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Glab
Name: Glab
Age: Born at the begining of time Race: God Of Goblins Sex: Male Hair: None Eyes: Black Weight: 355 Height: 7feet 5inch Weapon: Dragon Bone Club,Crudely made bow. Armor: Dragon Bone Mail that covers whole body. Strengths:He is a God so he is immortal,He is superstrong and super fast. Weakness: He Is weak aganst water based attacks. Skills/Magic: Call:Makes goblins that follow his every command. Appearance: Dark green skin and black eyes.sharp teeth and pointed ears,Black animal skin shirt,and pants are his only clothes.he has a hooked nose. Personality: He is very hot temperd,and is quick to action.He Is very sly when he needs to be. Biography: When the godesses of hyrule made life they made goblins,The goblins prayed to the gods for a leader.Glab was made,in the very first year of life.Glab had battles unknown before his time which became widely known and praised among all goblin clans...his triumphs were many. Clan Narn, his chosen clan,respected him above all others. His first child,born of Narsa a warrior elf's daughter, was both strong and clever and handsome as well.They named him Morn.His second child also a son,born of Elain,was named Eroc,after his human grandfather.The family was complete. Suddenly things changed!! Both wives ran away with their sons.....what would be their fate? So first, he conquered the Elves at Uaero Bain.Later he won the confrontation with the Humans and finally the War of the Ordination. A place of honor in all communities that he entered, but also one of awe. His travels took him across the sea to a place where his people would rule. He is now searching for an opponnent that might actually be able to challenge him.
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Re: Glab
Okay...you need to scrap this character and start over. There are too many things wrong with this character. You're grammar/spelling needs a lot of work. And I'm sort of wondering how this guy is a "god" and yet he's walking around with a bone club and a "crudely made bow" for weapons. I mean, when I think "god", I don't think of bone clubs as weapons... So, this isn't approved. Change it up and resubmit it later.
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