Essence Rytori--Improved version

Name: Essence Rytori

Age: 13

Race: Half Human, Half Pure fire essence

Sex: Female

Hair: Long, Black Hair

Eyes: Red eyes with large pupils

Weight: 100 lbs.

Height: 5’3”

Weapon: A grey and silver scimitar with the power of fire in it (Scimitar is a curved sword)

Armor: A Steel shield

Appearance: Overall, is beautiful
Head: Essence has long Black hair with sparkling red eyes that have large pupils. She always seems to smile.

Upper Body: She has a Black Tank top on with a red scarf wrapped around her neck. Her left hand has a fire symbol on it.

Lower body: She has a Black velvet skirt with red sparkles on it.

Feet: She has black leather clogs on her feet

Strengths: Good at sword play, advantage in a volcano and mountain battlefields

Weaknesses: Can’t be dipped in any water, afraid of water, not that strong without sword or sheild, doesn't have that good of stamina, faints after she turns back to a human after turning into a dragon from rage

Skills/magic:
Dragon Flames: Turns into dragon when angry
Phoenix Wings: Grows Fire wings
Phoenix feathers: Turns into Phoenix
Fire fists: Puts arms on fire

Personality: Is very nice most of the time. Hate people who stare at her for her beauty. Loves nice people. She is very serious in battle and is totally focused on it. She is always looking for an adventure.

Bio: In the small village of Ryor a girl is born into a laboratory. Her name is Essence Rytori and is soon taken in for lab tests. The scientists found a special orb in a volcano. The orb of fire, the research they did would be tested today. They would insert the orb into her body by surgery. The death risk of surgery on an infant is very high. No mistakes could be made. After the long hours, the orb was inserted. They would study her, to see if she could control fire.

After 7 long years, the orb started to take effect. Essence was given a raw chicken and logs. As they watched her, she just sat there with her stomach growling. Soon after, she grew out her imagination and imagined she could make fire. She pointed her fingers at the logs and focused. Sparks shot from the logs and soon made a fire. She jumped in surprise and backed from it. She could control fire.

Soon some of them gathered to Essence and explained to her that why she was in a lab. Why she was being watched and why she could control fire. She fell in rage and started to yell at them, like why were she chosen and not someone else. Soon she pasted out and they started to carry her to bed. Soon afterward, her anger transformed her. She turned into a Dragon. The scientists fled and Essence transformed back to herself and fainted, the lab was just a pile of ash now.

Essence, age 13 now, has survived in the hyrule woods for some time. She is looking for an adventure to try to master these powers of hers. So far, no luck. She always goes to hyrule for a look on any adventurers. The only ones she had asked, to go with them, laughed at her and left, without her. She wants to find a traveler to go on an adventure. She has had no luck for so long, she would even kill someone. She is still waiting for another to come. None have came yet.

Not too shabby. Although the weaknesses could be better.

But does that mean it's approved? I added 2 more weaknesses for good measure ^_^

Yeah, seems to be fine.

*Approved*