Lily likes to tease and play with her friends, but when it comes to fighting, she is very serious. She is very free spirited, but would never leave her friends. The one thing she hates is people who don’t do anything with their lives, or in other words, laziness.

Appearance: Lily has long, black hair that she wears in a ponytail. She also wears her bangs out that covers her forehead. Lily wears a light green shirt. She has white capris and a brown belt that holds her two steel tonfas. She also wears lime flip-flops. She has the Chinese symbol of earth tattooed on her left arm and wears a steel necklace with a green colored Flint Marble on it.

History: Lily was born on the planet Force. Lily’s parents were two Earth Elementals. Her Mother was a 20 year old named Rose and his Father was a 23 year old named Rocky. They lived next to a family Fire Elementals, who also just gave birth to a child. The child’s name was Blaze. The two families were very friendly with each other and Lily and Blaze were able to be together at many family gatherings. At Blaze’s first birthday, Blaze and Lily met Frost, Tidra, Lumis, Shadow, Zephia, and Flash for the first time.

Closing on Lily’s birthday, a news bulletin informed the planet that four Southern Elementals came to the North. The chief of police decided to attack the south and stop the four Elementals, which he dubbed, The Outcasts. This worried Rose, for she never liked the fact that they discriminated against the South. Rocky wasn’t concerned until those four destroyed the entire army and focused on the planet. Luckily, the Northern Elementals were able to keep them out with an Elemental Barrier. Rocky got together with his neighbors: Torch, Aqua, Night, Gust, and Static. Together they build prototypes of escape pods. So, if there were ever an emergency, they would all be able to escape.

Six months passed. It was a week before Blaze’s second birthday and everyone was getting ready. Just then, a large explosion shook the land. The Elemental Barrier shrouding the planet disappeared. The Outcasts landed on the planet and their leader, a Metal Elemental named Alloy, struck the planet’s core and drove it out with his powers. The planet would implode in a few hours and there was no chance of evacuation. Well, there was one way.

Torch called up the others and told them to bring their children. After a lot of hard work, the fathers were able to build eight fully working escape pods. Since the children were the eight types of Elementals, the parents decided to send them away so they can rebuild their people. Since, Lumis and Shadow, being five years old, were the oldest of the eight, they were in charge of protecting the other six. After the coordinates were set, the eight Elementals took off. Unfortunately, Lumis accidentally pressed the wrong button for three of the Elementals and they landed on a different planet.

After a year of traveling through space, they arrived at their destination. A primitive planet named Earth. As soon as they landed, Lumis and Shadow made it a priority to take care of the other three: Blaze, Lily, and Frost. Blaze and Lily were three and Frost was only two. They wandered around the unknown planet when they found a small abandoned house. It seemed someone just moved out. It was in great shape. Upon further inspection of the area, a small town was only a kilometer away.

Three years passed. The three young ones were now able to fend for themselves. They were able to catch lots of food in the woods using their abilities. Lily was able to create separate rooms with her improved powers, Blaze was able to cook food, and Frost was able to freeze the food for storage.

Eleven years passed and the five Elementals gained experience and enhanced powers. They even were able to reach the second Elemental Form. It was at this time, Lumis decided to look for the other three. Shadow had kept the coordinates and Lumis was able to change them accordingly to find the planet the other three were on. They each went to their individual pods and set out.

After a month in space, they landed on a planet called Warlob. It was a barren and empty planet. Animals still lived on it, but hope began to grow thin that the three were still alive. The five began to wander around the desolate planet. Suddenly, a strong gust of wind blew them away and knocked them down. Lumis immediately got up and stated that must have been the Wind Elemental, Zephia. They continued waking when they saw a girl with brown hair and tattered clothing. Lumis said that this was Zephia. Lily questioned him and asked how he knew. Lumis pointed out the Chinese symbol of wind on her left arm. They began to approach her. When she saw them, she attacked with a large burst of wind. The others were knocked down by the windblast, but Lumis was able to dodge it. He ran up to Zephia and showed her his tattoo. She immediately stopped from attacking. She recognized it was Lumis and hugged him. Lumis asked her where Tidra and Flash were. Zephia pointed over the horizon and said she would lead him to them. Lumis woke the others up and they continued to walk with a reunited friend.

Zephia stopped and told the others to stay, while she would get Tidra and talk with her. She knew that Tidra might attack the five like she did earlier. A few minutes passed and Zephia walked back with Tidra. When Tidra saw Frost, she ran up to her and hugged her. At first, Frost and the others were very confused. Lumis reminded the others that Tidra and Frost were sisters. Frost burst into tears when she heard this and held her long lost sister. Shadow interrupted and told them there was still one more Elemental left: Flash, the Lightning Elemental. Lumis agreed with Shadow, but Zephia and Tidra warned them about how dangerous Flash has gotten.

The now seven Elementals continued to walk on when suddenly a bolt of lightning struck down and knocked out Lumis and Shadow. The others looked up and saw Flash on a large mound of rock and dirt. Zephia and Tidra asked Flash to come down and talk. Flash just shook his head and knocked them out with another lightning bolt. Now only Blaze, Lily, and Frost were left standing. Flash sent down another bolt, but Lily and Frost shielded it off and they were both knocked out.

When Lily regained consciousness, she saw Blaze and Flash laughing. Blaze helped her up and explained how Flash was just testing him. After the others awoke, they left Warlob. The Elementals were reunited once and forever more.

Back on Earth, Lumis explained how the Outcasts were very powerful and that they needed to at least reach Elemental Ascended in order to fight them. Shadow noted that staying in a large group might hinder training. The others nodded in agreement. So the eight separated into three groups: Blaze, Lily, and Frost; Lumis and Shadow; and Zephia, Tidra and Flash.

Out of the three in her group, Lily was the most dedicated with training. She worked on her weapons everyday, strengthening them and experimenting with new modes. Lily sparred by herself five times a week. On the weekends she would goof of with Blaze and Frost, often going to new places. She and Blaze remained the closest friends out of all the Elementals.

Five years of intense, and some not so intense, training had passed when Lumis contacted all the Elementals and told them to meet at the landing point. All of them had reached the third Elemental Form and Lumis said it was time for the next level. When they were all there he showed them a piece of paper with writing on it. It said: Use these stones. We will come to Earth when you have fully mastered their power, The Outcasts. Lumis opened his hand and revealed eight necklaces. Each one had a stone of a different color. Lumis gave them out to the corresponding Elemental. Shadow explained what these necklaces were. They were made from a mineral called Elemental Marble. There were eight forms of Elemental Marble: Volcano Marble, Flint Marble, Glacier Marble, Day Marble, Night Marble, Zephyr Marble, Beach Marble, and Surge Marble. These marbles were used to reach the final Elemental form.

The Elementals spent six months mastering the marble and they all were able to achieve Elemental Hyper form. They continued training and waited for Alloy so they could final put the people’s spirits to rest.

Heh, it's very nice to see that you're really lengthening their bios, very cool. Her weapon seems a bit odd, but after reading her skills, it doesn't seem too powerful. Anyway...

*Approved*