my character

Name: Yeerno
Age:17
Race:Advanced Human- A race of humans who long ago ascended to the heavens
Gender:Male
Hair: Brown and short and spiky
Eye color: blue
Weight: Around average (i am not good with numbers of any kind)
Height: average
Armour: A small jewel on his chest that protects from minor attacks(like paper cuts and daggers unless poisoned)
Weapon: An average sword made of iron
Strengths: Fast and fairly strong
Weaknesses: Large objects as cannot fly with them attached and darkness
Skills/magic: retractable wings enable flight(limited time only and must be light no heavy objects other than sword) And basic fire and healing spells
Appearance: Wears no shirt and red pants. skin is very very white, wings are like an angels but can be retracted but takes alot of concentration. He has no shoes and has a determined and serious look
Personality:Serious and determined in his mission and does not joke. always thinks things through very quickly but completely
Bio: Sent to the earth by his father the sky king to vanquish evil as a rite of passage. He grew up as a prince and always knew that he would have to face evil so he began training with the sky monks when he was 7. father and mother were kind but strict and never had many friends other than a peasant named Moi and a sky dragon named Berew. Berew will accompany him on his quest only as transportation(Berew is coward in battle) His quest is to drive evil from the land and assume his rightful place as king of the sky kingdom. participates in battle arenas for money so he can get food and supplies for his quest.

anyone there (echo echo echo)

Everything needs to be lengthened on the whole. Also, try to come up with actual number for his height and weight. It would greatly help with his description.

Name: Yeerno
Age:17
Race:Advanced Human- A race of humans who long ago ascended to the heavens
Gender:Male
Hair: Brown and short and spiky
Eye color: blue
Weight: about 135 maybe, he is muscular
Height: 6 and a half feet maybe
Armour: A small jewel on his chest that protects from minor attacks(like paper cuts and daggers unless poisoned)
Weapon: An average sword made of iron crested with the insignia of the sky kingdom
Strengths: Fast and fairly strong
Weaknesses: Large objects as cannot fly with them attached and darkness
Skills/magic: retractable wings enable flight(limited time only and must be light no heavy objects other than sword) And basic fire and healing spells
Appearance: Wears no shirt and red pants. skin is very very white, wings are like an angels but can be retracted but takes alot of concentration. He has no shoes and has a determined and serious look muscular
Personality:Serious and determined in his mission and does not joke. always thinks things through very quickly but completely
Bio: Sent to the earth by his father the sky king to vanquish evil as a rite of passage. He grew up as a prince and always knew that he would have to face evil so he began training with the sky monks when he was 7. father and mother were kind but strict and never had many friends other than a peasant named Moi and a sky dragon named Berew. Berew will accompany him on his quest only as transportation(Berew is coward in battle) His quest is to drive evil from the land and assume his rightful place as king of the sky kingdom. participates in battle arenas for money so he can get food and supplies for his quest. his people were once normal human beings but they figured out how to ascend to the skys and used their magic to build castles in the sky and as a rite of passage for all future kings the prince must descend to the Earth and vanquish evil whenever it rears its ugly head until current kings says that it is enough.

Ok, you did improve it, but unfortunately, everything must still be lengthened. Try again, and if possible, space everything out so that it is easier to read. Oh, and someone who is six feet tall and muscular is going to weigh more than 135 lbs, so try raising that to where ever you think it seems right.