Bestona(second try)

Ooc: It's been quite a while(a week or two), and i'm getting impatient for her to get approved, so i'll post her again.

Name: Bestona[mix of names of two female godesses, Bastet(egypt.) and Bellona(greek)](Nick-named Bessy)
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Race: Human-Cat Demon Hyrbid
Eyes: Blue(normal form) or Red(true form) long hair
Hair: Black(normal form) or White(true form)
Height: 5'0"
Weight: 97lbs.

Weapon: Her claws, which come out whenever she wants. Her claws are indestructable.
Armor: Bestona doesn't use armor.

Strengths: Bestona is a cat-like being, making her agile and having quick reflexes. She is very athletic, and she also has cat senses(smelling, hearing, etc.) She can transform into her true form, which enhances her abilities greatly.
Weakness: She is not good against brute strength, but has speed to make up for it. Her cat senses may be quite useful, but she is sensative to strong odors and loud noises. In her true form, her tail is also a weakness.
Magic/Skills: Bestona doesn't use magic.

Appearance(normal form): Bestona is your average, black haired, blue eyed girl. She wears a standard japanese school uniform, and nothing has special to it. Her claws are actually her fingernails, which grow quite long and sharp. She is athletic, due to martial arts training, and she is good-looking.
(True Form): In her true form, Bestona gains cat-like features. She grows a tail, cat ears, and her claws grow longer. The color of her eyes and hair change, and her hair grows, a bit longer. She doesn't have fur on her body, except for her cat ears, and her tail.

Personality: Bestona is a soft-hearted and kind. She controls her anger quite well, and is sensetive to what others say about her. When her anger gets out of hand, which it rarely does, she becomes quite the mean girl. She is considerate and mindful of others, and treats her friends well. Bestona is quite the fighter, but she also understands fighting doesn't solve everything.

Bio: Bestona was quite the average girl, but had a strange past. No one knew about her past, for she was adopted at the age of 3. Not even her family she has now doesn't know much about her! Her entire life, she seemed to be different, and felt as if she was an outsider. What she did not know, is that her real parents were an odd couple. Her mother, being a cat demon, and her father, being a normal human, met in egypt. Her father went on an excavation of an ancient tomb, and discovered Bestona's mother. Being a demon, she would never age, so her father was quite perplexed about her being there. Her mother had a unique ability to shape-shift into a human, so she and Bestona's father became quite the odd couple. Bestona is a unique mix of her father's war-like atitude, with her mother's cat-like features. Bestona was born in a normal town, but when she was born, her parents vanished without a trace. Her parents had put her in a an adoption home, and left her, for some strange reason. While she grew up, people started picking on her at school, and she became a soft-hearted person. One day, at the age of 11, Bestona was being picked on at school. Her anger couldn't be held, and she transformed into her true form, which she never knew about. She began to attack people around her, and a school officer had to tackle her down to knock her uncouncious. She woke up on her bed at home, and her step-parents were next to her. They told her that she couldn't go to school for a long time, because of her 'uniqueness', so she was home-schooled until the age of 16. During those 5 years, Bestona was put into martial arts class, so she could control her anger, and learn to fight, for any reason. She was then put back into public school, where she learned to cope with those around her. She gained some friends, and told no one about her secret, until one day, a mysterious boy in a yellow tunic changed everything......and even help her find out about her past! Dun-dun-dun!

Ooc: Ok, I remade her. Is it good now?

Yeah, weapons and armors are a little small, but everything else makes up for that, but, the end of the bio is a little corny, Dun-dun-dun. But, if you think that's ok, and seeing as despite paragraphing, it is well written, I can let it slide.

*Approved*

Originally Posted by Linkrules

Yeah, weapons and armors are a little small, but everything else makes up for that, but, the end of the bio is a little corny, Dun-dun-dun. But, if you think that's ok, and seeing as despite paragraphing, it is well written, I can let it slide.

yes! i know the ending was corny, and the bio was kinda dumb, but i had no ideas left. anyway, thanks for approving her!