Dante Osylon (os-i-lon)

Name: Dante Osylon (os-i-lon)

Age: 21

Race: Elven

Sex: Male

Hair: Dante has long brown hair that extends down to his shoulders and flips out at the ends. Half of his bangs are covering his left eye, and the other half is flipped back with the rest of his hair.

Eyes: Dante has steely-blue eyes that look as if they are piercing into your conscience as he looks at you. His left eye is covered by a lock of brown hair.

Weight: He weighs around 175 lbs., and has a lean muscular build.

Height: He is around 6'4, and has long, muscly legs and arms.

Weapon: He is usually seen with either his fearsome whip, Scavenger; or his dreadful long-sword, Eclipse. They both shine in battle as if hungry for blood.

Armor: Dante is usually found with chain mail under a long red tailcoat and white leather padded undershirt.

Strengths: He is a more formidable opponent with Scavenger, but is nearing perfection with Eclipse. Dante is very quick about his wits, and has extremely fast reflexes. If you ever confront him in battle, it is best not to get too close, for he is best at a short-range distance.

Weakness: Dante is one of the less-powerful fighters in the Battle Arena. He can be brought down easily with a well-placed sword slash or arrow strike. He lacks at a long range distance, and his armor can break easily when facing a more fearsome opponent.

Skills/Magic: He has but only one skill in the uses of magic, and that is Illusion. Dante can hide himself among the shadows for more than 5 minutes, and from the shadows he can stalk his prey, challenging them to walk into his turf.

Personality: Dante has no indication toward evil nor for good. He is a quiet, unspoken champion with many feats under his belt. If pushed, he will challenge you to face him in the darkness, where he will make your every nightmare come true. . . . .

Appearance: Dante has long brown hair extending down to his shoulders, and a half of his bangs covering his left steely-blue eye. He wears a vest of padded leather and a gown of chain-mail covered by his white undershirt. Above all this, he wears a long red tailcoat with a leather belt tied around his loose jeans. The buckle head itself looks like a ram's head.

History: Dante grew up in the elven capital, Ellesmera. (OOC: Ellesmera is the elven capital in the Inheritance Trilogy by Christopher Paolini) BIC: His parents came to call him Dante, and taught him the skills of magic and swordsmanship. He was found to be insufficient in almost every area of magic but one. This was the area of Illusion. Dante excelled and in a year had totally mastered Illusion. Like all elves, his swordsmanship was superior to all but the strongest of elven warriors. Though he was found to have unmatched ability with a whip, whom he took to like a fish to water. He is now wandering distant lands in search of adventure and wisdom in honing his battle skills.

Can any mods, or whoever has the authority, approve this character for me?

Anyone there?

Ok, first off, please, please, try to refrain from posting more than once to gain your character some attention. Figure out who is capable of approving characters, and PM them asking if they could approve your character.

And unfortunately, even though this is a well built character, he is lacking in the quality of his bio. I need you to try and lengthen it, even if you have to add new events or stretch ones that you currently have. The form you used to write the bio was also jumbled, and not neccesarily easy to read.

Anyway, just some minor touch ups needed.